I would say that I'm going to hell for this...
But let's face it, it's going to get much, much worse...

775141 Oh boy! More please! For a second, I was afraid you'd dance around the rape scenes, but I must say, I was not disappoint. Absolutely love this and, the best part is, no males! I just wish I could add more faves dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png

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I was such a horrible tease with that first chapter, wasn't I? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png

But now that people have asked for it, I intend to give it to you. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_smile.png

All of it! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png

Every eye-bleed-causeing aspect of it!

YOU WILL SUBMIT TO THE DEPRAVITY!

775246 Submit? I give my body whole-heartedly and very willingly. If my body could be any more ready, I'd have already been sexed up by the rapist Twi.

Oh, and while I'm thinking about it, there's a point in there where you say 'could of' blah blah blah. Should be could have. Only thing that jumped out at me during the read.

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wait so who was the blue mare? ... wait a minute was it trixie?

if so twi's revenge

775302 Woo!

What is this decency you speak of?

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Random blue unicorn #46

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I feel I will go to hell for just reading this... let alone giving it a thumbs up.

I have to admit, I never thought I would openly track a clop-fic. I didn't pay full attention to the meaning of the description when I read the first chapter last night; I simply read it. I was shocked to see not mindless clop, but a well thought out, very well-written piece of literature. The characterization was superb; as spot-on as you can get when a pre-established develops a split personality that involves growing of male organs and raping other ponies. The story was interesting enough for me to keep an eye out for the second chapter.

I was not disappointed, either. While rape is in no way my cup of tea, you wrote this in a way that this was something a serious reader could enjoy without it being about the sex. You could have just turned her into a mindless sex machine, but you didn't. You bared her internal conflict to all who read, and made her horror and revulsion - at both herself and the sensations she was experiencing - plain as day. For the inclusion of this psychological aspect, you have my respect. I only hope that you will continue to play on the effects this state is having on her.

I'll keep reading as long as you keep it up and it doesn't just become another mindless clop-fic.

Cheers!

and the mind fucking begins.... even in the comments as well. Oh well, there goes the neighborhood. Now... what about the children? are they at least spared?

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FUCK NO!
SPARKLE SPARKLE SPARKLE!
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Now I can clearly see why we are all going to hell. It's gonna be a fun road! Now.... WE DEMAND MOAR!

This is such a horrible story.
So why do I like it?

775141 YOUR going to hell? fuck that, IM going to hell for reading it! (then again, well written )

Wait Wait Wait Twilight has a dick? Meh i still want her

Well i have learned somthing from this story that i will put into my work... no not rape but i did learn something from your work keep it up.

I am a horrible person, for laughing through the whole chapter.
But it was just so funny

The unicorn kept struggling and never tried magic? Bugged me the whole time.

807218 Of course, it never openly says this, nor is this probably the case (most likely just a mess-up on the author's part--no offense), I like to think that, since the bag was magical, it blocked out the unicorn's magic...

That being besides the point... I like this. (And I'm not generally one for rape-fics)

There are no brakes on the TWILIGHT RAPE-EXPRESS! Passing through Futaville, WTF City, and Dirty Mind Junction before arriving at our final destination in Pony Hell! We hope you enjoy every second of the ride, you sick freaks!

Four words:
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812452 Probably the most accurate description ever made, sir!

And how im going to enjoy...

I'd tell you what's wrong with this stuff, but I want to read moar dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
>If he had been in here, she would of likely kept him up all night
>I just cant leave it like that
>Ya know, she werks in the Mayor's office. The one that werks nights.
>Twilight watches as Ponyville passed her by
>nothing she did seemed to effect her slow
>effect where she placed a hoof
>Her tongue had reached it's goal
>I cant do this
>fire had professed it's love to her
>involuntarily helping it's abuser
>straining it's covering
>drained of it's will
>Her mind was a buzz with everything

>as if she had just ran a mile
I HATE IMPERIAL a.deviantart.net/avatars/r/a/ragefaceplz.png

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That was. . . unexpected

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Yes it gonna be one HELL of a ride

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Didn't just use the "Could of" instead of "could have", but also slipped into present tense more than a few times. Might want to watch that. Still, this story has grabbed my interest. :

Huh. So you're going, or were going, for a Jekyll/Hyde thing. Interesting, though there really isn't that much I'd consider clop worthy yet.

Eenope

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVmR877JRTI