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Comments ( 19 )

Hot damn. That was great! You earned a like and Spike mustache. :moustache:

7013073 Huh, you read it already?

>a single chapter 24k

Damn son.

7013156 I dunno, I just kinda....kept writing :p

7013168
I just figured that it's usually best to split things up into multiple chapters when you get that large. Usually people only have a 7k attention span on-site, so I split up my stuff so I can hit around there.

Regardless, I'll try to get some time to read this, since any Rarijack story is a good Rarijack story.

Will there be a sequel?
Also great story.

7013358 I dunno. I hadn't planned on one.

Awe yeah. Always wanted to read a story based on Sunnysundown's art.

7015474 I might do another that is more...action orientated in the future, like how they got the Rainbow Power.

Holy Hell! A story based on this universe! Magnificient!

And the lenght didn't stop me from reading it in one time. Hope to see more in future :moustache:

7023978 Aww, thank you so much! I hope to make more :)
Yeah, I'll try to not go so...overboard with the word count next time in one chapter.

That's great! I love the way the characters act towards each other and Sunset... I totally D'AWWWWed in the hug part... keep doin this, you're great!

7051479 Aww, thanks! Your kind words mean a lot :)
Could you remind me of which part was the, 'hug', part? Is that the one between Rarity and Sunset?
I'm glad you liked it :D

7051716
The one between Sunset and AJ.
It's just soooo sweet to see the big though girl Sunset craving for cuddles and safety between AJ arms. :heart:

I ...I..can not deal with just how amazing this story was. You my friend have talent, you combined my fav style of sex with the finest mlp eqg artist out there (I have way to much work of sundowns on my HD...way to much). I would ask you to check out my fix, but it is not worthy of you. You my friend are a GOD!!!! Thank you for this, thank you so very much.

The song of summer ...just in case you get bored

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Haha, ah thanks for the kind words. I loved reading that comment, makes me feel all fuzzy inside X3
Yeah, next to WhiteDiamonds, Sundown is my favourite artist! I was even lucky enough to get a commission done from him (still the only 'safe' commission he got, I think ;D), but I digress.
As for your story, I will take a look and see what it's like :)

One question; What do you mean when you say, 'style of sex'?

7677935
What I referred to was, the clear "alpha female" that Sunset is. She took control, and stuffed those mares full of pups. Love that, well done.

Her Highborn powers were a welcome addition to the group, as Rarity was pleased to have someone to finally talk magic with, though Sunset's specialty was not as discreet as Rarity's. It wasn’t that she couldn't conjure up a weapon herself, but despite her reformation, she still felt an incinerated target was easier to deal with than a lacerated one. And if the ground and nearby hilltops were somewhat geographically altered, as long as no innocents were hurt, she didn't mind.

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