• Published 6th Mar 2016
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Pawn - Ash_Kitsune



Tell me if you've heard this one before- A mobster with a messenger bag and a motorcycle, a box of fancy jewelry, some ponies, and a Q-wannabe with mooks blow up a bar... ok, a cafe, but we'll get to that in a moment.

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Awww, thank you! I'm sorry I took so long to reply, and very sorry it took so long for the next, and sadly short, chapter to come out.

we'll make a run for the boarder, so to speak

Oh good, they got out. If you needed to pad the chapter you could always flesh out some of the stuff that happened in the month before the next chapter. The motel they got to, where they drove, what news they got of other ponies, how they were getting along together as they camped out. But whatever. Just leave this chapter short, and jump right to the part you want to write about!

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