Things can go wrong quickly in the 25th century. What was a vacation for your average kid is now an identity crisis in a world that isn't black and white and line between real and unreal is erased. Your friends aren't who you think they are
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Meh I'm to tired to properly edit this. If anyone finds any grammar mistakes please point them out and i'll correct them when i get the chance.
Yawn. Rough day. AP work, preventing my parents from killing each other. Just another day in the life of JC6
Little disappointed when Dane didn't just snap his neck but the ending left me satisfied.
Nice addition of the possibility of robot skitzophrenia.
Oh yeah.
"YOU TWO SHOULD KISS!"
Huh, what a coincidence. This story and my username are the same haha. I'll definitely check this out story when I have time.
Great chapter. Ryan got his comeuppance that he so richly deserved. I also loved the "I Robot" reference at the end.
........................................................................ so this is awsome
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Thank you for being a merciful author and not making us wait too long for the next update. Also, great job with the story.
Thank god my internet came back when it did. This went from a board out of my skull day to a terrific one!
She finally says she loves him, he forgets the past three days
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TH' FUCK?! THAT'S MY RAILGUN DESIGN!
Oh, and truly epical chapter my freind.
1233116 Another glorious chapter Sir.
i see that I Robot refference. tiss a good movie......
ALFRED LANNING CREATED JETT
Woah, that was pure awesome. A very good, as well as tragic chapter. I was leaning forward the whole time, sucking up the glorious soup of words you cooked up, even going so far as to accidentally knock down my table trying to read more. Good thing my TV's far away... Well anyway, this was the best chapter of the best story I've ever read. Very emotional, and I loved every bit of it!
Au Revoir,
~Onward and Upwards!
FyreGhost.
very good chapter!
Yes.
YES.
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So lets see....
Rape x ? (9.5 - ? years in prison (US average))
Abuse x ? (I have no idea)
Attempted Murder x 2 (50-80 years in prison (US average))
Attempted Destruction of a multi-trillion dollar government project x 3 (damn.)
Damaging a multi-trillion dollar government project x 1 (have fun!)
Well Ryan, have fun being in prison for about three or four evers!
'bout time, too.
EDIT: Oh, and also... If you haven't guessed, I don't like Ryan.
He waz so close!!
So very close!!
anyway amazing fic, it even got featured that's how I learnedly of it. See, gettting featured does help sometimes! (If your story is good, if not, its gonna be a Shit storm) but anyway, awesome story. Btw, how much halo influence is on this? Halsey? Oni? A.I.s? Very much so
1255094 Actually Halo had only about 1/3 of the influence in this story. A few names for locations i got from the series but a lot of the names i plucked from history and the internet. The rest came from Ender's Game, The Unincorporated Man, Star Trek, BSG, I Robot, and a few of the works by Phillip K. Dick.
A lot went into this story. I had it planned from a simple idea I got a long time ago and it evolved from there. Originally it was going to be about a kid in a futuristic society who's socially withdrawn and a random girl who won't leave him alone; she was either going to be Vinyl Scratch, RD, or Spitfire. How I got from that to this I will never know. But by the end of it when I started writing I had a story about an android with PTSD who happens to find the Wonderbolt captain in the South American Rain Forest.
That waz an amazingly random train of thought.
But if it wazn't, we wouldn't have this story now would we?
1255284 No I don't think we would
But my thoughts are always random and chaotic. A lot of my ideas for story arcs come from random thoughts that go through my head.
Huh. You must be my clone. Cu's that's exactly what I do (you haz been counter-pinkied)
It just occurred to me that Jett has been caught in an explosion, almost got forced into Jupiter's atmosphere, ditched a crashing plane, escaped a panther in the Amazon, got hit by a car, took a baseball bat to the head, and got shoot multiple times in the back and head. It would appear that there Ain't No Grave can hold his body down!
1265005 We'll see
Moar
That is all
1270818 Well with a mountain of school work higher than Everest and the fact I'm now working on two stories there won't be a new chapter for a while. But I do know where I'm going with it so, no writer's block for this story.
1270869 No writers block??
TEACH ME YOUR SECRET
1271413 Plan the story about two months in advance before you start writing it.
I quite literally had storyboard like 70% of this before I started writing it. The rest kinda just naturally evolved as I wrote it. A few things changed but the gist of it stayed the same.
Basically I storyboarded all the major and a few minor but key events in the story and just winged the rest of it when I came to it.
I though this was kind of fitting with Jett.This is what happens when nostalgia for a series kicks in. Gotta love the Tiberium.
1298575 One your first note there is and explanation for that later.
I'll go fix the second thing right now.
i just realized that he's gone crazy. he's talking to himself.
1299117 Cool
I tried my best to explain that with good old physics. Generalizing this story was a bit difficult but once that hill was climbed it was a lot easier to write.
As I reread this I came upon something which has me a little confused. The school has scanners to detect weapons right? If so then how did Jett get his directed energy weapon past them? I'm sure it's just something I have overlooked or forgot just like every other time I have raised a question like this.
The end part is totally from i-robot. like. im 99.9% sure
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It's a quote directly from the movie. The main doctor is the one that states it. It plays TWO times during the movie.
DA fuq!? There aren't any 2's in binary code
He just randomly pulls a syringe filled with an Unknown Liquid out of his pocket and he can't even remember why he has it?
I don't know if someone already asked, but have you read "ghost in the wires"? Its the autobiography of the hacker Kevin Mitnick, non-fiction and all. Title reminded me.