Things can go wrong quickly in the 25th century. What was a vacation for your average kid is now an identity crisis in a world that isn't black and white and line between real and unreal is erased. Your friends aren't who you think they are
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lol, just lol
i'm more interested than i was before. why? pain and injury. i love it.
“Sir, I mean this in the absolutely worst way possible: Go fuck yourself.”
So many insults were learn today.
...Just to be that one dick that everyone either loves or hates... Bwhahahahah!
"Fucking Metal of Honor for all I care."
....Medal. Yay.
Well, I saw one other mistake, but I couldn't find it, so I was probably seeing things. I LOVED This chapter. This showed how deep Jett was, and how fuckin' awesome he was. This story keeps getting better and better! This is by far, my favorite story at the moment. You, are a very talented author. The words put into this story struck EMOTION in me. I'm glad I gave this story a chance and read it. Freakin' perfect!
EDIT: I'd like to see what happened in the fight though, but then, this'll probably be all cleared up in the next chapter.
~Onward and Upwards!
1116497 god damn it!!!!!!!!!!!
Knew I should have proof read it again before I published it. Ah well. I'll fix it once I'm done mowing the lawn
1116597 You do that... You do that...
Well hey fuck me I was close enough about ryan huh?
1116957 Yes. That's where i got the name from.
Pretty sure Jett is having on of these moments... media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m32o1fKP5P1qk24nj.gif
1116809 Well we were close. Rayan's not dead... A shame is what that is
1118958 Not dead. But close enough.
I'm betting my cookies on Rayan having a shatered pelvise and ruptured testicles amonge his injuries! MAKE HIM STERILE!
1118985 We'll see...
So...Who is stupid enough to attack an android? They have superhuman strength, seriously, humans were built for running, well, jogging actually, whereas Jett was more built for actual combat...
1119062 I'm saying.
1119111 Yup, Ender's Game. I was wondering how many people would catch that reference.
Can't wait for the movie next year.
1116458 That's funny because I made up most of those on the spot.
Hello, Mate. I have been following your story since one of the first chapters ( i barely remember but I think you uploaded 4 chapters when you were starting). And I have one thing to say - this story is bloody beautiful! I truly love the concept, even if a bit rushed at the start, but still. Future Technologies and Space are the topics that I love to read about the most. Oh, how many feelings this story inflicted in me. Especially about Ryan. I feel true rage and anger against him, ready to bloody kill him with my bare hands if he would be in real life ( haven't read the chapter 19 yet, so dunno what will happen in it). Also, about weapons of 20th century, were there any, like, powerful weapons? Or does he need just some weapons to kill here adn there? Alright, gonna read the chapter now. Bloody brilliant fanfic, man.
1120039 Thanks. I'm glad you like it
And I admit I did rush it a bit during the first four chapters. Its kinda funny to look back and see how I first began this thing. To be honest I kinda started off winging this thing off of an idea I had a while back. Though that idea went through a lot of changes before it got here.
And as for the weapons, 20th century, powerful and still viable hundreds if not a few thousand years into the future.
AKA. Nukes.
Oh, Shi-, forgot about the Nukes ( just thought that weapons of the early years of 21st century are way more powerful). Also, just read the 19th chapter, its hilarious and awesome at the same time :D keep up the great writing man! It is rare to find people who can write nice fanfics, easy to read.
Wow. This chapter was quite the experience. I am extremely impressed how you pulled off that scene with Mr. Ackerson. Seriously, that anger was almost palpable, and I could vividly imagine what was going on. I am however quite worried about Jett's mental stability... let's just see how this goes.
Damn it!!!! I was wrong! I mean, I'm all for the android beating the shit out of the pompos idiots, but couldn't we had Spitfire at least fuck up.a couple of them? Please?
Fuck you sir, and your cluster fuck of allusion. I expect a summary of events leading to this chapter in the following chapters.