Things can go wrong quickly in the 25th century. What was a vacation for your average kid is now an identity crisis in a world that isn't black and white and line between real and unreal is erased. Your friends aren't who you think they are
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Whoo! Finally finished. A year and a half later and I have finished. It's been one hell of a ride...
I'm gonna miss these characters of mine. I really am.
As for the rest of you. Stay tuned for my next big thing if you want to. More will be coming.
On another note. I think I currently hold the record for the longest fic on this site that focuses on a Spitfire/OC ship. As well as it being one of the few that's actually finished and not on hiatus or cancelled. Yay me.
3529980 hi are going to make 2nd one later or are you just going to make a new one
3530040 What do you mean?
3530043 a 2nd story or a new one with new people just give me a hint on what new thing ok plz and thx
P.S. Love this story
3530067 A brand new project. Not CyberFire related. Darker and more of a political commentary. That's all I'm saying for now as I have to finish editing the first chapter of it.
3530075 and i'll read it
P.S. I am sad now NEED new story time to go on a random story hunt...
but this is one of my favorite story on FimFiction.com
I... I don't even have a meme or pic for this. This has been one of the longest and most enjoyable fic I've ever had the privilege of reading on this site. It's been so long since it first began and despite the time it took I'm glad that I stuck around. This story will stay in my heart and mind for many years.
Damnit, now I need to re-read this. It's a habit/tradition of mine to re-read my favorite stories when they finish. But anyway, I loved the ending, hope you make more quality stories like this one!
excellent, just excellent. all you'd really have to do is remove the few my little pony references you actually have in here(surprisingly few other than names) and you could likely get this published
A 350k story which sounds like it has an AWESOME story? Bring it on!
3530846 No. It's named after the river Acheron from greek mythology.
3530472 I'm with high wind.
I can't even...
This story...
This story is just beautiful and I'm happy to say that I stayed for all of it.
But now is the time for the Fall.
And now I honestly feel a little piece of me is gone now that this story has ended
Wow dude... this is Awesome! A great ending to an awesome story.
A fantastic ending to a story that I would definitely re-read again and again. Johnny, you've weaved the words you've been given, and have done a great job of it! It's a sad thing to see the end of a masterpiece, but all great things must come to an end. I'm glad it's this one! I cannot wait for what you have in store for us in the next story you're going to put out! I wish you the best of luck on your endeavors, my friend!
~Flames!
I've stuck with this story since it first began. I'm glad I did.
I loved every word of this story, from "Spitfire" to "them"
Thank you Jonny. Thanks for the absolutely wonderful story that you have given to us.
Until next time. I will be watching.
~Tomcat
Well, the chapter before and the finally chapter made me cry, I only picked this story up when the last chapters went up. I'm totally glad that I didn't miss it before it was gone, and now I thank you for writing this. It's definitely going onto my favorites.
-Missy
For 1.5 years, from the very beginning, this story kept me on the edge of my seat, gave me great moments to enjoy, changed my way of life and overall it made me feel great! It's sad to see it go, but it has been the greatest fanfiction that I have ever read. The last chapters wrapped everything up neatly, being an awesome ending to an incredible story.
Johnycashsix, thank you for the wonderful 1.5 years long ride!!!
~ Yaros
To put is simply this is brilliant thanks for the thrill!
This Story Was Amazing. I Loved It All The Way Through.
I have One Question Though. With Jax And The Rest, I Feel As If It Was Implied That They Were Spitfire,Dane,Gin,Jett,And Fleetfoot Reincarnated. Am I Correct? Cos I Think In One Chapter There Was Something That Implied The Same Thing About Jett And Spits.
3545419 I say nothing...
3545857 soo..thats a yes?
3545974 I leave that up to interpretation. Oh shit, I'm becoming an English teacher!
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The Story That Never Ends
But Always Begins
Shall Be Forever Told Differently
But Stay The Same In Essence
blarg
Its been a good ride, I started in at around chapter 30 I think and its been either on a favourite file to check for updates before I made an account or favourited. I get the feeling that I'll re read this sometime again. For such a magnificent story, have a follow.
You are the reason Spitfire is best pony.
Top rating here
17/17
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Wow. I'll be finding it extremely hard to find a story that tops this. Heck, it only took me under 5 days to read it was that good. Amazing work, JC6.
Fuck, now I'm going to find it hard to get back into the normal MLP mindset
>>>Terra Centauri was a bit of a dry world to say the least. Mostly desert, the vast majority of its water was contained underground in vast cave systems so large that even rain could fall inside of them. >>>
It was called Arrakis... Dune, the Desert Planet, sole source of the Spice, Melange...
It's really sad to see this is over. Its so hard these days to find stories of this kind of level of quality. The humour, to the characters. Everything is just perfect. I tip my hat to you for a job well done.
Is it bad that I played "Mad Season" by Matchbox 20 and wept as the story ended?
BRAVO!!!! Well done; it was worth every chapter!
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I have crying so much on this story that I did not want it to end. One day .... Will you do a sequel to this story? Or just another story of romance with the wonderbolts?
(I put the music of Coldplay Viva La Vida with history Non-stop so it was fine with. This is the main reason why I cry)
And I am sincerely sorry if you received other messages like that. I do not watch the other comments. But for other romance stories with the Wonderbolts would be fine, you're doing a super good job.
3565496 Most likely no. I don't know what I'd write about for either idea that I haven't already done here. I only chose to do a Wonderbolts story because Spitfire had oddly shown up with some degree of consistently in my other stories, (including one I deleted so there were once more), so I decided to write a story featuring her as a main character. It also helped that there are only a handful of Spitfire/OC stories out there and even fewer that are actually being updated regularly and are not on hiatus or canceled. Unlike Rainbow Dash/OC which are a dime a dozen.
This more or less came from a collection of the right conditions and was a learning experience for me as a writer. I've learned as much as I can from writing this story so a sequel to it, especially after the cap ending I put on it wouldn't make sense. The most I or anyone else could hope for would be a Spin off but again, unlikely.
I'm just as bittersweet about ending the story too. This thing was literally like my child for the past year and a half but it's finished now and I've moved on. It has it's place here on the site and that's enough for me. Sorry to disappoint.
But again, as I said earlier, stories don't end because I or anyone else stops telling them...
hey jonnycashsix! i was just wondering if you have or could possibly put this story up to FanFiction.net. it was just for a friend who can't get onto FimFiction and really wants to read the story. so if you could it would be much appreciated!!!
Sincerely,
Qazzaqqwert
Hey there! I read this story in the year of 2014 and when I finished it, it inspired me to make more stories of my own. Question, have you thought about publishing this story printed on soft or hard back? Anyway, I put this in my library and now it's 2017. I decided to re-read the story and I was blown away from it like it did in 2014. This story, in particular, is amazing and I wish you would write more in this universe in particular. I have a few ideas, but if you're not writing anymore, then that is understandable, but I re-read your story again so I could be inspired again. It did the trick. ^.^ I don't know if you're still active on this site anymore, but as a reader and writer, please keep on doing what you're doing.
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Contrary to appearances, I am still around here...
Just a bit quieter these days. I am still writing but at the moment, I'm focusing heavily on my own original writings and making a serious attempt to break into novel writing. I'd like to think I've improved greatly since I typed the last word in this story. Honestly, I do like to look back at this gigantic beast of a story and I truly do wonder just how high school me, with the monumental work load I had at the time, managed to write a 370K word story. Still, looking at it, there are plenty of things I know I would do infinitely better since starting and finishing this. But I like to keep it up as a giant road sign reminder of where I've been and where I'm hopefully going.
If all goes well, and I can break in (depending on when that may be), you may find something of mine at your local book store. And if that happens, perhaps this won't be the last you see of Jett, Spitfire, Dane, and Gin. At least, not as they are now...
I do enjoy keeping my characters around and well occupied.
P.S. They say hello.
Unyielding hierophant.
Really?
This is what it looks like, or very close to the Titan
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