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Thunder_Chaser_


Sometimes, I like to pretend I'm a great writer and am good at what I do. And then I realize I'm not and I'm all like "Oh, gosh, better try again"

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Drill is an art of precision, discipline, and attention to detail. Military units have used it for Centuries to organize themselves. In modern times, the art is still instructed, but isn't a battle technique anymore, today, it is used to display how effective, and disciplined a unit is.

Unfortunately, the Wonderbolt drill team meets none of those standards.

For years the Wonderbolts have competed with other equestrian Drill Teams for the Celestial award, and always they come in dead last. This year, Soarin decides that its about time they changed that.

With permission for the Activation of the team given to Soarin with six weeks of the competition, he should have plenty of time to turn some rough Air-ponies into shining polished drill masters..

Right??

Nope. Wrong again.

This time, Its the only detachment available for the training, straight from the Wonderbolts reserve.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

If you dom't continue this I am going to kill myself. NO WRONG GRAMMAR AND I AM ENTERTAINED PLS CONTINUE THIS:fluttercry::flutterrage::pinkiecrazy:

8182723

Well, jeez. Thats a bit extreme. I can't make any promises, I don't always have a lot of time, especially to write. But it's a grand desire of mine to finish a story here on FimFiction, and darn it, if this isn't going to be the one I finish.

8182749 just saying that your story is so good and take your time!

8182825

Very flattered, Very flattered. I've started work on the next chapter, with any luck this one wont sit around on my desk for a year.

Glad to hear you're enjoying it so much.

8193157

Whoops. Lets just uh... Sweep that one under the rug...

Good catch, Thanks!

8197401

Well, based on the fact that I haven't seen any of that I'm a couple seasons behind in watching I think...

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