Twilight cringed when she slowly put a cloak on her back, letting out a light hiss of pain. It was still better than it had been, at least. She could even sleep on her back, even if it was fairly uncomfortable. While Rarity had to return to Ponyville, a guard and sometimes Dancer had taken over putting the ointment on.
Still, she would have preferred more time off than just one week. But the guard watching her had insisted that she come with him. She slowly moved besides him. “Let's go see her,” she muttered softly. “Are you sure you can't tell me why I'm being summoned?”
He shook his head. “My apologies, Lady Glow. I would if I could, but I was just ordered to come and get you for record keeping purposes. I didn't see what all the excitement was about.”
Twilight sighed and looked around. The place was getting slightly more alive with each day, with more servants being willing to show their faces. Sadly, most of those faces were still frightened. There had been a few more public lashings, but only a hoofful so far. The earth pony hoped that would be it.
Her heart started to sink when she arrived at the doors to the throne room and she saw the guards. Normally they looked so stoic. But today they looked... she swore one of them had been crying. They looked away when she caught their eyes, only reaching out to open the door and then look away.
Then she saw why. Two ponies were standing before the princess. A white unicorn with long blond hair and a very pink alicorn. Prince Blueblood and Princess Cadence. Her heart nearly jumped into her throat and she started to step forward. “Cadence!” she cried, before freezing.
Nightmare Moon merely chuckled from her throne as her eyes fell on the mare. “Ah, bard. We see you have the strength to answer our summons. We do find it quite interesting that you never told us your brother was dating a princess. We imagine such a fact would come up often in conversation. Tell us, are there any other members of royalty dating your family? Perhaps the prince is dating your cousin?” Her voice sounded almost amused, as opposed to the rage the earth pony had expected.
Twilight shook her head, eying the two chained ponies. Both of them had their heads down. She had to give Blueblood credit, she'd always imagined him a bit of a prat from the few times they'd met, but at least he seemed to have a good idea when to keep his head down and mouth shut. Twilight stepped forward besides the throne, opposite Dancer who looked like she was about to throw up. Pen and paper appeared in front of her. All she could do was feel more dread.
“Now that our bard has arrived...” Nightmare Moon said slowly before her eyes scanned over the two and a frown replaced her smirk. “Prince Blueblood and Princess Cadence. The... previous ruler gave you such titles in our absence. We imagine you may have felt power and prestige from these titles. However, neither of you are required anymore. Celestia was weak. We are not so. However, as a... prince and princess, we cannot just let you go. Such... things may lead to rebellion.” The frown on her face darkened. “It would be well within our powers and rights to have you executed. To leave your bloody heads upon the castle gates, so all could know of our power.”
Twilight bit her tongue, feeling the fear rise in her. Blueblood managed to look paler, as if he might fall over at any moment.
“In fact, had we found you weeks prior, that may have been your fate.” Her eyes then fell on Twilight. “However, we are a merciful ruler.” Her wings slowly unfolded. “While it would be simple to destroy you for one such as us, what would be the point? We are strong enough to not fear you. Instead we have decided... to offer you mercy.”
Twilight's heart almost leaped. She looked up at Nightmare Moon, the mare's face in a wide, fanged grin once again.
“We cannot allow you to go free at this time, however. While our power and mercy is great, we have learned that our ponies can be quite... foalish. Were we to release you, they may once again get foalish notions of rebellion.”
Twilight looked between the prince and princess. Neither looked happy or relieved by this news. But she couldn't help feeling giddy. It looked like Nightmare Moon wouldn't be killing them. It was better than she'd hoped.
“As such, instead the two of you will be banished to Tartarus, where you will remain imprisoned for the time being. Your ruler has spoken.” Nightmare Moon's horn glowed and blue fire erupted around the two.
“Wait!” Blueblood said, but in a flash blue fire erupted around them and the two were gone.
Twilight stared, her mouth open in shock. She then looked towards Nightmare Moon. “Your... your highness?”
“You are dismissed,” Nightmare Moon said to the guards before looking down at Twilight. “Yes, bard?”
“They... are they...?”
“They will be fine,” the alicorn said with a shake of her head. “We have... listened to your words, bard. Perhaps you are right. My little ponies are... delicate.” She gazed down at Dancer, who yiped and quickly looked away. “Fragile. Easily broken. Were we to unleash all of our power upon them, surely they would break. But we cannot just allow two who bear royal names to travel freely, now can we?”
“O-of course not!” Twilight said quickly, her eyes wide. “But... they'll be--”
“Released, soon,” the alicorn said with a slow nod. “They are not a threat to us now, but until we are certain that none will try to use them for some... foalish attempt at rebellion, they will remain imprisoned.” She paused. “However, soon there will be no need to keep any of my ponies imprisoned.” The smile returned to her lips. “That is what you desired, is it not, bard? What a... kind ruler would do?”
“What? Yes! Very kind! Good!” she said with a rapid nod, before looking to Dancer and giving her a gesture with her head.
“What? Oh! Right, it's what... errr... i-it'll make ponies happy,” the unicorn said nervously.
“Good. Now, you have seen our deeds, bard. Ensure you remember them when you write your story. Our ponies will need to learn much of our mercy,” Nightmare Moon said with a shake of her head before climbing out of her throne and walking to the door.
Twilight and Dancer shared a look for a few moments. Finally, the earth pony spoke up. “That... that was her, wasn't it? I mean... I didn't just imagine that?”
“That... was her. I'm certain,” the unicorn said softly. “I... I thought for sure that the princess was... well...”
Twilight nodded and felt a small swelling of relief washing through her. “This... this might be it.”
“What?”
“Relief! Maybe she's calming down. Maybe there is a chance this will all work out in the end,” she said with a small chuckle. “Maybe she'll even let Celestia go.”
Dancer frowned and eyed the door. “I... I don't think so.”
“What? Why?”
“I just...” The unicorn shuddered. “I think... there's something else. Something about how... calm she was. How she watched them. How... I don't know. I just... I feel there's something else. Like maybe she has plans.”
“Maybe she wants to make Cadence her co-rul...” Twilight blinked and shook her head. “Okay, no. That's not happening. Maybe like a student princess? Or a... mayor? A general? I mean...” She then blanched. “Oh. Like... she is with you. Moon Dancer, I'm so sorry. I never even thought about how this must be for you. Being her student and all. Are... are you doing okay?”
The unicorn blinked, then shook her head. “No! I mean, yes. I'm fine. I'm...” She glanced to the side. “It's... terrifying, you know? She's... well... always there. She keeps tossing subjects and... tasks at me. Magics I never even imagined. And then she watches me and...” She shuddered. “It's not so bad, though. I mean, if it was Celestia doing this, I'd probably be so happy. But Nightmare Moon... every time I fail...”
“Does she hit you?”
“No. But she doesn't have to. The way she watches me, I'm so afraid that when I fail, she'll take it out on my friends. They're safe now but...” She looked up at her. “But it's what we have to do, isn't it? If we want to keep others safe then... we have to do this.”
Twilight blushed and looked down. “Yes... we do. I... don't envy you, though. Being her student. I'm lucky to just be her bard.”
Dancer chuckled softly. “I don't know. Sometimes I think you have it worse than me.”
The earth pony chuckled. “Me? Why?”
Dancer blinked. “I'm just her student, Twilight. The things I say... the things I do. Most of them she ignores or doesn't put much thought into. But well... she hangs on every word you say. Everything. She probably holds you up to more scrutiny than any pony in Equestria.”
The earth pony paled, her eyes wide. “W-what? But... but I'm just her bard. I'm not a... I'm a...”
“She talks about you all the time. Or rather... your book,” Dancer said softly, looking off to the side. “The first one she read. The one you wrote about... her. She has high expectations of you. I... I thought you knew.”
“I... I knew a little. I thought... I just... But... but I'm just a writer, I can't, I--” Her eyes widened. “O-oh. Oh dear.”
Dancer nodded. “Why do you think you were the first to be whipped? She... didn't want to execute you, Twilight. So she had to think of another way to punish you. There's a reason your little... efforts have been succeeding.”
“But... but I can't... what if I say the wrong thing? I've mostly just been winging it! What if I DO the wrong thing? What if I send her off on a...” She shuddered and closed her eyes. “N-no. Right. This is just what we have to do. I mean... I... I already knew I was trying to help guide her, right? This just means that... it's a bit more effective than I expected. That's all. That's a good thing. Right?”
Dancer nodded. “R-right. I'm sorry. I didn't mean to make you feel more... pressured. I know you have a lot on your plate as it is and--”
“No. No, don't. It's fine,” Twilight said with a shrug. “I already was kind of her... advisor. This is nothing new. It's just a little shocking to know it's so effective.” She forced a smile. “I actually need to go talk to some ponies though, okay? So I'll see you around.” She quickly turned and trotted away, even though it made her back sting with each step.
She took slow, deep breathes as she walked, gathering up the information she had. Nightmare Moon was obviously focused on her, that was good. However, that just made her work all the more important. One slip of the tongue, one wrong suggestion and the damage she could do to Equestria would be unparalleled. But it also meant she might be able to guide the ruler to kindness and mercy. Already ponies who might have found themselves facing the axe were instead facing whips and maybe a bit of scarring.
She couldn't help feeling the pressure start to build up, though. She knew there was just one place she wanted to be now, more than ever.
One pony who knew above all else what it was like to protect ponies.
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Twilight sheepishly stepped down the steps, looking around nervously when she came past the bars to the cells. A few of the imprisoned ponies looked to her, but most quickly looked away. They didn't throw anything at her, or yell. Most just played their card games or whatever was available.
“Okay, so I kick the ogre in the face!” a voice called out. “Yeah, a thirteen! Eighteen total.”
“You hit it, roll damage.”
“This is all way too easy. We should go back to playing second,” Shining's annoyed voice made her pause. She then trotted closer, her eyes wide.
“Not a chance, I'm not playing that death trap again. Third edition was way better. Besides, we've only got fifth's book.”
“Everything about third was unbalanced! And I have most of second memorized, we could get it working,” Shining objected. “I can probably get my books, too.”
“Yeah, but you could make anything in third! And you didn't die just from walking down the hall!”
“Are you playing Ogres and oubliettes?” Twilight asked flatly when she came to Shining's cell.
The stallion yiped and looked back. He and three other ponies were sitting around a small table, pencils, paper and a small book by them. Her brother looked sheepish. “Y-yeah. We, err, it's been a boring few days and Steeltips here had the new book in his locker and wanted to DM so we--”
Twilight sighed, before giving a small smile. “At least some things never change.”
“And some things change too often,” Shining said before getting up and walking to the bars. “I heard about what happened. About... you.” He gave a soft sigh. “How's your back?”
“Fine. Mostly. It still tinges a bit but... well, it's healing. How are you doing?”
“Still trapped,” he muttered. “I'm sorry I couldn't be there for you...”
“It's fine. I'm just happy everypony isn't yelling at me now.”
He nodded. “Yeah, I gave them a stern talking to after that.” He paused. “Then Moon Dancer came down, too.” He paused again. “Then after the... whipping, about half the remaining guard forces came down and really tore into most of them. It was quite the sight, you should have been here for it.”
She chuckled softly, though the smile slowly drifted away. “I... I'm sorry to say but... I'm not here for good news. Nightmare Moon... she... she found Princess Cadence.”
She almost swore the room got colder and everything just fell silent. “Wut.”
“She found her.”
“CADENCE! Twily, you need to get me out of here, is she okay? Did that monster--”
“She's fine!” Twilight said, shaking her head. “She's okay, I promise.” She decided to leave out the fact the alicorn was currently in Tartarus. “Nightmare Moon's showing mercy.”
“What?”
“I... I think something I said got to her. After the whipping and... and she's showing mercy. For now, Cadence is just imprisoned. But... she said she'll be releasing her soon. She said she'll be releasing all of you soon. She just wants to finish cementing her power structure first.”
“Cadence is okay?” he asked again, his voice soft and weak.
“She's fine. When I saw her, there wasn't a mark on her. I wouldn't lie about this, Shining.”
The stallion stared down at her and then, slowly, a smile spread on his face. He reached out and ruffled her ears. “Heh. You've got quite the talent, Twily.”
Her cheeks burned. “W-what? I haven't done anything.”
“You've done plenty. If you... got her to not hurt Cadence, you're doing amazing. I wish you'd never been hurt, though. I should be the one out there doing this. It's my job to protect ponies, not yours.”
Twilight nodded, but then slowly reached out and put a hoof on his withers. “I... know. But I'm doing fine. Besides, I learned from the best, right?”
He nodded. “Yeah. You're making us all proud, Twily.”
She chuckled. “Thanks. Besides, it's not so bad. A little whipping is... well, it's horrible. But I'll survive.” She then glanced towards the table, looking between him and it for a bit. “Have room for one more?”
He glanced back and the others nodded. “Sure.”
Twilight smiled. “Great! Fourth edition, right? That was always my favorite. It was just so much fun!”
The room somehow went even quieter than it had earlier. She looked around at everypony. They just glared at her. “What? What I say?”
------
Twilight shrieked as she fled from the prison, pelted by erasers, pillows and empty card boxes. She didn't know why they were reacting so harshly.
Fourth wasn't THAT bad. Still, she couldn't help feeling a little more encouraged. She was protecting ponies and doing a good job of it, just liked she hoped. It wasn't all working quite as well as she'd like, but it was working. Bit by bit. She couldn't wait to get back to the library and get back to work on her book.
When she arrived, however, she was shocked to see Nightmare Moon and Dancer sitting around a table, books spread out across them. She gasped when she saw the frowny face stickers on some of the books. They were from the restricted section.
Large black chunks of metal were on the table. Nine of them, one of which looked like a crown while the others looked like strange hoofacles. She froze in place.
The alicorn glanced back, her eyes narrowed. “Yes, bard?”
“I... I was just going to work on the book some. I'll... I'll do it in my room.”
“Indeed. You do that.”
Twilight gulped and backed away, before quickly walking through the castle. A knot formed in her stomach and she glanced back towards the library. She didn't have any idea what that was about, but she was sure whatever it was would not be good for Equestria. Possibly not for anywhere.
She's making mind controlling regalia for Blueblood and Cadance!
> Mareacles
You've gone too far!
I think nightmare moon going to like cadence but want to kill blueblood....or put him under perment house arrest.
also I kind of want to see nightmare moon reaction to twilight's and Candace's little dance......I can see her look of confuse and just laughs at how cute it is...
Silly ponies, everyone knows Pathfinder is best! [ducks under volley of rulebooks].
In all seriousness, that bit was hilarious. A bit jarring to see Shining and co. so calm right after his marefriend got banished, but that little quibble righted itself.
It may have been short and only written to give 4e a well-deserved jab, but it was still a good chapter.
Lastly, a chapter a week? Praise the Primarch!
OMG 4th edition traitor!
Get that blasphemy out of Shining's house!
Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly like how Twi is having an even bigger influence on Moonie than even she thought she would. Hopefully more good will come out of that than bad, but at any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
No. Please no. Please tell me this is a horrible typo and you did not ponify the word 'manacles'. This is just silly to the point of being jarring. Also, the root of the word 'manacle' is the Latin word 'manus', which means hand. So a more accurate(but even sillier) ponification would be something like 'hoofacles'.
Even I know 4th Edition sucks... and I play DnD occasionally. Now, can someone give me a brief explanation about Pathfinder? Is it similar to DnD?
7451361 Nopony expects the Pinkie. She will come... when her time is right. *looks off ominously in the distance.*
7451440 Thanks. ^^ It's been fun!
7451513 If only. I'd sell them for a decent penny!
7451560 Any OC works. :P Even deerfolk.
7451697 Oh, I've read bad stories. Very few, though. Well... fully bad.
7451972 You may know soon... maybe. Mwa ha ha.
7452562 It's secretly Big Mac. This entire story has just been leading to Super Sailor Big Mac reveal to save the world and purge evil doers.
7455808 Thanks. ^^ I'd be surprised if this is really new, though. I'm sure somepony out there has written something like this, even better than I have.
7455916 There is a toll. One sticker per hug.
7456876 As a writer, making people go to bed late because they enjoy my story so is a guilty pleasure of mine. <3
7468967 Fixed, thanks. :)
7469956 Perhaps... or something worse. Or better! Maybe it's just super fancy new armor. Eeyup. Totally.
7469958 I haven't gone far enough! ... Okay maybe a bit too far.
7470006 ... Nightmare Moon would be unamused. Possibly. This might happen... maybe. :P
7470018 Wasn't so calm once he found out... Also, total 5th edition junkie now. As a dm, I find it soooo much easier to run that PF and 3.5.
7470021 Pretty much... Can't stand 4th edition. But mostly because I had a really bad experience with it.
7470104 Thanks! Honestly, all of you readers have really helped to keep me motivated and wanting to write more. :) I can't believe how popular this has become.
7470193 Oh my gosh I feel so dumb now. I ALMOST went to hoofacles, but then I was like 'wait, no, shoot, they aren't called handacles, why are they called manacles?' then I spent like ten minutes trying to find out what the 'man' stood for and I then got distracted, gave up and wrote them as maracles since... well, more as a joke. Guhhhh. Fixed though, thanks!
7470257 Pathfinder is basically 3.75. If I know the story correctly, the makers of pathfinder made stuff for 3.5. However, when 4th edition came out and the OGL changed, they couldn't work for it anymore so they decided to make their own game, pathfinder, rather than trying to use 4th edition. It has some things balanced, but it can suffer from a lot of the bloat and stuff that 3.5 has, though in the end they are heavily similar and a lot of carryover can happen between them. I'm still a 5th edition junkie though, even though I still kinda like 3.5/pathfinder.
7470297 I haven't played much 5th, but it seemed pretty fun when I tried it. I just prefer slightly more complicated game engines (heck, I'd play 3.5 if Pathfinder wasn't better at class balance).
I'm also one of those rare people who actually enjoyed 4th, but of the versions I've actually played, it's definitely the weakest. A good game engine on its own merits, but weak compared to its predecessors and successors.
Just blazed thru this story in the last two hours. Let me just say my first impression based on the summary alone was...not positive. I was thinking "Ugh the author is just going to do a lazy rehash of the canon and probably not going to do anything interesting. Well might as well give it a chance even if it is out of pity."
...I will now torch this incorrect thinking with a flamethrower and replace it with "OMG This is awesome! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS LIKE CHOCOLATE!"
I'd LOVE to see more of this!
7470433 The best way I found to describe 4th edition is that it is a pretty good game system with a terrible roleplaying system tacked on. I would personally suggest checking out 13th Age though as Rob Heinsoo and Jonathan Tweet (Lead designers of D&D 4th edition and 3rd Edition respectively) managed to boil down the strong combat system of 4th edition and added much better support for roleplaying.
4 Strange Hoofacles for The Princess of Love,
4 Strange Hoofacles for the Mortal Princeling, doomed to die.
One Crown to rule them all, One crown to find them,
One Crown to take them all and to the Darkness, Bind them
In the Land of Equestria, where Nightmare Moon Lies
Moony's dialog was kinds wack, there...
So much awesome and disturbingly dark all in one package, I really do hope twilight triumphs
Loved the story so far, awesome work, keep it up.
7470529 Are you addicted to chocolate?
It's true Fourth edition is just bleh, I'm alright with third because you really could do more though my preference is 3.5 andthis is awkward.I love this story, I'm not feeling well so excuse my typos if I made any.
Overall love the characters, plot, and setting they are very cohesive and work brilliantly. There are a few things bugging me though, you haven't touched on what is happening without the sun to the world outside the castle much. It's been two weeks or so, I'd expect some side effects by now especially concerning plants. Certain animals that only hunt during the day would be affected too.
My only critique other than that is you missed a few minor typos and errors.
She wasprotecting ponies, this should be She was protecting ponies.
Other than that love it, very fun take on the idea of a nightmare moon winning Equestria.
Also I bet it's mind control regalia she is making, or power amplification regalia, or a one ring system, or a soul jar phylactery setup.
One last thing, I request Pinkie Pie show up in a Spanish Inquisition out of Monty Python expy outfit (Ponyvillian Inquisition? Pinkie Inquisition?).
Because you said the words "Nobody expects Pinkie" and now that image is stuck in my head.
Awesome chapter, but I'm just wondering, I thought Twilight didn't know Cadence was dating Shining Armor?
8432774
Different Universe
Even farther down the rabbit hole..
I know I’m not finished reading this story, but will Twilight ascend into an alicorn?
Ew. Heresy.
Ofc she would love it 😂
Does Twilight have a cutie mark?