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HauntingSpiritRisingMoon


My pony OCs, who will comment on stuff, as well as write fanfictions!

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When Fluttershy tells her friends that her brother is coming over, they expect some goofy stallion who was like a nerd. They were wrong. Boy are they wrong.

(Conatins slight M/M Romance.)

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Comments ( 17 )

When star came into the picture. :rainbowlaugh:

7004270 Yeah. I always wanted Rarity to get turned down....


TURNED DOWN FOR WHAT.





Sorry not sorry.

7004373 That's okay. :twilightsmile:
Good work. There are some stories like that.

7004373 Rarity: Don't you see I am trying to get you to ask me on a date.
Derpy: That would be a bad idea the last date I had ended up with a six inch bullet in her skull.

7004423 .................? Sorry, I don't get the reference- OH IS IT JAMES BOND!?

What's m/m?

7004728 It means gay shipping or male/male.

7004482 No that's a true story no references

7005438 uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh................................................?

but if he's anything like Fluttershy, he's going to be a lot like her."

Isn't this redundant? If he's like Fluttershy, he's like Fluttershy? :unsuresweetie: What?
Also, you changed POV for one paragraph, and used 'witch' instead of 'which' :applejackunsure:
That is all. Keep up the good work!

7005829 Yeah, sorry.... I mean, the main 6 are being prejudice. To them, being slightly like Fluttershy means exactly like Fluttershy- In this context.

7005853
Ah, I think I understand what you were trying to say now.

Fluttershy's brother is an earth pony... Seems legit. She must have been the Pound Cake of her family.

7016468 Now all I can imagine is Pound and FLuttershy circling around in the air while Dragon and Pumpkin give eachother deadpan looks.

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