Insanity aside, this marks the start of Book Two of this story. Yes, things are going to get more sick and twisted. Also cloppy and weird. I've probably let this one go on for a bit longer than it should have, and as a result, I think the end of the chapter isn't as good as it could have been. But still, it's cloppy and sticky, and should work well enough. Next chapter will probably have more story development, and hopefully the sexings will be better. But for now, enjoy the depravity
Well, at least you admit this was shameless, because it's also borderline retarded too. Twilight has a high mental fortitude. She even lasted the longest against Discord, so I don't see how she could be so easily taken by this thing, not to mention they could use unicorn magic to read the victims mind to find out who's doing this, not to mention that Celestia can warp right to where Twilight is, so there's no reason Luna couldn't either.
There are a myriad of ways for this to be easily resolved, and it would be obvious who the perpetrator is, especially since they don't wear clothes and can smell things much better than a person. I guess no police force or CSI exits in Ponyville, and once again, it's changing the characters to stupid to make all this possible in the first place. This is just Molestia, but with Twilight.
I'm deeply disappointed . Since it's now stuck on somepony else, it's time to repeat the same crap again. At least I got a few laughs, but this is so very boring.
its even worse with cherilee cause her victims are closer at hand. i qonder how twi's going to react when she finds out? also is twi futa now or is she full stallion?
So, the 'lust' is off to find another mare in hopes that It'll find a true whatever the fuck they were called again. Also, I loved the Cheerilee scene. So much win. Now, get to Twi confronting her mares! Ah neeeeeeeeeeeed it!
894735 But if I don't read it, how do I know if I don't like it? Besides, these types of fics are always the best for a laugh. Seriously, the amount of mental stretching you did to make this fetish possible in the first place for this story is hilarious on it's own.
You might as well mark this as a AU since you made up some serious bullshit for this.
894681 you try having another personality using your body to do naughty things for a few nights then try fighting it when it has full control of your estrus cycle and plenty of extra aphrodisiac type ability's to convince/force you to do things. mental fortitude is only a temporary fix for a problem that needs to be completely routed in order for the temptations to stop. you've obviously had no experience with such things. yes twi has a strong mental fortitude but also she is quite prone to break down when such things involve certain figures she cares deeply about. and she is the typical anti social shut in that could easily be affected by such things... therefor perfect target the extra magic is just a plus.
894737 Heh, I've got some metaphors involved I'll have to tell ya about privately. Don't want to give too much away for the other readers. I felt a bit like I was grasping at straws with the Cheerilee scene. I swear, never going to do threesomes ever again. Too much to keep track of XD
894771 I dunno. Stop after the first couple chapters? I always have to ask the question, when someone says "This story sucks, I read through all 34 chapters and it was total shit!" I find myself wanting to grab a hold of the guy's neck and say "So what made you keep reading?"
I make no apologies for what I write. If you like it, fine. If you hate it, fine.
That being said, yes, I also find clop to be very, very funny.
894779 Twilight has spells, Twilight has reasoning, etc. This story makes her stupid for the sake of clop, there's no other real reason, don't you get it? Don't worry about it, this is a fetish clop, there is no reasoning at all. No need to get upset now.
Like I said, myriad of ways to fix this. If anything, her stubborn nature of trying to figure this out and fix it would've made a nice counter balance. It all happened way to fast and way to easily, and I'm sure that something taking over your mind and forcing you would warrent a letter or two, even if she wouldn't exactly write the whole truth at first.
It's also pretty easy to spot the mare with a dick. And a estrus cycle in the world of MLP? What's next, a fanfic of a Care Bear hibernating in the winter time? It's those little things that make this really stupid.
The only character that acted with any sense was Rarity.
894795 But how could I stop? My sides were killing me, there was no way I could.
894808 no i'm just giving reasons for how he mighta set up the sceen so it woulda worked. however we all have our own head cannon about these types of story's. so meh cheers bro
Twilight at least tried to resist it were Cheerilee just picks the first 2 FILLIES that she can (which Twilight only did because she couldn't get Rarity)
And Cheerilee and Twilight are in some way related
And lets not forget that Applebloom is pretty much a slut ....
I would hope that with that curse Cherliee´s dick would disappear too, but i guess it won´t, what disappear would be like with Twi her urges. But why did it work on her when she wasn´t even a Stargazer to begin with? I thought it would only truly work on Stargazers, but looks like it can hit anypony it wants to...
That said, i wonder why only Shy and RD visited Twi, what about Pinke and AJ? Rarity is no wonder though Luna shouldn´t be surprised that she hates Twi now. I mean, Rarity doesn´t know about the curse right? And even if she´d still would be furious at Twi after getting Sweetie pregnant.
Also you must really like earth ponies. Or really dislike them whatever kind of angle you prefer. Till now we got one raped Unicorn and 6 raped Eart ponies. Gues Pegasi have the chance to fly away. It´s good to have wings.
895096 I would recommend you go back and re-read the non-cloppy parts. In particular Luna's dream. Also, three months is a good long while to be all pent up, isn't it?
895123 To be honest, I really don't like Pinkie. I have trouble trying to come up with anything for her. Just too fricking hyper And yeah, it's funny but most of the background ponies I like are all earth ponies. Though that will change as the chapters go on. And, to point it out, Sweetie Belle is a unicorn. So that's been two unicorns raped.
An Unicorn who can´t use magic (yet) is Earth pony with a horn.
Oh? Another mare turned raptist cause of the curse or... will dat curse finds its way in Twi´s mind yet again just when she has Shy and Dash over??? Oh please be the latter, after all it´s called Twilight´s Midnight Violations and not everypony´s violations on fillies. Or maybe some "normal" sex with both parties agreeing to it? Like Dash for the kinks or Shy cause she´s too nice and wants to cheer Twi up? Or cause she wants a foal but is too scared to get any stallions to know closely enough so Futatwi is a welcome oppurtunity? So many possibilities so little time...
Say though, will this get big enough for three books? Cause i dunno but if there´s only two then there shouldn´t have been much need to divid them into books.
895278 Hmm.. True, I see what ya mean. But still, technically she's still a unicorn. Just inexperienced. And I can't say too much without giving away the story. Don't think this will go past Book Two. Not unless I decide to try and hook a sequel. Again, that depends on how insane I'm feeling at the time
Enjoy this placeholder comment until I have time to finish reading.
EDIT: Now that I've finally finished, I can only wonder why the next chapter isn't out yet? There were some spelling errors in there, but in a chapter this size catching all the things like that would be pretty difficult so I forgive you.
And I also can't help but wonder: What would happen if Cheerilee met Twilight now? Would it be time for an epic boss battle? And when is Twilight gonna run into AJ and SB again? So many questions, and all of them answered by a little not-so-harmless rape...
896088 Yeah, because game reviewers make games too, right? I can't cook, so I'll never complain about the charcoal briquet of a steak I got. A coach will totally play with his team out in the field, uniformed and all.
And considering what get's past the mods (like giant monkey on a typewriter fics that get deleted by the author in less than a week), maybe I should write something. The main problem I have is with descriptions.
MotherOfGod.jpg You didn't disappoint when you said it would get cloppier and more twisted. Though the bit in the beginning that took place years before/ago..wonder where that ties in. /issilly
Hm, i can get why Sweetie or the other two mares with Twi´s foal won´t come to her, the two don´t know it was her and Sweetie is bound by Rarity. But why wouldn´t good ol' stubborn AJ not get to Twi, to her stallion, to demand some time with her in 3 months? Is she bound by her brother/Granny Smith or is there nother reason why AJ wouldn´t try to see Twi in all that time? Or did she try and Twi especially ignored her/stood away from her? But then again she did found the time to shoot pics of them here and then...
Also Cherliee will feel like crap once she comes back to her senses, realizing what she did to two of her students. Wonder if Luna can find her before more happens.
My personal theory is that the curse is running amok:
There is NO other Stargazer out there but Twilight. I mean, if there would then the curse would not had any reason to go apeshit and grow Twi a dick to rape mares with every night, now would it?! And if it would search for other STargazers then it would search first for relatives like he parents or her big brother, changed names be damned. But it doesn´t, it gets into other subjects to turn them into raptists. However, it doesn´t stay longer but a day so far cause till now none of them are the reason for its existence, the continuity of the Stargazer bloodline. And for that it does need Twilight Sparkle and her virile Unicorn seed in the end. Which means now that Luna lost control over it, it will either return over time to her by itself or Luna will ask Twilight to host this curse in her body/mind yet again to stop it from running amok and turning other ponies left and right into raptists. But this time it would be a battle between Twi and her curse again of who holds control. Maybe Luna, her friends and her mares would be able to help Twi to keep it under control, till she gets used to be the master of her curse and not let the curse rule her? Well, i do hope it will get something to that kind of plot. Depressed and sad Twi isn´t a fair sight to watch, nor is her giant cock, but a Twi who *redoes* herself with being the only on to keep the curse at bay but only if she accepts the help of her friends, which would include Rarity o.o, would be quite something of a return of Magic master Twilight Sparkle.
The Blessing seems to have some form of a stockholm effect on the victims. AJ, Sweetie and Applebloom have all been depicted as wanting more after the event.
And as for why Cheerilee was picked, the blessing wants to repopulate the stargazers. It may have detected the stargazer essence contained within Sweetie, or simply Cheerilee's desire to have foals, and then blessed the only viable adult in the immediate vicinity, noticed its mistake and moved on, leaving futaCheerilee to deal with the fallout
First point, dood: The title hints that Twilight or her previous victims will be conducting the rape train, all of a sudden, Cheerilee is now a stargazer? That came out of left field, dood.
Second Point, dood: I already know how this book will end, Twilight with her dick hilted in Cheerilee's plot while Luna gets rid of the curse again, maybe this time, not messing up and having us find out Scootaloo or Octavia is a stargazer too, and then we all go "If Twilight was the last Stargazer, what the fuck is with all these other 'Stargazers'?"
Interesting read, Sad Twilight hurts souls, Futacheerilee needs to get bent over her desk by the best pony and go for a ride, Luna needs to stop having brain farts when it comes to rapists and (in Cheerilee's case) Pedophiles/Fillyphiles, I don't count Twilight as one as she had BIG MARE sex with several other females, Sweetie Belle was at the wrong place at the wrong time.
So...a spell to make sure there's more stargazers. And a stargazer descendant goes out and impregnates a bunch of mares. And then she's stopped and for some reason it starts again. The sense is..limited, at best.
Why would we be in cells? I have a nice vacation home right on the shores of the Lake of Fire. You, Tyral, Peppy, and the rest of these guys should all come over some time. We can grill some unborn fetuses and baby seals, get some drinks, make a party out of it. Just cause we'll all be in Hell doesn't mean we can't enjoy it .
It's all in the Old Magic. Think of the spell like a robot that's been given a command. It has been told to make sure that the Stargazer line never dies out. So it tries to accomplish that in the most efficient way possible: have a single stallion impregnate as many mares as possible. But there's a catch. This ISN'T just a robot. This is a spell fueled by a fragment of a goddess' soul. It can't be stopped, it can't be undone, and it can't be reprogrammed. The best they can do is try to suppress it. Luna thought Twilight was the last of the Stargazer line, and most likely stopped the spell by simply making her uncontrollable anymore. But the Old Magic was stronger than that. If it can't control Twilight, it will take someone else. There are two possibilities here: either Cheerilee really is another Stargazer descendant and we get more rape-tastic fun. Or she isn't a descendant, and the Magic's new plan is to impregnate Twilight, have her give birth to a foal, and then start again from there. Either way, this is gonna be FANTASTIC.
tl;dr: It all comes down to the fact that they're trying to stop a semi-intelligent spell with the power of a goddess and nopony knows how to, or if it's even possible at all.
FINALLY! I've been wanting to see the next chapter of this fic - FOREVERRRRRRRRRR! Like the way it's going, and that NaturalGlitch guy needs to go read another fic if he doesn't like this one. I know for a fact that there are several fics, both clop and non, that have the characters acting more, if not completely canon. Examples; Four of Two - clop, but tasteful. Two Cups of Tea - Non-clop, sadfic, very moving. Also, thank you for giving Twilight a way, even if it's borderline (or maybe it is?) stalker, to see her mares.
Also, if Twi and AJ get together now, methinks it could even just become a straight ship between the two. AJ certainly wants Twilight, and goodness knows Twilight still wants AJ... I can see the potential for a degree of solace in that.
What I wonder is why Twilight never tried to go after Luna. Seems to me that she would be a much more ideal mare even than AJ.
The writing..... It never stops!
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Insanity aside, this marks the start of Book Two of this story. Yes, things are going to get more sick and twisted. Also cloppy and weird.
I've probably let this one go on for a bit longer than it should have, and as a result, I think the end of the chapter isn't as good as it could have been. But still, it's cloppy and sticky, and should work well enough. Next chapter will probably have more story development, and hopefully the sexings will be better. But for now, enjoy the depravity
Sweet Jesus this is a long chapter, and only the start.
Still looking forward to the rest.
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"Sweet Jesus this is (a) long..."
That's what Apple Bloom said...
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Touché
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I was hoping Twilight would get all rapey again...
BRAVO SIR BRAVO!
Well, at least you admit this was shameless, because it's also borderline retarded too. Twilight has a high mental fortitude. She even lasted the longest against Discord, so I don't see how she could be so easily taken by this thing, not to mention they could use unicorn magic to read the victims mind to find out who's doing this, not to mention that Celestia can warp right to where Twilight is, so there's no reason Luna couldn't either.
There are a myriad of ways for this to be easily resolved, and it would be obvious who the perpetrator is, especially since they don't wear clothes and can smell things much better than a person. I guess no police force or CSI exits in Ponyville, and once again, it's changing the characters to stupid to make all this possible in the first place. This is just Molestia, but with Twilight.
I'm deeply disappointed . Since it's now stuck on somepony else, it's time to repeat the same crap again. At least I got a few laughs, but this is so very boring.
its even worse with cherilee cause her victims are closer at hand. i qonder how twi's going to react when she finds out?
also is twi futa now or is she full stallion?
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She's still futa. She's just having a hard time accepting that she is now, rather than just a mare like before.
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Don't like it? Don't gotta read it.
So, the 'lust' is off to find another mare in hopes that It'll find a true whatever the fuck they were called again. Also, I loved the Cheerilee scene. So much win. Now, get to Twi confronting her mares! Ah neeeeeeeeeeeed it!
894735 But if I don't read it, how do I know if I don't like it? Besides, these types of fics are always the best for a laugh. Seriously, the amount of mental stretching you did to make this fetish possible in the first place for this story is hilarious on it's own.
You might as well mark this as a AU since you made up some serious bullshit for this.
894681 you try having another personality using your body to do naughty things for a few nights then try fighting it when it has full control of your estrus cycle and plenty of extra aphrodisiac type ability's to convince/force you to do things. mental fortitude is only a temporary fix for a problem that needs to be completely routed in order for the temptations to stop. you've obviously had no experience with such things. yes twi has a strong mental fortitude but also she is quite prone to break down when such things involve certain figures she cares deeply about. and she is the typical anti social shut in that could easily be affected by such things... therefor perfect target the extra magic is just a plus.
894735 YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES! ... umm futa twi is awesome twi... don't laugh.
894737
Heh, I've got some metaphors involved I'll have to tell ya about privately. Don't want to give too much away for the other readers. I felt a bit like I was grasping at straws with the Cheerilee scene. I swear, never going to do threesomes ever again. Too much to keep track of XD
894771
I dunno. Stop after the first couple chapters? I always have to ask the question, when someone says "This story sucks, I read through all 34 chapters and it was total shit!" I find myself wanting to grab a hold of the guy's neck and say "So what made you keep reading?"
I make no apologies for what I write. If you like it, fine. If you hate it, fine.
That being said, yes, I also find clop to be very, very funny.
894507
I didnt expect Cheerlie to start molesting
hay i just realized something... you marvelous basterd you left scootaloo out of it why you be so cruel to the poor filly?
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So many plots....
So little time to figure out what to stick in them...
894779 Twilight has spells, Twilight has reasoning, etc. This story makes her stupid for the sake of clop, there's no other real reason, don't you get it? Don't worry about it, this is a fetish clop, there is no reasoning at all. No need to get upset now.
Like I said, myriad of ways to fix this. If anything, her stubborn nature of trying to figure this out and fix it would've made a nice counter balance. It all happened way to fast and way to easily, and I'm sure that something taking over your mind and forcing you would warrent a letter or two, even if she wouldn't exactly write the whole truth at first.
It's also pretty easy to spot the mare with a dick. And a estrus cycle in the world of MLP? What's next, a fanfic of a Care Bear hibernating in the winter time? It's those little things that make this really stupid.
The only character that acted with any sense was Rarity.
894795 But how could I stop? My sides were killing me, there was no way I could.
894808 no i'm just giving reasons for how he mighta set up the sceen so it woulda worked. however we all have our own head cannon about these types of story's. so meh
cheers bro
and already saw one of those.
Just realized, this chapter is so long, the web page descends into a black abyss before I get to the end of the chapter.
I really am taking everyone to pony hell dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
LOL Diamond Tiara had it coming
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Today we learned 2 things.
Twilight at least tried to resist it were Cheerilee just picks the first 2 FILLIES that she can (which Twilight only did because she couldn't get Rarity)
And Cheerilee and Twilight are in some way related
And lets not forget that Applebloom is pretty much a slut ....
I would hope that with that curse Cherliee´s dick would disappear too, but i guess it won´t, what disappear would be like with Twi her urges. But why did it work on her when she wasn´t even a Stargazer to begin with?
I thought it would only truly work on Stargazers, but looks like it can hit anypony it wants to...
That said, i wonder why only Shy and RD visited Twi, what about Pinke and AJ? Rarity is no wonder though Luna shouldn´t be surprised that she hates Twi now. I mean, Rarity doesn´t know about the curse right? And even if she´d still would be furious at Twi after getting Sweetie pregnant.
Also you must really like earth ponies. Or really dislike them whatever kind of angle you prefer. Till now we got one raped Unicorn and 6 raped Eart ponies. Gues Pegasi have the chance to fly away. It´s good to have wings.
895096
I would recommend you go back and re-read the non-cloppy parts. In particular Luna's dream.
Also, three months is a good long while to be all pent up, isn't it?
895123
To be honest, I really don't like Pinkie. I have trouble trying to come up with anything for her. Just too fricking hyper
And yeah, it's funny but most of the background ponies I like are all earth ponies. Though that will change as the chapters go on.
And, to point it out, Sweetie Belle is a unicorn. So that's been two unicorns raped.
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Okay I think my mind blacked out somewhere halfway through because I can't remember any of that happening xD
895217
An Unicorn who can´t use magic (yet) is Earth pony with a horn.
Oh?
Another mare turned raptist cause of the curse or... will dat curse finds its way in Twi´s mind yet again just when she has Shy and Dash over??? Oh please be the latter, after all it´s called Twilight´s Midnight Violations and not everypony´s violations on fillies. Or maybe some "normal" sex with both parties agreeing to it? Like Dash for the kinks or Shy cause she´s too nice and wants to cheer Twi up? Or cause she wants a foal but is too scared to get any stallions to know closely enough so Futatwi is a welcome oppurtunity? So many possibilities so little time...
Say though, will this get big enough for three books? Cause i dunno but if there´s only two then there shouldn´t have been much need to divid them into books.
I...This.....HELL CALLS TO US AND WE DANCE ALONG TO ITS MERRY TUNE. DANCING DOWN TO THE DEPTHS WHERE WE WILL ALL BURN AND SUFFER FOR OUR SINS.
At least I will, I dunno about you lot. Well, actually I'll be taking the cell next to AribanDeTyral at this rate.
895278
Hmm.. True, I see what ya mean. But still, technically she's still a unicorn. Just inexperienced.
And I can't say too much without giving away the story. Don't think this will go past Book Two. Not unless I decide to try and hook a sequel. Again, that depends on how insane I'm feeling at the time
895286
Actually....
Honestly, I'm not going to hell for this. I've already got reservations someplace else, at the request of a very charming individual...
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Interesting turn of events. Though I must admit I was kinda hoping for more reactions from the mane6 to Twilight's new... addition.
894681
*Looks at your profile*
Yup I knew it, no stories.
I guess its true those who don't write, teach
19,000 words in one chapter? Really?
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Enjoy this placeholder comment until I have time to finish reading.
EDIT: Now that I've finally finished, I can only wonder why the next chapter isn't out yet? There were some spelling errors in there, but in a chapter this size catching all the things like that would be pretty difficult so I forgive you.
And I also can't help but wonder: What would happen if Cheerilee met Twilight now? Would it be time for an epic boss battle? And when is Twilight gonna run into AJ and SB again? So many questions, and all of them answered by a little not-so-harmless rape...
895384 Well....tits. I hoped that if I followed the piper then at least they would be on for the whole ride.
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No one said this ride only seated one...
896088 Yeah, because game reviewers make games too, right? I can't cook, so I'll never complain about the charcoal briquet of a steak I got. A coach will totally play with his team out in the field, uniformed and all.
And considering what get's past the mods (like giant monkey on a typewriter fics that get deleted by the author in less than a week), maybe I should write something. The main problem I have is with descriptions.
OMG I DIDNT THINK I WAS GONNA REACH THE END, great chapter as always
-Mr. Carnage
MotherOfGod.jpg You didn't disappoint when you said it would get cloppier and more twisted. Though the bit in the beginning that took place years before/ago..wonder where that ties in. /issilly
Hm, i can get why Sweetie or the other two mares with Twi´s foal won´t come to her, the two don´t know it was her and Sweetie is bound by Rarity. But why wouldn´t good ol' stubborn AJ not get to Twi, to her stallion, to demand some time with her in 3 months? Is she bound by her brother/Granny Smith or is there nother reason why AJ wouldn´t try to see Twi in all that time? Or did she try and Twi especially ignored her/stood away from her? But then again she did found the time to shoot pics of them here and then...
Also Cherliee will feel like crap once she comes back to her senses, realizing what she did to two of her students.
Wonder if Luna can find her before more happens.
My personal theory is that the curse is running amok:
There is NO other Stargazer out there but Twilight. I mean, if there would then the curse would not had any reason to go apeshit and grow Twi a dick to rape mares with every night, now would it?! And if it would search for other STargazers then it would search first for relatives like he parents or her big brother, changed names be damned. But it doesn´t, it gets into other subjects to turn them into raptists.
However, it doesn´t stay longer but a day so far cause till now none of them are the reason for its existence, the continuity of the Stargazer bloodline. And for that it does need Twilight Sparkle and her virile Unicorn seed in the end.
Which means now that Luna lost control over it, it will either return over time to her by itself or Luna will ask Twilight to host this curse in her body/mind yet again to stop it from running amok and turning other ponies left and right into raptists. But this time it would be a battle between Twi and her curse again of who holds control. Maybe Luna, her friends and her mares would be able to help Twi to keep it under control, till she gets used to be the master of her curse and not let the curse rule her?
Well, i do hope it will get something to that kind of plot. Depressed and sad Twi isn´t a fair sight to watch, nor is her giant cock, but a Twi who *redoes* herself with being the only on to keep the curse at bay but only if she accepts the help of her friends, which would include Rarity o.o, would be quite something of a return of Magic master Twilight Sparkle.
My thoughts on this.
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I want to see if all the pregnant mares will stay woth their 'stallions' except the one who gave up their foal... Also... Cheerilee is new Pedobear
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The Blessing seems to have some form of a stockholm effect on the victims. AJ, Sweetie and Applebloom have all been depicted as wanting more after the event.
And as for why Cheerilee was picked, the blessing wants to repopulate the stargazers. It may have detected the stargazer essence contained within Sweetie, or simply Cheerilee's desire to have foals, and then blessed the only viable adult in the immediate vicinity, noticed its mistake and moved on, leaving futaCheerilee to deal with the fallout
First point, dood: The title hints that Twilight or her previous victims will be conducting the rape train, all of a sudden, Cheerilee is now a stargazer? That came out of left field, dood.
Second Point, dood: I already know how this book will end, Twilight with her dick hilted in Cheerilee's plot while Luna gets rid of the curse again, maybe this time, not messing up and having us find out Scootaloo or Octavia is a stargazer too, and then we all go "If Twilight was the last Stargazer, what the fuck is with all these other 'Stargazers'?"
Interesting read, Sad Twilight hurts souls, Futacheerilee needs to get bent over her desk by the best pony and go for a ride, Luna needs to stop having brain farts when it comes to rapists and (in Cheerilee's case) Pedophiles/Fillyphiles, I don't count Twilight as one as she had BIG MARE sex with several other females, Sweetie Belle was at the wrong place at the wrong time.
Cheers, Dood.
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Just when you thought that the rape train has derrailed and crashed.... HERE COMES ANOTHER ONE WITHOUT BREAKS!
So...a spell to make sure there's more stargazers. And a stargazer descendant goes out and impregnates a bunch of mares. And then she's stopped and for some reason it starts again. The sense is..limited, at best.
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Why would we be in cells? I have a nice vacation home right on the shores of the Lake of Fire. You, Tyral, Peppy, and the rest of these guys should all come over some time. We can grill some unborn fetuses and baby seals, get some drinks, make a party out of it. Just cause we'll all be in Hell doesn't mean we can't enjoy it .
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It's all in the Old Magic. Think of the spell like a robot that's been given a command. It has been told to make sure that the Stargazer line never dies out. So it tries to accomplish that in the most efficient way possible: have a single stallion impregnate as many mares as possible. But there's a catch. This ISN'T just a robot. This is a spell fueled by a fragment of a goddess' soul. It can't be stopped, it can't be undone, and it can't be reprogrammed. The best they can do is try to suppress it. Luna thought Twilight was the last of the Stargazer line, and most likely stopped the spell by simply making her uncontrollable anymore. But the Old Magic was stronger than that. If it can't control Twilight, it will take someone else. There are two possibilities here: either Cheerilee really is another Stargazer descendant and we get more rape-tastic fun. Or she isn't a descendant, and the Magic's new plan is to impregnate Twilight, have her give birth to a foal, and then start again from there. Either way, this is gonna be FANTASTIC.
tl;dr: It all comes down to the fact that they're trying to stop a semi-intelligent spell with the power of a goddess and nopony knows how to, or if it's even possible at all.
FINALLY! I've been wanting to see the next chapter of this fic - FOREVERRRRRRRRRR! Like the way it's going, and that NaturalGlitch guy needs to go read another fic if he doesn't like this one. I know for a fact that there are several fics, both clop and non, that have the characters acting more, if not completely canon. Examples; Four of Two - clop, but tasteful. Two Cups of Tea - Non-clop, sadfic, very moving. Also, thank you for giving Twilight a way, even if it's borderline (or maybe it is?) stalker, to see her mares.
Why? Why?! Why does this fic turn me on?
Also, if Twi and AJ get together now, methinks it could even just become a straight ship between the two. AJ certainly wants Twilight, and goodness knows Twilight still wants AJ... I can see the potential for a degree of solace in that.
What I wonder is why Twilight never tried to go after Luna. Seems to me that she would be a much more ideal mare even than AJ.
Cutie Mark Crusaders mothers!
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You stick things in plots, not plots in things.
... Unless...
I have a few requests, AribanDeTyral.
1. Please stop deflowering fillies. This hurts my soul to the extent that I feel imminent damnation as a physical sensation.
2. Could you have the 'Blessing' mistake enough mares around Ponyville for Stargazers that all the maredicks offer evidence of them being victims?
3. Let Trixie be an actual Stargazer, and have her confront Twilight. Sexually.