Things can go wrong quickly in the 25th century. What was a vacation for your average kid is now an identity crisis in a world that isn't black and white and line between real and unreal is erased. Your friends aren't who you think they are
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hahahhahaha
wait ... is it bad i laughed like hell when he beat the shit out of those jocks? ........
well too bad
edit: WOO FIRST POST! i feel proud
"Jett bolted and slammed his fists into their heads, knocking them into la la land."
Fucking lol'd
OH god, LOL. Favorite chapter in this story, because of the emotion and pure butt-kick attitude! Awesome!
"in other news..."
ON TO THE NEX-
oh, it's the last chapter to be finished right now? :c
1129329 For now. I'll start the next one later tonight. Got some things to sort out today. But the next one will be out in a few days.
I lol so hard at allot of this...
Huh... I'm thinking Jett was actually "Protecting his 'investment' " If you know what I mean
1129724 I'm thinking this too
one day they will have sexy time
1130040 maybe, maybe not. He is a machine and thus clueless about many aspects of human relationships
1130158 He seems to be learning a hell of alot around spitfire from what I've seen IE Shame.
Mabye he isn't just a machine and thinks more of spitfire or why would he of stopped his plans?
my inner psyco is pleased.
when are Spitfire and Jett finally gunna kiss and go out?
1130239 Yup. She does hold some sort of power over him. But neither of them are really aware of it at the moment.
1130784 I like teasing people so... You'll see.
1131288 i have estimates ranging from th' next chapter to 43 from now, and different scenearios for all of them.
you won't surprise me no matter what.
1131365 That doesn't mean I can't try.
1131493 many have, all have failed.
tell ya what, if you surprise me, i'll eat my fedora.
1131900 I'll take you up on that.
Mr. Bison: YES! YES!
Love this chapter! Finally this Ryan gets a nice beating! And the whole bloody team with him. This story gets better and better! Also, nice to hear that you are starting to write a new chapter so soon :D Because this is the only story that I am reading right now ( I am a fast reader and other stories have long updates). Also, by breaking the pelvis of Ryan, do you mean that Jett smashed Ryan's "family jewels"?
Jett - Feeling Unlocked : Shame
Also, this phrase might describe Jett a bit ( not sure)
"Am I more than a human? Or less?"
-Adam Jensen.
Also, by the last news, I think that that means that the news will be that Venus is starting a war?
1133557 I'm thinking about doing something like that. Where Jett begins to display more and more aspects of humanity the more time he spends around Spitfire. And I plan on having a few things, like Venus, sitting in the background that will all come into play in later chapters.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story, Next chapter will be more centered around Spitfire.
1131288 why you tease us so much ;__;
"Suddenly Jett jerked forward as the sound of aluminum striking metal was heard. Jett turned around. One player had a metal bat and had decided to hit him over the head with it. The player looked from the dented bad to the android and back again."
I laughed there.
Wow. I just read through the whole story up to this point. Generally I avoid humanized fics, but this one is truly stellar. I might just have to read your other fic for this universe.
1135553 Just saying, my other stories aren't as up to par as this one. I was kinda going through a bit of a learning curve when i was writing them. And while the other fic is set in the same universe so to speak they are a bit unrelated to each other at this point in time.
1135611 So does After the fall happen after this fic then?
1136675 Sort of. I decided to remove the crossover tag until much later in the story. I also decided to take a bit of a respite from that story to work on this one since this one will be considerably longer.
1136684 Oh, but I don't understand cus in after the fall Spitfire is still on military Missions after them girffions but in cyberfire she just finished them before she came here
so much mindfuck and knowing how it ends ;-;
And I just want a happy ending (as do many others) and after the fall isn't one knowing what will happen to jett and spitfire
1137077 don't worry, there will be a happy ending for both stories.
1137270 you are my hero <3
STREET JUSTICE, BIATCH
Went to Mexico for a week with no internet connection. Came back to... PURE AWSOME
This line seems really familiar to me.
Ryan got his pelvis curb stomped... Exactly what I wished for!
Jonnycashsix you are a genious and now officialy my favorite author.
im thinking you meant "or"
Im pretty sure you meant fool instead of full
I think coons is a typo... at least I hope coons is a typo
3415457 Uh.... "Coon" is a racist term that we use sometimes in Australia.....
Uh..... Whoops!
JUST KISS!
Honestly sounds like these IPA guys are assholes anyway. Kinda wish he'd mailed those war plans.
5811863
Kiss who?
Wait...
Never mind
oh! 6 312 words
I will drink everything under you'r sink.