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Published 29th Jan 2016
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An Odd Apology - RummyKun

Pinkie goes to apologize to the Hooves family for scaring little Chirpy, but it gets a bit weird.

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PiMan #1 · Jan 29th, 2016 · 2 · ·

You've got a lot of description, but it is all mechanical description instead of emotional description.

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