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Congrats on the 100 000 words!!
Also, a lot of chapters are just average day in Winter's totally not average life.
So, is Winter a Mary sue? Im not complaining, i just want to know. I don't really care if she's a Mary sue or not.
Great chapter, MAOR.
7092115 Depends on if she sees herself as perfect, believes she is perfect and the world around her believes she is perfect as well as the audience. She can't loose, she is untouchable, and no one can say she can do wrong. So... Let's look at the evidence so far.
She raped someone. Killed a bunch without feeling anything. Almost died. Twice. Got her ass kicked with telekinesis. Knows she isn't perfect. She has skills that most pegasi with an Air Affinity can learn. She as an absolute fear of her birth mother, (which may or may not be implemented, yet.) Everyone that is in the military knows what she has done and view her as a threat which helps hid the truth from most of those that she is surrounded by.
Her major trait is also a trait that a lot of humans have, and that is the ability to succeed in most areas that they apply themselves too.
Her second major trait is her intelligence and love for strategy games. Thus, she is cold and calculating when she fights.
So. Is she a Mary Sue by definition? Not really. Is she a little over-powered? (Take away her earrings that Umbra made and clip one wing and she can't do shit.) Not really.
Well, there is you answer. Hope it helps. Maybe. IDK.
Damn. Now I want her Guitar. It sounds like its awesome. Fireballs, Air Blades, lightning, AoE waves, Impalers, and who knows what else.
So now she's Ember McLain from Danny Phantom... I'm okay with this
'Helljumpers! How do we go?!'
"We go feet first into Hell!"
I think she is
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I thought of Lego Batman beating the crap outta all the villans while singing
Well this is where I get off. It started off so well but has just spiralled into theauthors self insert insanity.
The tone is gone
The humour has devolved into sex jokes
the protagonist is a poor street rat who also has in depth knowledge of nerd culture
The world has been shattered beyond suspension of disbelief (rly gunships, how..... go explain what a helicopter is to someone who has never seen one then tell them to build it)
you just teleport Winter from one set piece to another without any regard to what happens inbetween. Instead of a soliud story that we started off with we have a character who is street smart but also a nerd but also a political savant but also a great guitarist but also a great flyer but also..... it's just untenable. you very quickly stop caring about a character when they are good at everything and never lose.
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So basically cannon Twilight Sparkle in a nutshell?
Well that was awesome good to see another author that has talent in good stories,it's so hard to find good stories these days,keep up the epic work!
I hope I'm not the only one who thought of Dante's devil arm Nevan.
https://www.google.com/url?q=https://devilmaycry.fandom.com/wiki/Nevan_(Devil_Arm)&sa=U&ved=2ahUKEwioqYDkrfvkAhUCLK0KHRcmBwgQFjAAegQIBhAB&usg=AOvVaw3XT9jtdlvw6Pqjz9te6JWG
I hope I'm not the only one who thought of Dante's Nevan.
https://www.google.com/url?q=https://devilmaycry.fandom.com/wiki/Nevan_(Devil_Arm)&sa=U&ved=2ahUKEwioqYDkrfvkAhUCLK0KHRcmBwgQFjAAegQIBhAB&usg=AOvVaw3XT9jtdlvw6Pqjz9te6JWG
As I sang the song, I could see that the entire crowd was entranced to the lyrics. I even heard a snare drum pound along to the beat that I made. It wasn't one of my favorites, but it certainly was enjoyable to play. The reaction of the crowd was priceless as I finished, but I didn't stop there. I adjusted myself and played another song that I knew how to play the violin, and translated it to the guitar. I knew that it wasn't going to be as powerful as a full orchestra, but that didn't matter much. I just wanted to play.
The song is no more on YouTube so I was wondering could you put the name of the song on the notes or just repost it.
I cracked a smile at them and thought of a song before I hit the red lever into the, on position. They all gave me a funny look as my guitar began to glow an azure color. The lead pony of the group of ten pointed at my guitar with a smug smile with his sword and said: "What are you going to do with that? Play us to death?" he laughed. I played a note, causing the tip head of my guitar to glow for a second before a bolt of lightning shot out and killed one of the assassins instantly. We all stood there in shock, but they weren't as fast to recover.
this one is no more as well thought you'd like to know it would become the nice if you can fix this or you could post it in notes.