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Magicman7997


A Storybook Story, by Harwick on DA. Please visit the artist's page! http://harwicks-art.deviantart.com/

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Based on the King Sombra timeline of "The Cutie Re-Mark".

Rainbow Dash has always been a fighter. When the call to war came, she was the first to head to Wonderbolt Headquarters and sign on. With several mission under her belt, she has risen through the ranks and is now captain of her own squad. But war is hell, and when she is gravely injured, Dash has to rely on two ponies she's never met before. One, wants to help her fly again. The other, wants maybe something more.

Inspired by the cover art by the artist, dSana. Please check out their work! Many thanks to dSana for allowing me to use their art!

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 16 )

Oh my god I hope this is a Dash x Doctor fic, hOO BOY IM EXCITED TO READ :pinkiecrazy:

Thanks for sharing! Looking forward to reading next chapter :twilightsmile:

This story seems cool so far. I'm actually excited!

But is Proud Skies male or female? I got confused towards the beginning. I'm curious as to why an Earth pony as a Pegasus name.

This is rare, but I will LIKE your story. LIKE as in clicking the thumbs up, because I like this story anyway whether or not I click the thumb.

I am REALLY excited about this story
Please update :trollestia:

One very minor nitpick: retch is the word you're looking for, if you mean gagging. A wretch is someone in an abjectly pitiful state (which unfortunately, describes Dash all to well in that scene...)

7444095 No worries! I appreciate the feedback! I self edit my work so I'm bound to miss a few things.

Ohhhh this is good! Waiting for next chapter :twilightsmile:

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