After a long dry spell, De Writer has sort of returned. I am now writing again. Watch this space for more new tales and more chapters of the latest
This story is a sequel to Fair and UnFair, part 3 of the Origin of the Rom
The horses of the Band of Rom, in spite of their welcome by ordinary ponies at fairs, find no home and little welcome from the ponies in charge of the various towns and cities of the land of Equestria. Prodded by some of the band, Marchhare realizes that the horses do in fact, have a home in Equestria. Just not the one that he expected.
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Wonderful writing!
I got time lost, though, throughout the story.
Apparently a whole year happened off screen without a transition? Could you point it out to me?
Basic evidences of time passing:
Actually it was one season. The disastrous flood and Haulmarket Fair were in the summer. This story takes place in the Autumn.
Here, It was lovely early autumn weather.
Shehan had a partly broken neck and was immobilized at the end of FAIR AND UNFAIR.
It was our little adopted filly, Shehan, who noticed the bank sorrel growing profusely around the wayside’s boxed spring, put there for the free use of thirsty travelers. Like us. She happily gathered all that she could of the big clover-like plants.
Bringing them back to the cook fires, she chirped, “Look what I found! I think that I saw a stand of nettles back there in the woods, too!”
Here, she up and active. Her neck has healed.
Sequence is stated here, but I do see where a small edit would make it clearer. I will do that right away.
Rom sat next to me and got out a map of the Royal Roads. He was pointing to a possible problem. “Marchhare, to get to the Haymarket Fair, we are going to have to pass through Haulmarket again. We had so much trouble with them at their Summer Fair.
“I have noticed that Haulmarket has notices up for their big Autumn Fair. They have put it on the same days as the Haymarket Fair.”
Nore, leaning her head over to look at the map, observed, “The Haymarket Fair was created by a Royal Decree to help the village to recover from that disastrous flood last summer. Haulmarket will have to change the date of their Fair.”
I hope that this clears up the time issue for you. It is one season that has passed.