• Member Since 22nd Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen Jul 28th, 2012

Pew Die Pony


Bio? Nope. I want to be the PewDiePony, but I am a wannabe. Also, I write shit *cough* I mean fan-fictions. *punches self in the face* Stop lying, you loser.

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A unknown plague sweeps through Ponyville, bringing fear and panic throughout all of Equestria overnight. A single filly, one of the first to see the effects of the plague firsthand, flees underground to a tunnel system which has supposedly laid vacant for decades. But she soon learns that she is far from alone...
Google Docs Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1i0wJ9Jh06D5uVA_xHFaL_i53FpNiPBD71yMHdIlm-l4/edit

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Comments ( 32 )

Reminds me of the Tunnels series

746378
That's a good thing, right? Or does that mean I'm ripping off work?

746543 I believe it is a reference instead of ripping it off.

746565
*Whew* I was worried for a second.

Haha yeah your good. It was just the same premise sort of, but its vague enough that you definitely could have written something similar without plaigarising.

768095
Too close to plagiarism for me, DELETE ALL THE STORIES!

820921
Naw, your fine bro. If you're really worried look up the 'Tunnels' by Roderick Gordon and at least read the plot summary first on wikipedia or something before you delete. Would sure be a shame i enjoyed this.

820978
1. I actually read the book, kinda worries me how much I copied.
2. How can you like this?

821144
I'm not quite sure what you mean by that.

821807
1. I meant that I actually read "Tunnels" (Well, the first book at least) and I'm worried as to how much I copied from it.
2. "Would sure be a shame i enjoyed this." I meant, how can you enjoy this?
Better?

Because I like adventure stories, especially dark/suspense/conflict based ones. Its the genre I write.

821835
Well, at this point, this is all I'm writing in this story. Sorry.

Aww. Well I guess its for my own good lol. I need to stop reading stories and get back to writing mine here or imma miss my deadline haha ><

821868
Own Good? Wha?
Anyways, I was trying to focus on a BIG piece I was trying to work on (about 22-23K words). It's kinda like this, but more Grimdark and Adventure.
Well, reading other stories might inspire you, I wish it did for me.
Maybe once I finish a few more stories, I'll start working more on this. Still hoping to try and at least have more than 3 users read my stories, it's kinda disheartening :facehoof:

821893
Yeah I know what you mean. This fic im writing is a real big one and Imma be disappointed if I have to put in a lot of effort for little return. My tip? Music. Always listen to different musics while writing , I've thought of entire plot arcs because of a single song

821983
I tried listening to music with "The Student of Sparkle" and I listened to a Charlie Chaplin video when I wrote this, but dark ominous music is what I need for my latest one. I already have Gwely Mernans by Aphex Twin for a dark theme, any advice for horror and dark gore kinda stuff?
In honesty, I kinda expect to be ignored, it's just another Fan-Fiction. The only REALLY popular Fan-Fictions has videos and music stemming from them (I.E Rainbow Factory, Cupcakes, S.A.M, My Little Dashie, Awoken, ect.), so popularity is something I should care much less about :twilightsheepish:

822035
For the music I'm not really sure. My stuff is more epic, actiony, intense kind of stuff. Or like emotional, journey-ish, ambient themed. My personal favorite selection is actually the soundtracks to the Ace Combat series. Best VG OST in history easily lol. For example, without boring you with too much of the details, ill say that mine is a warfic, and this is exactly the emotion I try to convey in one scene where she has to really deal with her conscience about her own involvement in a war where neither side can truly be defined as 'bad'. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uIUapByTJQs&feature=relmfu
Or like this track which inspired an aerial chase scene in the beginning. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uL4RBZV7Wjc
But I do actually recommend especially video game soundtracks. They're usually especially good at conveying emotion because they're trying to emotionally invest the player. So research some of the darker horror games out there and then youtube the soundtracks. I know of Amnesia off the top of my head, for example.

822269
Well, I like the horror genre of writing, because (if done correctly) it can include some great emotional back-stories with them (which I have in mine), as well as give a reader a good scare. I know your writing is probably better, so I'll leave you to that.
Still, I LOVE the Amnesia soundtrack and was hoping to make a crossover...until I realized it became so used it was a parasite kind of story, like Grimdark sequels. :ajbemused:
Nevertheless, good luck with your stories, and hope to read them soon.

Yeah. also be proactive about advertising too if you can. Like my story is sort the unofficial literary interpretation of this vid, since everyone seemed to be asking for a fanfic about it, and, as I pleasantly realized, all warfics out there seem to just be alternate dimensional cop-outs where everypony is just an asshole and Celestia/Luna are both dictators or something like that, so I think people will like mine because I actually put a ton of effort into the backstory that turns the regular ponies in the regular universe against eachother in a believable Civil War between the forces of Celestia and Luna, where both sides have merit. I police it regularly, and everytime someone asks about a fanfic related to it, I point them in the right direction. Im pretty excited to see how it turns out because im planning on releasing part one July 1. Ive already got at least fifteen followers i think, and bound to be more when I post that the fic is out in the comments. I sent a pm to the uploader asking if I could piggyback on the description. And when I have enough meat in later parts towards the end of the summer im going for EQD. Stuff like that. See a need and fill it.

822458
Well, you can do things like that, but I can't.
Also, advertising and promoting won't work, I've tried.

822473
Well I have to hope and believe that it will. I already have it promised to a good dozen at least, and like the whole bible quote where God said he would spare sodom for the sake of ten righteous people, for the sake of those dozen i have to follow through. What did you do that didnt work that has you so down?

822518
Eh, forget I even said anything.
(Also, referencing the bible is a no-go with me, sorry. Don't start some religious debate neither of us want)
Either way, I know your writing will be wonderful, *Insert massive self-defeating comment*

822538
Haha no I'm not trying to preach, its just an objective reference. The analogy is still solid. But yeah I certainly hope so. Lemme know if you get something out too. We gotta keep trying if we're going to be famous fic authors. Like Walt Disney said, the first step is to stop dreaming and start doing :twilightsmile:

822552
Well, I have already given up, I've realized that I can't write; but you shouldn't, you still have decent writing skills (from the contexts of your comments, dead serious). Just remember when (not if, when) you become a famous Fan-Fic writer,disregard the annoying parasites like me

822573
Come on surely you know the tale of how Abraham Lincoln like failed at everything forever and then became president. Writing is a skill like any other. If you keep practicing you get better. I mean I'll admit I'm half decent at writing but there's a hell of lot I have yet to learn, and the only way to achieve such is to consistently endeavor to write more. I really think you should reconsider before hanging up the pen. I'll wager that like me and all other writers out there who ever made it big, you hear a call. Like a scientist takes pride in an invention, you take pride in an eloquently written verse. You want your work to be out there cause you know you have something to offer. I know for me I'm constantly thinking of ideas and movie scenes and writings. Everything around me brings a scene to mind of some sort or inspires a fic idea. And my biggest downer is the thought that no one will ever share in the same excitement that I had in dreaming of bringing those scenes to life, that they wont be inspired and animated themselves. Its not selfish if you really want to be known for fics, that's how you know its where you belong. If that describes you as it does I for what good a short paragraph does anyway, then you definitley have to keep at it. If you want, I can give you some ideas of mine or even co-author if you want writing help. When Beethtoven was deaf and told he wouldnt be able to compose great works, he said he'd seize fate by the throat. If it seems fate has the same in mind for you, then take his advice.

822668
Yes, but unlike the epitome successors like Lincoln and Beethoven, I lack the one thing which those two had, an ability which kept their pressing of determination going. No, I would never say something so, Ifoolish and miserly as to believe I should be even minutely recognized for anything I do. I simply intend to try something, strike out, and move on to something else hoping by some microscopic chance I'm not pathetic at I would have perceived. On the account of the call, yes, I do hear a call, it says "F**k you buddy, you don't have skills, quit bitching about it and move on" (I guess the call has a dirty mouth XD). Either way, as I have told many, many, MANY other writers, I can't help others in co-authoring, Me co-authoring with someone on a story would be like throwing an anvil on the wright brother's first flight; it ruins it. Still, I at least aporeciate YOUR enthusiasm, but as you said, you're a decent author, and I know fir a damn fact I couldn't write to save my life.
Eulogy over.

:fluttercry: Well that's a shame. I'll guess I'll have to make mine really good now to inspire you to take the pencil and paper back in hand. :twilightsmile:

826477
Maybe, Maybe. Besides, I want to see you succeed, not me.
Until then, I just go about reading more Fan-Fictions and let my jealousy ruin my psyche.

Jealously is part of what inspires me to do my best. Use your hatred, let it make you strong

827075
Oh how I wish it worked like that for me :facehoof:

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