Tell me if you've heard this one before- A mobster with a messenger bag and a motorcycle, a box of fancy jewelry, some ponies, and a Q-wannabe with mooks blow up a bar... ok, a cafe, but we'll get to that in a moment.
interdimensional. Or considering Discord, interdementional would probably work.
antiquated
acquainted
This story's still alright. As a skillful AU to 5 score, it works just fine. The whole being a VIP in the super secret world of organized crime and gun battles is a bit too grandstandy though. Also the main character is the one with all the answers, while anyone else just gets it wrong and a snarky reply from him. But it is exciting, and the pacing isn't too off. Plus I'm genuinely curious when you're going to reveal that he's Angel Bunny
Thick, rust-red chains dig into my arms, leg, and neck as I struggle against them, a pained whine slipping from my lips, sparks from a burning fire leaping out from below my feet.
I'm feelin' a bit like Alice down the gods-be-damned rabbit hole right now,
Ah, it's a sailor's term- A Port is a place where you can dock your ship that allows you to collect needed supplies for your travels and for the crew to rest. Port Royal is one of the most well known Ports from yesteryear, and now a days it refers to anywhere ships stop.
You did that on purpose!
interdimensional. Or considering Discord, interdementional would probably work.
acquainted
This story's still alright. As a skillful AU to 5 score, it works just fine. The whole being a VIP in the super secret world of organized crime and gun battles is a bit too grandstandy though. Also the main character is the one with all the answers, while anyone else just gets it wrong and a snarky reply from him. But it is exciting, and the pacing isn't too off. Plus I'm genuinely curious when you're going to reveal that he's Angel Bunny
(...the evidence keeps mounting...)
Oh wow! Things are getting juicy~ and I know a thing or two about that~
What's a "night in port"?
Ash, you are doing an amazing job on this story and this story is one of my favorite stories of all time on fanfiction.
And heres a fluttershy for you.
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Ah, it's a sailor's term- A Port is a place where you can dock your ship that allows you to collect needed supplies for your travels and for the crew to rest. Port Royal is one of the most well known Ports from yesteryear, and now a days it refers to anywhere ships stop.