I like where this is going. I must say that I wasn't expecting Cheerilee to be caught so soon. And that Cliffhanger has me like... Really confused... The only thing I can think of that Rainbow Dash read in a flyer that could make her excited would be her finally succeeding in her foalhood dreams.
I rather doubt the news of Cheerilee spread that quickly and I doubt it would make her happy. So yup... I don't know what that last part was about.
Awww, poor Cheerliee, i´m glad the dick´s gone but the damage´s done anyway. Diamond Tiara´s broken (not that i pity her much, but what she shouldn´t have went through that anyway, nopony so far should have.) and Applebloom´s addicted (aka thinks she´s in love with her teacher, similar to Sweetie Bell and Applejack and the other two mares towards Twilight) to Cheerliee. And Cheerliee still got the desires in her. Some parts at least.
Hmhm, thought so and Tia´s eplanantion confirms it: Spell grew, "matured" so to say and is now its own lord but with certain goals (to make sure Twi´s bloodline doesnt die out) and explicit desires (mostly to pregnant the "perfect" mares for her = her friends, ponies close to her). No wonder Luna couldn´t contaim it for long, still weird that it attacked Cheerliee first but i guess that´s cause it was frustrated and due the long absence of Twi´s body to fulfill its goals/desires almost crazy. Guess after blowing some steam off, it got its "sanity" back or whatever you might call those thoughts it has.
DAMN IT! The spell STILL isn´t back in Twi´s body but moving around somewhere, searching for her! Move it already, you blessing/curse thingie! Get back where you belong to so that Twilight Sparkle starts raping RD, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie and Rarity! And some Spike if possible, just for fun. You know to cross some more lines which shouldn´t be crossed. Oh wait, the spell might hit her when she´s going onto the market for the first time since months .... oh, it shall be GLORIOUS!
RD and some paper which makes her squee? That advertise must be really awesome... Wonderbolts are coming? Spitfire autograms for free?? Feather brushes 20% cheaper??? What is it?!
I hope RD´s not the next one who gets hit by the spell, else you need to change the fic title plus i like how Twi fights the spell and has to deal with her morale/guilt much more than the other ponies (due her already commited crimes) who seem to fall under the spell´s power immediatley, guess its due Twi´s gigantic magic power that the spell had to worm its way into her mind to take her over while with Cheerliee/other ponies it´s *snap and over*.
Rather i wanna see her being the victim of the one who gets hits by the spell (preferable Twi who just got out for the first time in months, right into the spell, delicious painful wrong desires stirring stronger than ever~) as she already knows of Twi´s penis as well as what she did and (i dunno?) why she did so. Meaning unlike AJ, she´s less surprised/will fight more plus there´s her character traits of loyatly, her fear of failure she hides under arrogance and over-confidence and all that, it will be interesting to see how that all will stand against the spell and the one its possess.
Or, the spell learned, which would be a surprise itself as well as gives Celestia´s thoughts even more foundation, and decided to hide itself better, both from the outside world as well as of the one it possess (Hint: TWILIGHT SPARKLE!) and basically tries the "normal" route which takes longer but is less illegal. Aka it pushes some button on Twi, gives her confidence when needed, spreads some pheromones in the air when wanting the other party to be convinced easier/waves his spell web to make the other part be eager for sex as well, gives little suggestion to what to say or to do which will lead Twi, unkowingly lead by the intelligent spell again, into RD`s pants. Expect the fact that RD don´t wear pants, but you get what i mean.
That said, i hate how your fic stomped my morality into crumps just like that. First time i want to see Twi raping ponies! And i love it for it as well.
1382946 Wait... Wonderbolts are coming... WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT?! Dude... Dude... I know whats going to happen. The spell is going to take over Spitfire! Oh YEAH! Rainbow is about to get more than she bargained for!
Edit: I initially thought the flyer announced that Rainbow was accepted into the Wonderbolts. Then again... Even if I was right... The Wonderbolts would still arrive. So I guess I wasn't that off. But I didn't even consider the possibility I just proposed in my first comment.
1382740 IKR? I was really hoping Cheerilie wouldn't get caught so soon. I'd make some comment on how I'm going to pony hell for thinking like that, but with as excited as I was when I saw this update, and how much I liked this story to begin with, I think it's obvious. We are all going to hell. Not that I give a fuck. See y'all there!
As bad a Cheerilee's situation seems, ponies are going to have a hard time actually proving anything if she is no longer futa. she doesn't have the equipment she would be accused of using, thus it beomes physically impossible for her to have done anything. it could come down to a simple 'he said, she said' deal.
I'm replying to Phantom + making a note to the author... If there is anyone who is going to pony hell for reading this... IT IS ME! Wanna know why? It's because I'm - honest to god - considering making a 3D game of this. I just don't know if I could release such a thing in any way... I mean... It'll be foalcon and rape packed into an interactive experience you can play on your PC... Is that like... allowed?
Other fan-fics I want to turn into games: Background Pony Cheerilee's Garden/Scarlet Harvest
Yes yes yes... yes... umm.. Rainbow... you might want to rethink your plans or at least prepare for some unexpected activities. If you know what I mean -.o
"She had other dressed she could ware" Typo ^ I think it's supposed to be She had other dresses she could wear.
So you're finally back, and with fresh ideas too. I like where you're taking this so far, and it looks like the writing has improved some - not that past chapters were ever poorly written. I'm glad you're writing again, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Too bad those two fillys will say out that they got raped by their teach. And then there´s that magical connection thingie between seeds and the one who will had been the owner of it, like with Twilight. So basically they can tell with a spell if this is Cheerliee´s cum or not. And that alone will make her guilty of having raped her pupils.
What on earth are the codes for crazy twilight and discord emoticons? ... Actually give me all discord and nightmare emoticon codes you may have please!
Why is the story called Twlights Midnight when it goes to Cheerilie.Also how was the curse removed.Did I accidentally skip a chapter?And did the curse go to Cheerilie?
From the grave...
I return!
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*GASP*
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seriously, that was a long wait... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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After what 2 months?
I really have no excuse other than I hit a writer's block.
And it really fucking hurt! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_rape.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png ...
This was AWESOME!
I wonder how Twi will feel about not being alone anymore in hir not-quite-stallion-ness//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png
Hopefully, this marks the beginning of a regular update schedule, and not another three-month gap.
...Hypocrisy, thy name is Leo. *glances at own unupdated fics*
Oh shii.... It updated, time to read...
Okay! Read it!
I like where this is going. I must say that I wasn't expecting Cheerilee to be caught so soon.
And that Cliffhanger has me like... Really confused... The only thing I can think of that
Rainbow Dash read in a flyer that could make her excited would be her finally succeeding in her
foalhood dreams.
I rather doubt the news of Cheerilee spread that quickly and I doubt it would make her happy.
So yup... I don't know what that last part was about.
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Don't be dumping on the writer, I can feel his pain. I have the same problem myself, only worse because its apparent for each chapter.
Awww, poor Cheerliee, i´m glad the dick´s gone but the damage´s done anyway. Diamond Tiara´s broken (not that i pity her much, but what she shouldn´t have went through that anyway, nopony so far should have.) and Applebloom´s addicted (aka thinks she´s in love with her teacher, similar to Sweetie Bell and Applejack and the other two mares towards Twilight) to Cheerliee. And Cheerliee still got the desires in her. Some parts at least.
Hmhm, thought so and Tia´s eplanantion confirms it:
Spell grew, "matured" so to say and is now its own lord but with certain goals (to make sure Twi´s bloodline doesnt die out) and explicit desires (mostly to pregnant the "perfect" mares for her = her friends, ponies close to her). No wonder Luna couldn´t contaim it for long, still weird that it attacked Cheerliee first but i guess that´s cause it was frustrated and due the long absence of Twi´s body to fulfill its goals/desires almost crazy. Guess after blowing some steam off, it got its "sanity" back or whatever you might call those thoughts it has.
DAMN IT! The spell STILL isn´t back in Twi´s body but moving around somewhere, searching for her! Move it already, you blessing/curse thingie! Get back where you belong to so that Twilight Sparkle starts raping RD, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie and Rarity! And some Spike if possible, just for fun. You know to cross some more lines which shouldn´t be crossed.
Oh wait, the spell might hit her when she´s going onto the market for the first time since months .... oh, it shall be GLORIOUS!
RD and some paper which makes her squee? That advertise must be really awesome... Wonderbolts are coming? Spitfire autograms for free?? Feather brushes 20% cheaper??? What is it?!
I hope RD´s not the next one who gets hit by the spell, else you need to change the fic title plus i like how Twi fights the spell and has to deal with her morale/guilt much more than the other ponies (due her already commited crimes) who seem to fall under the spell´s power immediatley, guess its due Twi´s gigantic magic power that the spell had to worm its way into her mind to take her over while with Cheerliee/other ponies it´s *snap and over*.
Rather i wanna see her being the victim of the one who gets hits by the spell (preferable Twi who just got out for the first time in months, right into the spell, delicious painful wrong desires stirring stronger than ever~) as she already knows of Twi´s penis as well as what she did and (i dunno?) why she did so. Meaning unlike AJ, she´s less surprised/will fight more plus there´s her character traits of loyatly, her fear of failure she hides under arrogance and over-confidence and all that, it will be interesting to see how that all will stand against the spell and the one its possess.
Or, the spell learned, which would be a surprise itself as well as gives Celestia´s thoughts even more foundation, and decided to hide itself better, both from the outside world as well as of the one it possess (Hint: TWILIGHT SPARKLE!) and basically tries the "normal" route which takes longer but is less illegal. Aka it pushes some button on Twi, gives her confidence when needed, spreads some pheromones in the air when wanting the other party to be convinced easier/waves his spell web to make the other part be eager for sex as well, gives little suggestion to what to say or to do which will lead Twi, unkowingly lead by the intelligent spell again, into RD`s pants.
Expect the fact that RD don´t wear pants, but you get what i mean.
That said, i hate how your fic stomped my morality into crumps just like that. First time i want to see Twi raping ponies!
And i love it for it as well.
So another three month till the next update?
UPDATE?! Fuuuuu *explodes*
Fantastic! Been wondering when this would update!
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Wait... Wonderbolts are coming... WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT?!
Dude... Dude... I know whats going to happen. The spell is going to take over Spitfire!
Oh YEAH! Rainbow is about to get more than she bargained for!
Edit: I initially thought the flyer announced that Rainbow was accepted into the Wonderbolts.
Then again... Even if I was right... The Wonderbolts would still arrive. So I guess I wasn't that off.
But I didn't even consider the possibility I just proposed in my first comment.
1382651 Did I cure you? :P
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Nope. It still burns when I sit down
1382740 IKR? I was really hoping Cheerilie wouldn't get caught so soon. I'd make some comment on how I'm going to pony hell for thinking like that, but with as excited as I was when I saw this update, and how much I liked this story to begin with, I think it's obvious. We are all going to hell. Not that I give a fuck. See y'all there!
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Did Twilight get you?!
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Nope. One of my girlfriend's OCs
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No, i got it. What happens next is: Threesome!
Probably, that is.
yes its back! and hopefully we will get to see Twilight having some fun with rainbow next! YaY!
It Lives, it LIVES, MWHAHAHAHAHAHAH
As bad a Cheerilee's situation seems, ponies are going to have a hard time actually proving anything if she is no longer futa. she doesn't have the equipment she would be accused of using, thus it beomes physically impossible for her to have done anything. it could come down to a simple 'he said, she said' deal.
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I'm replying to Phantom + making a note to the author...
If there is anyone who is going to pony hell for reading this... IT IS ME!
Wanna know why?
It's because I'm - honest to god - considering making a 3D game of this.
I just don't know if I could release such a thing in any way... I mean... It'll be foalcon and rape
packed into an interactive experience you can play on your PC... Is that like... allowed?
Other fan-fics I want to turn into games:
Background Pony
Cheerilee's Garden/Scarlet Harvest
1383212
Trust me, there will be someplace where such a game will be hosted. Even then, it would likely get passed around from 'chan to 'chan just because. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
OH, BUCK YES! MY BODY IS READY!
Glad to see this update again.
OH by Celestia You're alive!!!! Sits and reads
Yes yes yes... yes... umm.. Rainbow... you might want to rethink your plans or at least prepare for some unexpected activities. If you know what I mean -.o
1383212 Background Pony hands down.
FINALLY! AN UPDATE!
Twilight fucks Rainbow Dash. Make it so.
Yay.
Now to ponder what that scrap of paper had on it that made Rainbow Dash so excited.....
"She had other dressed she could ware"
Typo ^ I think it's supposed to be She had other dresses she could wear.
So you're finally back, and with fresh ideas too. I like where you're taking this so far, and it looks like the writing has improved some - not that past chapters were ever poorly written. I'm glad you're writing again, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Please don't make it as long of a wait.
Looks around nervously... (<_<) (>_>) (^_^) IT"S BACK!!!!!!!
My Little Prediction: Rarity is gonna taken over and maybe get some RD in the process...
Although who knows...
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Too bad those two fillys will say out that they got raped by their teach. And then there´s that magical connection thingie between seeds and the one who will had been the owner of it, like with Twilight. So basically they can tell with a spell if this is Cheerliee´s cum or not. And that alone will make her guilty of having raped her pupils.
whoa hohoho
nice come back!!!
oh Faust, yes another chapter! Finally!
New chapter yay
Truly worth the wait!
Oh, and i got my NWN2 problem sorted, it was my drivers.
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What on earth are the codes for crazy twilight and discord emoticons? ... Actually give me all discord and nightmare emoticon codes you may have please!
I guess this is a bad time to sing "Hot for Teacher?"
Spike stood there, rag and glass still in hand as he watched her go. With a long sigh he walked up to the threshold, taking a hold of the door handle.
Was anyone else picturing Spike as a bartender here?
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Yeah ah know ah'm a few years late ta comment on this but...
Properly stored apples have a shelf life of six months.
Why is the story called Twlights Midnight when it goes to Cheerilie.Also how was the curse removed.Did I accidentally skip a chapter?And did the curse go to Cheerilie?