Things can go wrong quickly in the 25th century. What was a vacation for your average kid is now an identity crisis in a world that isn't black and white and line between real and unreal is erased. Your friends aren't who you think they are
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3555066 It will be considerably more violent than this one. A fair warning.
3555074 Shhh! You should just tell them that it's all fluffy pink ponies and such!
This is one of those stories that makes me ask (among many many many other things) why are ponies even in this (even the names)?
Any fictional world at all could have been stuck into this. There is no need for ponies at all.
It's a fairly generic and flawed take on the over-used, under-thought 'Earth-in-the-future' genre.
3555192 You could say that about a lot of fics on this site If you have nothing useful to say then go work on your own stories instead. No one's asking you to read mine.
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Go back into your hole, Alondro.
Honestly, I've never seen you make a positive comment on anything.
3555074 bitch please, my bodies been ready from the start of this mothertrucking train wreck!
3555074 love it
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I've seen him make positive comments on stories that are good
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you put it up on the internet, you open yourself to criticism
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I asked myself the same question.
Still, I have to commend the author for having the dedication to write 356,000 words, even if they aren't horse words.
3555097 That Are Dancing On Rainbows?
3556767 Eeeyup!
3555192 Ever heard of Anthro and motherfucking fan fiction? Didn't think so, jackass.
3556573 There's a thick line between criticism and insults.
...Forgetting Alondro's non helpful comment..
I Personally Enjoyed This Story All The Way Through. While Some Chapters Were A little More Dry Than Others It Still Kept My Attention And Made Me Wanting More. A Few Chapters Were Fillers But You Did Those Chapters In Such A Way That It Enhanced The Story Or Just Gave A Little More Insight Into The Character's Lives. A Few Stories That I Have Read Tried To Go The 'Earth-In-The-Future Route',As Alondro So Eloquently Stated, Did Quite Well In Their Endeavor But They Did Not Do It In Such A Way As CyberFire. Your Story Was Well Thought Out And Properly Executed.
I Agree With Mänic, If You Were To Change Everything From Pony, You Would Still Have A Great Story That Would Have The Merit To Be Published.
I Await More Great Things From You.
3556867 well here they didnt have fur since they were humans with wings and such. so theres that.. but i agree nonetheless
3556889 I don't like people who insult, rather than give criticism. It's just my nature.
3556895 same. i was just stating they weren't anthro. even if they were, it doesn't give him anymore right to be a dick and insult JC6.
3556903 Yup :P
3556573 There's a difference between criticism and just saying something is bad without giving any reasons why or what can improved. Criticism is fine. As long as it's useful.
3557001 So you'd rather I give you one of my 6-page merciless shreddings?
Be relieved I'm simply not interested enough.
3557383 I honestly couldn't care any less. Your 'merciless shreddings' as you put it don't do anyone any good when you just spend your time badmouthing the author while offering little to nothing as to what they could realistically do to improve their writing. The simple fact you call them 'merciless shreddings' says far more than any 6 page diatribe you could come up with.
3557528 Hopefully, if all goes well. ;-)
3557474 Oh I used to offer plenty of very carefully worded criticisms, taking time to back up my points and explain how aspects might be improved. But no one liked those either.
Why waste effort on those who refuse advice?
XD, I always find it funny when Jett goes up against thugs and kicks the shit outta them.
3557670 Have you read some of the things you've written? No offense but after reading some of 'criticisms' I wouldn't want you reviewing anything. And again, no offense but people generally won't take advice from someone who has yet to demonstrate his expertise on a subject. I wouldn't take medical advice from someone who had yet to prove they were even and MD.
3557751 I like writing troll fics. They're much more fun than so much of the depressed emo-angst nonsense.
Frankly, what annoys me more than anything is seeing some truly astounding stories written so magnificently I am certain Tolkien himself would bow in awe receive next to no attention while some sloppily thrown-together pseudo-sci-fi story with barely 11K words after 8 months gets over 1,000 likes just because HiE Gary Stuness and somebody blew up Celestia in latest chapter... because now there's suddenly a war that hadn't even been mentioned to that point. I'm not exaggerating.
3557826 I know some stories don't receive the attention they deserve. I have a few of them on my favorites list that have less than 20 likes and they're excellently written.
However just because a story may be popular but not as well written as you'd like doesn't exactly give anyone the right to start badmouthing the author. I find that constructive criticism always works best.
3559011 I have encountered some authors who believe they are the 2nd coming of writing, no matter how dismal their scribblings.
After several dozen of those, I am a jaded husk of cynicism and evil.
3560034 All this is for me is a simple hobby.
3555097
Screw ponies?
What do you... think..... this site.........
I'm going to stop now
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Okay. Thank you for answering my question and good luck for your next stories.
I was wondering: Can anyone dig up a quick link to the Cello version of Viva La Vida that was used in this story? I cannot for the life of me remember which chapter it's in.
God i just love what you write and how you write it!!
+ i got a new avatar thingy
3591804 Chapter 25
This is one of the best stories i have read so far on this sight. :D
Note: If i find out anyone dies i will put you six feet under.
Thankyou.
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Well, if I would have a choice to be invisible, I would run around kicking everyone and shoving stink bombs in their underwear
Oh, and, sorry for my comment being 1.5 years late :)
I'm done. After 10 hours of reading I am done. Most awesome story,made me stay up all night reading :)
3560087 SEQUEL!!!!!!
I loved this story so inspiring I love how you made love between the two main protagonists possible.
That was absolutely AMAZING!!!!! Ive gotten used to good writing so much that if the writing isnt above average I just ignore it.......But THIS was absolutely FUCKING PERFECT!!!!!! I LOVE YOU.....I will now read every other story you Have and I VERY STRONGLY ENCOURAGE YOU TO CONTINUE THIS STORY.........PLEASE?
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Sorry to ruin it for you, man, but JC6 has sealed this story tightly. It ended just right, leaving any other adventures that you want, up to your imagination.
4081289 he said stuff about doing extras, did he not?...... and he can easily right an adventure that they have later such as some new event in equestria or maybe even the arrival of some other non equestrian humans.....he is the most talented writer I have ever seen and he can do anything with this story.........I say this very honestly.........he is better than pretty much every Author I have ever read....and I read a lot.....
I can't believe the story's already over. If only, if only... Anyways, I have nothing else to say but "Congradulations on a job well done!"
There isn't really anything I can say that you probably haven't already heard, so I will just say this. This is one of my favorite stories I have read in a while, especially on this site. It is one of those things that will stick in my head for a long time, constantly making me stop and wonder what the future has in store, for the story, the real world, and me. I don't know if that makes any sense but eh.
On a side note, this had one of the best endings from any book I have ever read. It actually wound down slowly instead of just stopping abruptly right after the climax, and you wrote it in such a way as to show the story will continue long after the actual text stops, but we aren't left feeling like we have to have more.
I could write more, but it would be all over the place and not make any sense whatsoever, so I will just say thank you (and the editor(s?)) for the time and effort you put into this art.
3585536 I fucking love your avatar. i h b f キル w q
4135699 What can I say? Accelerator is my boy.
I may or may not be re-reading this so that I can laugh some more at the chapter where he gets handcuffed using fluffy pink handcuffs...
4195402 My story, my economy, my currency, I can do whatever I want lol.
4245885 Out of curiosity, how can they get onto FanFiction but not here? If it's something that can be solved through other means then I'd rather take that option than making an account on a brand new website and posting a 350K word story onto it.
4294116 Bolt action is how one cycles a round from the clip to be fired. Just like gas operated use the expanding gas from firing the gun to cycle a new round in. However at the time I wasn't sure how that would work with a high powered magnetic coil gun so I went with something simpler.
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