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Time a constant that only move in one way forward. As such much is lost to time. Many years ago we all saw Equestria fell, and now is but an only fleeting legend. Time seemed content on letting Equestria become one of the many secrets that it held.

But when the darkness seemed that it would overtake the last memory of Equestria, a simple spark occurred. Now a small yet bright flame burns keeping those memories alive.


The picture was taken by me.

Thank you to my great friend Erina Tail Yellow For all the help.

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FRIEND! i SEE HOW THINGS ARE... SISTER.

But good work and super proud of the story. Super happy to help.

Quite an interesting story, but you should definitely look for an Editor. Here are some errors that caught my eyes:

Near the town a small hill arose on the hill, 

 Lastly, some people could harness raw magic know as eather

You probably meant ether.

They were said to be the Sun, Moon, love, and Magic it self-incarnated.

should be "themselves incarnated", with "them" being the Sun, Moon, Love and Magic. (also if you are going to capitalize Sun, Moon and Magic in this sentence you should probably also capitalize Love.)

"What could six people due against an army?"

Should be "do".

"How that posable?" a young girl asked.

Don't think has anything with posing should be "possible".

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Thanks for pointing those errors out. I do have an editor look over my work before I release it. As for those errors well where only human.

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