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Arn


Just reading.

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Seizing Sweetie Bell for the project, Rarity caught up in her mania as soon as her sister comes home from school, Sweetie Bell is cajoled into weaving together the most intricate matrix warp of threads Rarity has ever produced with her magic.
Sweetie Bell has only seen that look in Ratity's eyes before, in a dream.
Rarity, apparently oblivious to the burden she has placed on her sister.
The agonizingly long hours.
Homework neglected.
The sun rising, a stolen night!
Rarity isn't listening,frustration is rising, and Sweetie Bell is tired and can't seem to care.
Exhausted Sweetie misses one shuttling in the warp of the weave.....

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Arn

Thank you for everyone who read this and faved it.
I'm really proud of this one, it the first time I was accepted by review first time through!

I really would like comments and criticism, I want you to enjoy my stories, and for that I need input!
Thanks again!

Sorry, but I couldn't get into this. It's way too fast paced and filled with spelling mistakes. I have NO clue what happend.

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