I must be going even more insane. How the hell did this chapter get so fricking big!?
Twilight, you should know from experience. How does something just suddenly get so much bigger than it should be? . .. ... I'm still waiting for an answer, Twilight.
807218 She couldn't see with the sack over her head. No line of sight means only limited magics would work, provided she even knew the spells. Ain't ya ever played D&D?
Don't worry thpugh. Twi will have to conted with angry unicorn powers soon enough.
807217 It was Aloe, but still, do go ahead and reread As for AJ, she might take some time to come to grips with the fact that she really wants to be nothing more that Twilight's brood mare
807255 Either way, she wants and she's gonna do it. A lot. Know what we need now? Some anal, then switch to some good vaginal. Anal is best after all. I'd say just all anal, but you can't get a mare pregnant with her butt.
807266 True. But after a she-stallion's duty is done, it's all shore leave
I wanted to get into the head of one of Twi's victims this time, sort of a contrast to how messed up Twi's is now. Unfortunatly, I think AJ is almost as messed up now after all that
All this guy knows is... wait, no, this guy knows jack shit. Well, at least there's the slim (miniscule) chance of Twilust getting her Jimmy wet inside a Princess.
I lost my sense of shame in this chapter. I'm on the rape train. I'm glad you made Applejack her perfect mare and made her a virgin. Love it. Btw you did an awesome job with Twilight's and AJ's thoughts.
A wild pink khorne berserker appears. VIRGINS FOR THE SEX GOD!!! RAAAAAAWR!!!! Aaaaanyway... I am glad to finally find a piece of real literature that can sate a portion of my boundless perversion (Slaanesh is best chaos god.)... I find it infuriating that the only other fics like this (I count two exceptions other than this) are poorly written random waffly poop or trollfics. As for the chapter length: THE PENULTIMATE PENIS OF TWILIGHT SPARKLE KNOWS NO LIMITS!!! Up until this chapter I had been a little wanting as I kind of prefer to see things from the recieving end So I'm sure you can imagine my delight upon the Applejack PoV And as I'm sure you can also imagine I'd just love you to bits if you could do more from the victim's perspective... Pretty please? For me? Also I'm interested as to what will become of the males maybe some femdom? But if that's not your cup of T then that's all well and good. May Chaos bestow many a gift upon you and please please please please update a.s.a.p. I love you for writing this.
807381 only 4? you crazy pony. 4 is the number of the Mane 6 remaining... but as AribanDeTyral is probably planning to do.... ALL OF PONYVILLE's mares shall belong to Twi! That and he answered my earlier question of if the young ones safety, and to quote him... "FUCK NO. SPARKLE SPARKLE SPARKLE" don't believe? check earlier comments
807595 Poon for the Poon Throne! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png Also, I don't think Twilight is interested in stallions anymore. Why does she need one, when she's more of a stallion than they are now? Also, spending time with a stallion would just distract her from her goal. Now, that being said, I still haven't fully decided how or when I'm going to end all this. So keep your eyes pealed for any future developments.
809175 To be perfectly honest, I didn't want to complicate the rape scene any more dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png It would of drug the scene out too long, and taken away from the clop as well as Twilight's internal conflicts. Also, I'm lazy and didn't think about it at the time dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png In retrospect, though, I guess one has to remember that most unicorns don't know more than one or two magical spells, if any. For example, Rarity doesn't know how to do much of anything beyond levitating things and turning fabric into clothes. If anything, most unicorns are likely to know less magic than that. It seems that the majority of the background unicorns really only know how to levitate things, and it's likely that that would require to be able to see, or at least know the location of, what you're wanting to levitate. Most of my experience with how magic works comes from old table-top RPGs and games like D&D and Warhammer, and in them most spells require you to be able to see your target. So if you cover a spell-caster's eyes, there's very little he'd actually be able to do without first getting free. And if he doesn't know a spell that would be useful for that, he's nearly helpless.
Wait, if all mares have Sparkle Babby, and Sweetie Belle is on the Rape List... is Sweetie Belle going to have a Twilight Sparkle Babby? Also Me Gusta.
Mmmmmm, so deviously, destructively, perversely, deliciousssssss.
I truly hope you aren't planning on rushing through the story just to get updates sooner. I would rather see chapters this long twice a week, than see snippits every other day, if that makes sense.
Also, I don't know how far you've planned out the ending, but I had a half-baked idea I'd like to share via PM if you're interested?
812614 Heh, oh, I do have plans. I'm just letting the events between those plans flow naturally as I write. Sometimes things change, usually they stay the same. It just depends on how I feel at the time I'm writing them.
But then, I thought about it, and I realised that I'm ok with this. Being around all these ponies made me think a small part of my shriveled and blackened soul had somehow regrown, but it turns out it was just indigestion. Carry on good sir! mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw5292-Check.jpg
Damn, why is this story so wrong in so many levels and yet addicting at the same time?!, Why!, WHY!
Will Twilight get Lotus and Vera to complete the Spa ponies triplets set as brood mares?, also who will be next for the elements of harmony? I may suspect this pony: now with the help of this pony and probaby Twilight's other "victims"
Is it bad that even with sweetie bell's capture next chapter, I actually want twilight to get away and make her harem of mares? XD Seriously with this Ponyville's stallion problem is solved right? ;D
*Yes posting on this chapter because its still my favorite one, can't wait for it to be topped~*>> aka bad luna stop ruining my fun xD.
Erf... I must be insane
Wait, ok, scratch that.
I must be going even more insane. How the hell did this chapter get so fricking big!?
Twilight, you should know from experience. How does something just suddenly get so much bigger than it should be?
.
..
...
I'm still waiting for an answer, Twilight.
I'd read it but I'm awfully tired soooo.... it'll wait till this afternoon....
Twilight, Twilight, Twilight... When will you learn. Trixie is the only pony for you!
Oh, this updated. Well then. I know what I'm doing tomorrow.
To all of you out there that keep asking why I haven't had Twilight go after Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, or another random background pony yet, here is the explanation.
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Also
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Now, why is it that I imagine Dash, once she's the object of Twilight's desires, being fully okay with it?
"Hey, Dash. Look at what I've got for you."
"...meh. Why not? Do your thing, Twi."
...I'm seriously messed up. And I've been here too long.
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I doubt you are as messed up as me...
I used to have a shred of decency because of reading TAWs work. Now I have none. Let the raping continue
806804 Woo! AJ accepted it and it seems that Lotus wants some more. Or was it Aloe? Looks like I'll have to read it againdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png . Ohhhhhh, this is gonna be so much fun!
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She couldn't see with the sack over her head. No line of sight means only limited magics would work, provided she even knew the spells. Ain't ya ever played D&D?
Don't worry thpugh. Twi will have to conted with angry unicorn powers soon enough.
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It was Aloe, but still, do go ahead and reread
As for AJ, she might take some time to come to grips with the fact that she really wants to be nothing more that Twilight's brood mare
Why am I enjoying this?
807255 Either way, she wants and she's gonna do it. A lot. Know what we need now? Some anal, then switch to some good vaginal. Anal is best after all. I'd say just all anal, but you can't get a mare pregnant with her butt.
Oh my!
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True. But after a she-stallion's duty is done, it's all shore leave
I wanted to get into the head of one of Twi's victims this time, sort of a contrast to how messed up Twi's is now. Unfortunatly, I think AJ is almost as messed up now after all that
All this guy knows is... wait, no, this guy knows jack shit. Well, at least there's the slim (miniscule) chance of Twilust getting her Jimmy wet inside a Princess.
One down, Four more to go.
They should all be honoured to recieve such virile stallion seed
Full steam ahead on the rape train
Urgh this feels wrong to fap to *fap fap fap* but maybe its so wrong its right?
I lost my sense of shame in this chapter. I'm on the rape train.
I'm glad you made Applejack her perfect mare and made her a virgin. Love it.
Btw you did an awesome job with Twilight's and AJ's thoughts.
Her ankled were sore but untied
should be ankels i believe :P
anyway this is the first rape fanfic that is not disgusting xD
keep updating
A wild pink khorne berserker appears.
VIRGINS FOR THE SEX GOD!!! RAAAAAAWR!!!!
Aaaaanyway... I am glad to finally find a piece of real literature that can sate a portion of my boundless perversion (Slaanesh is best chaos god.)... I find it infuriating that the only other fics like this (I count two exceptions other than this) are poorly written random waffly poop or trollfics.
As for the chapter length: THE PENULTIMATE PENIS OF TWILIGHT SPARKLE KNOWS NO LIMITS!!!
Up until this chapter I had been a little wanting as I kind of prefer to see things from the recieving end So I'm sure you can imagine my delight upon the Applejack PoV And as I'm sure you can also imagine I'd just love you to bits if you could do more from the victim's perspective... Pretty please? For me?
Also I'm interested as to what will become of the males maybe some femdom? But if that's not your cup of T then that's all well and good.
May Chaos bestow many a gift upon you and please please please please update a.s.a.p.
I love you for writing this.
I think you're channeling Genghis Khan. This is a really good story. Also that Sweetie Belle comment in an earlier chapter... foreshadowing?
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only 4? you crazy pony. 4 is the number of the Mane 6 remaining... but as AribanDeTyral is probably planning to do.... ALL OF PONYVILLE's mares shall belong to Twi! That and he answered my earlier question of if the young ones safety, and to quote him... "FUCK NO. SPARKLE SPARKLE SPARKLE" don't believe? check earlier comments
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which of the other 4 will be next?
cant wait to find out
Hey. Psst.
*glances around*
Sparkle sparkle sparkle.
... Uhm... Well er...
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Thanks, but not disgusting? Hmm... I must be doing something wrong.. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Poon for the Poon Throne! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png Also, I don't think Twilight is interested in stallions anymore. Why does she need one, when she's more of a stallion than they are now? Also, spending time with a stallion would just distract her from her goal. Now, that being said, I still haven't fully decided how or when I'm going to end all this. So keep your eyes pealed for any future developments.
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METAL BAWKSES! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png
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To be perfectly honest, I didn't want to complicate the rape scene any more dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png It would of drug the scene out too long, and taken away from the clop as well as Twilight's internal conflicts. Also, I'm lazy and didn't think about it at the time dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png In retrospect, though, I guess one has to remember that most unicorns don't know more than one or two magical spells, if any. For example, Rarity doesn't know how to do much of anything beyond levitating things and turning fabric into clothes. If anything, most unicorns are likely to know less magic than that. It seems that the majority of the background unicorns really only know how to levitate things, and it's likely that that would require to be able to see, or at least know the location of, what you're wanting to levitate. Most of my experience with how magic works comes from old table-top RPGs and games like D&D and Warhammer, and in them most spells require you to be able to see your target. So if you cover a spell-caster's eyes, there's very little he'd actually be able to do without first getting free. And if he doesn't know a spell that would be useful for that, he's nearly helpless.
Also, this story almost reached 1000 views in 6 hours.
Holy crap!
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I mean the violence version of disgusting xD not any other kind
762162 that is now my skype picture....
W-what the hell?! Only 5 chapters...?! No, I need more! NO MORE RAPE MAKES TWILIGHT CRY~!
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Who said it was over with?
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Dood! There is only 5 chapters so far! It makes Twilight cry! Waiting sucks!
ALSO, ONE PICTURE FOR RBD RAPE SCENARIO:
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Yes. I crave more...of this story.
I do wonder what that foal will look like.
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As long as Derpy Remanes unraped you shall always have my thumbs up vote.
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Hmm... Ok, Derpy wont end up with a little Sparkle in her tummy....
At least not till the sequel dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Idea: Lotus goes out looking for answers/revenge regarding Aloe. Finds Twilight down a dark alley...
Wait, if all mares have Sparkle Babby, and Sweetie Belle is on the Rape List... is Sweetie Belle going to have a Twilight Sparkle Babby? Also Me Gusta.
Mmmmmm, so deviously, destructively, perversely, deliciousssssss.
I truly hope you aren't planning on rushing through the story just to get updates sooner. I would rather see chapters this long twice a week, than see snippits every other day, if that makes sense.
Also, I don't know how far you've planned out the ending, but I had a half-baked idea I'd like to share via PM if you're interested?
812614
Heh, oh, I do have plans. I'm just letting the events between those plans flow naturally as I write. Sometimes things change, usually they stay the same. It just depends on how I feel at the time I'm writing them.
And sure, can't say I'll use them, but if you want to throw ideas out, I ain't gonna be stopping ya. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
I hate myself for reading this.
And worse because I like it.
Please Continue
Can't wait to see what happens when Luna finally catches Twilight. I kind of want Twi to have her way with her.
This is currently my second favorite clopfic.
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You'll just have to wait and see. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
And what's the first? *starts programming the missiles* dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_future.png
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It has like ALL of my fetishes.
You know, at first I was like
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But then, I thought about it, and I realised that I'm ok with this. Being around all these ponies made me think a small part of my shriveled and blackened soul had somehow regrown, but it turns out it was just indigestion. Carry on good sir!
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how many chapters do you plan till luna caches twilight? or if you will it gets raped by twilight?
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Damn, why is this story so wrong in so many levels and yet addicting at the same time?!, Why!, WHY!
Will Twilight get Lotus and Vera to complete the Spa ponies triplets set as brood mares?, also who will be next for the elements of harmony? I may suspect this pony: now with the help of this pony and probaby Twilight's other "victims"
Is it bad that even with sweetie bell's capture next chapter, I actually want twilight to get away and make her harem of mares? XD Seriously with this Ponyville's stallion problem is solved right? ;D
*Yes posting on this chapter because its still my favorite one, can't wait for it to be topped~*>> aka bad luna stop ruining my fun xD.
811075 HOOVES DAMNIT