Things can go wrong quickly in the 25th century. What was a vacation for your average kid is now an identity crisis in a world that isn't black and white and line between real and unreal is erased. Your friends aren't who you think they are
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So what about the fall?
4453079 Yes I will get to it soon enough. I only wrote this to prove to myself that I could still write to begin with after being away from it for so long.
4453181 arighty then been lookin forward to that next chapter for over two years. That was the first good story I found on this website back when I first joins in April of 2013
Someone told me steins gate was a bad anime.
I have to go hurt someperson
4455562 Whoever told you Stein's;Gate was a bad anime is clearly to stupid to understand it. It has some hard science in it as well as references to pop culture and literature in it as well as references to real life events and organizations. However none of the science in it is done in a way that you don't understand it.
The only real gripe with the show that one may have is that it has a "Slow" start and doesn't get going until about the end of episode 9 and gets super real around episode 12. The first half of the show consists of, well I hate to put it this way but it is kinda true, the main cast dicking around and fucking around with a microwave so much that it becomes a time machine. Still, the first 9 episodes are important to the story. And though it could be considered slow it was nothing unbearable like the whole Endless Eight fiasco of the Haruhi series.
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There is no room for argument here
:D
4455814 Dude, this show is too real right now. It's got me feeling some type of way. I'm about to cry.
Fuck yeah, man! Jonny's back in the motherfuckin' house!
My heart seriously skipped a beat when I saw this, I am SO happy your back.......THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME! !
Fuck that was good. Didn't expect to see anything from this anymore, you made me happy :D
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Noooo
Bail
Bail!!!!!!
Or don't, it is a great show.
halo 3 cortana's quote *halo fan squeal*
FUCK YES!!!!!! JONNY IS BACK BITCHES. And how many more extras do you think you will upload to CyberFire?
4463023 Don't know yet.
Somewhere in the world, thousands of female ovaries, within a 5 mile radius of this chapter ,just got obliterated. Thank you!
I am so glad I wasn't drinking anything when I read that.
Also, please don't tell me people 500 years in the future still know who Justin Bieber was. Five years was bad enough.
Do my eyes deceive me? ANOTHER chapter of CyberFire?
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THEY DO NOT.
Loved it!
and I found one reference:
Headstrong to take on anyone! Trapt/ LP
4293902 ?
4678956 Yeah I know. It's an error that was never fixed as I never went back and corrected every little thing.
Fixed now.
4689157 I end up doing that a lot whenever I watch a show or read something or anything like that now. But again, I wrote that about a year ago and if you've been reading this from the beginning all the way to now you can probably see some kind of improvement. At some points though, for the sake the story, some scientific accuracy has to go out the window or you have to vague and make shit up. The problem with writing certain things is that you want to write them but you lack the experience or knowledge in a subject to do it properly.
For a while now I've wanted to do a military sci fi story but again the problem with that is that I'm not in the military at the moment and a great many things would have to happen in the world for me to join like another Hitler, Aliens, or the draft.
But I'll go back and try to reword that so it makes more sense. When I was writing this I had the attitude of devil may care as I would literally be posting the chapters in some cases just after I'd finished typing the last period. The most I ever did in terms of editing or prereading was prereading the thing myself, which leaves room for error, or getting others here on the site to read it for me before I posted it. And again, that leaves room for errors as there aren't any professional editors that I know about on this site. I could be wrong but at the time I was writing this the whole writing several thousand words at a time I wasn't about to go through it with a comb and rake out every little error I found.
I have to say, this story was really good. True, there were a few elements I wasn't too keen on, but overall, a solid job. The mark of a good fanfiction is when it doesn't feel like a fanfiction. When it could either be easily mistaken for an official work, or you could 'file off the serial numbers' and it would still stand on it's own as a competent work on its own merits. Your story is good and you should feel good.