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I got a feeling spitfire will be out for blood
I'm just going to sit here and hope the pay off for this torture is Winter getting Alicorned by the rainbow cannon.
Maybe Summer too since she should be able to feel Winter's pain and could get caught in the blast trying to help.
Forgive me for my obliviousness to the reason, but, why didnt Winter just pull out a can a whoop-ass on Teresa and the sisters/brothers?
I mean, she took out a pack of Diamond Dogs all by herself and has been extensively trained in hand-to-hand combat by two ponies with a plethora of fighting experience.
Fighting off three ponies whom which probably don't have much experience in their new bodies, let alone the physic or years of fighting experience that Winter has, doesn't sound like much of a challenge for her.
7123766 Teresa Dies to Rose=Bad. Teresa dies to someone else=
Good.That became Celestia's biggest mistake ever. Now they will all see what the truth is.
Prepare for Misfire.
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I said (direct quote) "a can of whoop-ass" not "whoop-kill".
What I mean is she could just kick Teresa and the sisters' asses and show them just who runs this bitch.
Again to clarify, not kill, just beat-up, ya know, taste-of-your-own-medicine type thing.
7123805 Sorry. Any harm caused by Rose=Bad
Am i the only one wanting to torture Teresa using death by 1000 cuts.
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I see, because if she does anything to them(Teresa/sisters) then the Mane 6 will come in like, "Arrest her! She beat her own family, she really is evil!" Then Winter would be all like, "Don't tase me bro!" And then, well, Celly would jump on that idea like a stripper on Bill Gates.
(Did I get the gist of it?)
I think you forgot a section of text here saying that it's OK or something.
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You sly motherfucker. Is it that the hidden mistake?
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Primaries.
Fuck you, that's why :)
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You know, stuff like these that authors do make me glad that I am a freakishly fast reader, and also an editor as well. Finding shit like this is like finding a period where a comma should go. :)
7123846 Congratulations! You win! Send a PM of what your character looks like, how he/she acts and what place you want them.
Oh, baby. A TRIPLE! MLG HEADSHOT! SMOKING WEED EVERYDAY.
7123841 yES
Horns and tribal markings, huh?
So she's planning some sort of widespread transmogrification spell, targeted specifically on humans to literally demonize them.
And just when the mane 6 arrive...
Shit
Are you implying that non-earth ponies can survive without a heart? Also you got a typo here it should be de-feathered. Also inconsistent capitalization here, you capitalize Pegasus, while not capitalizing Earth Pony.
Also another typo when mentioning the Elements wanting to see winter, you used what instead of want.
Tribal markings for sure
I. Am. Going. To. Fucking. Kill. Her.
tribal markings.
7124179 Congratulations! You can has an aoc in story! Now there I'd just 1 spot left! Send a brief description of your Oc via pm is you want!
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Just as I was done with reading my downloaded ".epub" and come here for some "WTF and WHY THE F" questions..... I found new chapter and all my questions answered.
Nice move, Winter, nice move...
Keep up your good work.
I never knew... I could throw up from a book!
7365560 this is the first book that made me cry ........fuck me im 13 and i haven't cried in three years
7389721 i don't cry
THATS IT I'M GOING TO KILL THE BITCH VERY SLOWLY SO SHE CAN BEG FOR LIFE WILL SHE SCREAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I WANT STOP UNTIL THERES NOTHING TO CUT, BREAK, AND SKULL FUCKER HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She seems nice
I prefer making A sack of feel the pain they caused others as their own. Blade of Vengeance sounded good to me but someone suggested Karma Counter as a Fairy Tail esk name for the .... Technique. Either way I just LOVE the thought of making such a B feel all the pain they caused. Just think of what it could do to this worlds Celestia. hehehehe Hahahahaha BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
But then I am rather Vindictive.
I know the not obvious mistake but, you probably already put an OC in. I'm still gonna say what it was.
"Please," I choked out as I felt a slight tugging on my wing. "Please don't touch my-AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
Is supposed to have a period, not a comma after the first please. Also AMAZING story!
Well would look at that. I have a new person on my list where all those who have made exceptioally angry are
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Hey!! Any one wanna take a trip to to equestrian with a bag of c-4 for no reason? Totally not to kill Winter's mom or anything!! Ahahaha!!
Please tell me that last part was a dream.
Edit Feb 2020: heh, poor past me
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Statement: She face's the void when she dies.
Wait... I thought Winter Rose was male as a human??
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He was. The female name was just a small part of his torment.