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Identity Thieves

A trip down to Dodge Junction leads to a case of mistaken identity for Applejack and Rarity as they are mistaken for being two robbers who look like them. Locked up with no way to contact home the two must advise a way to clear their names.

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Crossbredorc

Crossbredorc #1 · Feb 5th, 2018 · · · Part One ·

Hmm nice start to all this. maybe going a little fast though. Try to slow it down a little bit. Give Rarity and Applejack more thoughts and experiences. Otherwise I enjoy this so far.

FictionFlyer

FictionFlyer #2 · Mar 18th, 2018 · · · Part One ·

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First of all sorry for the extremely late reply.

Second yes you are absolutely right. After looking over what I wrote so far it does seem to show that i did go too fast. Though to be honest i really wasn't planning on spliting the story it at first, that actually came at the last second. And i really haven't touched this story in over a year, so my writing on this is kinda rusty. Thank you very much on your input and i promise the next part will be a bit slower, and I'll try to come up with some ideas for the current part.