Things can go wrong quickly in the 25th century. What was a vacation for your average kid is now an identity crisis in a world that isn't black and white and line between real and unreal is erased. Your friends aren't who you think they are
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Like this Comment if you want me to write a sex Chapter. Keep in mind it would not be out for a while as I would have to do a lot of reading and... (GULP)... research on the subject. And I would be sending it to a few people for prereading and editing before it was released but hopefully when it's ready, it will be a well written piece of work. Also either the chapter would come with a mature warning plus a mature warning on the main page of it but the story ITSELF would remain rated TEEN, or the story's rating itself would change to Mature. If you have any comments on the issue feel free to leave them.
So... Like the living FUCK out of this Comment if you want me to write sex for you all...
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...Or Like this Comment if you DON'T want me to write one. Keep in mind that I'm 50/50 on this issue and will go either way on it. If you want to keep the overall innocence of this story, I use the term innocent lightly considering the kind of shit I've written here over the course of the year. If I don't write a clop chapter then basically what would happen is that thing that happens in movies when they cut to the next day when everyone wakes up from it all.
So... if you DON'T want me to write an explicit sex scene between an angel girl and mildly traumatized/psychologically disturbed android. Like the living shit out of this comment.
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3160856 I so liked the FUCK outta this comment!
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3160856 o.O You know what you should do? Publish another story under the guise of being an addition to this, and you won't have to update this one's ratings and such! 'Tis the perfect plan, matey!
Oh I feel so bad for you right now
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*ahem*
3161085 i'd rather not if possible.
Sex!
You're research should bring you to a local brothel.
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Just an idea, m8!
Love from Arty!
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Me Gusta
3160856 Well, if you do choose to write it, as a connoisseur of many an erotic material I'd like to give a little advice, if you don't mind at least.
One of the biggest mistakes that I often see people writing mature scenes in general, not just sex scenes or pornographic literature is that they forget the descriptions of the feelings involved. We don't want to hear that somebody pounded somebody else into submission, we want to read about how that felt and perhaps even the emotions behind it. With that said though that goes for most writing when you're talking about experiences the reader may not have had.
Another piece of advice is to avoid anything that majorly breaks the flow of the piece once it gets going. If there's a break between everything that's alright if it's been more than at four thousand words as a good bench mark (you can get away with around two thousand in certain pieces, depending on the situation and story) but you don't want to have little tiny breaks here and there. You can even get away with a lack of proficiency in writing sex if you have a good flow going.
Lastly, without seeing any erotica of yours I can't really give you a ton of advice but make sure that if you're writing this for a specific fetish or something like that make sure that you stick to the fetish you chose. If you chose. If you chose a domination type thing that's fine, but don't start bringing in a riding crop unless you want to have gags, bindings and pretty much the whole deal. Barring something specifically required due to the story or characters that's usually a good rule to follow.
If you don't choose to write the scene or if the votes choose for you not to I suppose you at least have a disturbing level of writing sexual matters matched only by any who has been writing it for at least an equivalent to a good fifty hours or so.
With that said you might want to take what I say with a grain of salt. While I have seen quite a bit of written things like sex scenes and the like the things I mentioned were generally trends that when followed made things I tended to like more, so correlation doesn't necessarily mean causation.
Intriguing chapter, thanks for a good time I spent reading it. But I have a certain question to ask on the topic of the possible Sex chapter - Would the chapter after it be the last one? I assume that chapter after the possible Sex chapter will exist, because you mentioned that if no Sex chapter will be written everything will happen like in movies - characters wake up next morning.
3163818 No that would not be the last chapter. As I said I am wrapping things up and hope to end this story on Chapter number 66 with two other chapters behind it being dedicated to production notes and credits.
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Hm, I must have missed the information about chapter 66. Thanks a lot for the response, looking forward to your next chapters!
You have to ask? Hell, after forty chapters of Can Not Spit It Out teasing with those two, I'd hope they wreck at least two beds and one non-load-bearing wall.
AWWWW YEEEAAAAHHHH!!!IZ NOT CLOP CUZ IZ HYOOOMMAAANNNN!!!
You know it would be so funny if they're about to do the D but they are being watched by Discord sitting there eating popcorn I would love to see their reaction it's so weird this guy is creating this much chaos and the King hasn't shown up yet.