795379 Why would you feel sorry for them? They should be proud. They're being had by the best penis in all of Equestria belonging to the best mare in all of Equestria.
795762 This. Yes please. I would love to see some filly fiddling.
795762 I foresee that coming as well, as I too remember the discussion about Sweetie Belle back in Chapter 2. And of course Applejack's turn is probably coming too as well after this chapter.
796823>>796801>>796272 Im thinking it's actually gonna be a CMC action... with how Twi's thoughts are already going? she wants MORE and by Celestia, or Trollesta at this point. All aboard the rape train!
Idea for a chapter. The Great and Powerful Trixie comes to Ponyville thinking she can catch the rapist. because she is, after all, Great and Powerful. Hilarity ensues. For the reader anyway.
The way this is written makes it interesting, dramatic and all that good stuff! I would say it's less of a shameless clopfic and more a plot-filled kinky one! Even her downfall is well done.
Ladies and gentlemen of the O5 board, I hereby nominate Twilight Sparkle to partake in Procedure 110 Montauk. I shall nominate her with extra emphasis if and when she violates a filly.
*the cock* You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile. *Twilight* Not if I find a way to get rid of you! *the cock* You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile. *Twilight* What do you mean there's no previous knowledge on this?? *the cock* You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile. *Twilight* You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile.
yeah.... pretty much what happened..... I can't wait to see Twi's new day-to-day mindset starting next chapter.....
*yawn* So tired, not sleeping through dear sister's day... I can hardly focus or stay awake anymore... *yawn* ... Oh, Hello Twilight Sparkle. You might want to stay indoors at night. There has been a terrifying rapist out on the streets. *yawn* I know...
>I cant keep doing this. I've got to go out some time, but I just cant like this >Twilight turned to one of her book >it was an convenient >She must have must came from >it only reminded her how she little more than a figure >it was him that would of been on the scene >went about it's single-minded >She had just came from the spa >slowly slipped back into it's hiding place
Honestly if this doesn't make me hell-bound with no breaks and or stops everything else I watch on youtube will. ( Smile HD, Cupcake HD, other stuff... )
Poor fillies that twi gets i'm not really into the whole filly rape thing... mainly because the most mentioned fillies are the CMC and welp... i'd prefer it if they didn't get some o' Twi's new cock. yet strangely i wouldn't mind it
awesome story so far you have my emotions mixed in the BEST OF WAYS! or do you?
Just so that everyone understand Twilight's state of mind right now, here is her progression. Illustrated for your amusement.
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For the win!!!! Feel kinda sorry for everyone Twi's dick is affecting, though.
Twilight is a freaky monster that needs to be stopped.
And yet here I am, tracking and reading and enjoying the story.
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You mean all the mare cooch she's ruined for anyone else? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
ok i have only one querstion is luna going to be joining in on the fun, probably rape twilight before she rapes someone else?
i'm seeing Sweetie Bell ending up one of Twilight's victims eventually, since the previous discussion she had with Rarity in an earlier chapter
795379 Why would you feel sorry for them? They should be proud. They're being had by the best penis in all of Equestria belonging to the best mare in all of Equestria.
795762 This. Yes please. I would love to see some filly fiddling.
795762 I'm actually expecting this too. It'd definitely be interesting what Rarity's reaction would be.
795762 I foresee that coming as well, as I too remember the discussion about Sweetie Belle back in Chapter 2. And of course Applejack's turn is probably coming too as well after this chapter.
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Im thinking it's actually gonna be a CMC action... with how Twi's thoughts are already going? she wants MORE and by Celestia, or Trollesta at this point. All aboard the rape train!
I kinda feel ashamed of myself for enjoying this story....
I enjoy it because its well written. And that's what I'm gonna keep telling myself.
Good work, keep the chapters coming
Oh dear, poor Twi. Instead of mastering her cock, the cock has mastered her.
"Twilight turned to one of her book," should read 'turned to one of her books'.
Idea for a chapter.
The Great and Powerful Trixie comes to Ponyville thinking she can catch the rapist. because she is, after all, Great and Powerful.
Hilarity ensues. For the reader anyway.
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Hahaha, true. Thank you for opening my eyes, Peppy.
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That's pretty much how Twilight would see things about now.
Of course, will that remain so.... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
At this point I'm not sure whether to scream, laugh, cry, or all three. its disturbingly well written keep up the good work
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The way this is written makes it interesting, dramatic and all that good stuff!
I would say it's less of a shameless clopfic and more a plot-filled kinky one!
Even her downfall is well done.
Sees update...
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Ladies and gentlemen of the O5 board, I hereby nominate Twilight Sparkle to partake in Procedure 110 Montauk. I shall nominate her with extra emphasis if and when she violates a filly.
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My reaction to this wonderful piece of fanfiction.
*the cock* You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile.
*Twilight* Not if I find a way to get rid of you!
*the cock* You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile.
*Twilight* What do you mean there's no previous knowledge on this??
*the cock* You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile.
*Twilight* You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile.
yeah.... pretty much what happened..... I can't wait to see Twi's new day-to-day mindset starting next chapter.....
*yawn*
So tired, not sleeping through dear sister's day...
I can hardly focus or stay awake anymore...
*yawn*
...
Oh, Hello Twilight Sparkle. You might want to stay indoors at night.
There has been a terrifying rapist out on the streets.
*yawn*
I know...
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MORE!!!!!!!!!!...that is all
>I cant keep doing this. I've got to go out some time, but I just cant like this
>Twilight turned to one of her book
>it was an convenient
>She must have must came from
>it only reminded her how she little more than a figure
>it was him that would of been on the scene
>went about it's single-minded
>She had just came from the spa
>slowly slipped back into it's hiding place
>Each step she took, she could feel the weight between her legs
I suggest changing that to "With each step she took" dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png
I thought there would be lesbian action in this instead you make me throw up twice!
I'll give this story a thumbs up for being well written.
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On the bright side of things...I didn't get aroused by such things so yeah-
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NOT a rapist :D
We're all going to hell. I can FEEL IT!
do i ? do i ? or do i just... SMILE!
Honestly if this doesn't make me hell-bound with no breaks and or stops everything else I watch on youtube will. ( Smile HD, Cupcake HD, other stuff... )
Poor fillies that twi gets i'm not really into the whole filly rape thing... mainly because the most mentioned fillies are the CMC and welp... i'd prefer it if they didn't get some o' Twi's new cock. yet strangely i wouldn't mind it
awesome story so far you have my emotions mixed in the BEST OF WAYS! or do you?
800615 don't you mean "resistance is futa-ile'.
802662 SWEETIE BELLE MUST BE NEXT
4504753 That moment when it turned out to be true.
795297 I'm still not sure what this Other voice in her mind is, but I'm glad to know these are her own thoughts.