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I should probably alter the description of the story. It's starting not to give this story justice.
I can totally see Celestia getting a huge backlash in the end. All the ponies will be like
DEATH TO CELESTIA
HAIL EMPRESS ROSE
Edit: I agree with changing the description of the story, all it really details is the first couple of chapters.
Okay Tia's lost her marbles.
Either she's gone mad and believes the lies she started or she's scarificing the mane six to turn the rest of the world against Arcadia.
Interesting that the Black Ops know it's all a lie and are willing to kill children anyway, and who in command thinks it's a good idea to send spitefire in? She'll more likely defect with Luna to Arcadia.
EDIT: Oh and last time the EoH were used on someone who didnt need it, they turned into an Alicorn.
HA. Luna be the one who saves the day
Sigh, Cadance and Celestia are out of characters.
And I don't think a town can develop so fast and build an army with high tech.
It is too Mary Sue.
I once liked this story, but I will quit this now.
7073854 I'm sorry for your loss, I was getting to all that, and I believe in the tradition that there should be Mary Sue elements to a story. Nice to know how you feel.
"Goodbye my love~" *Sniffles.* "You were my special somepony, but I wasn't good enough." *Cries in the corner with a bottle of whisky.*
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I like the idea of Celestia being blinded by what she thinks she has to do. But yeah definitely bit ooc more so with cadence
Don't you mean TKOG instead of TKOD.
7075155 No. It's #3 of the thing. Not saying any ting else about it.
When's the next chapter?
7079756 Soon....My brain went derp for a bit. It should maybe be out tomorrow sometime around 12 NOrth Central America time or something.
7079795 sweet, I just LOVE this story! It's a great read!
7079993 I'll get to...later
I can only imagine how Spitfire will feel when Winter explains to her all of Celestia's manipulations. And knowing Winter, she already has a plan for the elements. Among other things.
Celestial will know the feel of defeat, one way or the other.
She will feel the sting of war and only then will she truly understand why Humans would be known as the Masters of Conflict. No one tells a human to do the impossible and fail. We know where the limit is and we are too stubborn not to break said line.
Who is Winter Solstice and what are TPOD, TROD, and TKOD, I'd like to add them to my read later list.
Who is this Winter Solstice thou speaks of?
7503239 My most op oc
The Sword of War comes to the world for the delay of justice.
Okay it's official Celestia is off her rocker. Coo coo. Nuts. Not playing with a full deck. Or a complete and total plothead.
Please tell me the Element of Honesty isn't going to fall for Celestia's snow job.
WHAT A COINCIDENCE
conscience
Also, edgy as FUCK
ALSO, who the hell are Nova Bomb, Black Hammer, and Falcon Punch?
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.......... are you an idiot no seriously are you an idiot, why would you send a mother to kill her daughter , this is one of the most idiotic plans i have ever heard
I have to disagree with your choice of strongest OP OC. I'd have to say it goes to Asura from Don't Get Cocky. Then again, if he was powerful enough to lock away his universe from any other displaced, travel to others at whim, and even make a young naruto OP, I think he qualifies as a truly omnipotent being. Hell, he was able to beat HULK in a contest of strength.
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well the officer never knew that spitfire was her mom
I never understood this. This is the rout that every writer takes with powerful characters Vs Evil Organization. Its the dumbest thing you could do.
To quote Glenda Goodwitch from RWBY.
The smart move that no one ever even considers is assassination. A bloody knife left on the pillow of a sleeping top General, a bomb going off just after she leaves her garden tea break, Handing a foal of an important figure, a letter on the way home from school, to give to the parent containing a fake obituary of the child. Much more intelligent ways to make a point. After all, you can't hide an army, but a city in an era of peace can hide a single messenger of death anywhere. After all, those in power don't fear war, they simply don't fight in them, but everyone has to leave the house eventually.
The Monk
“Because we killed all of the monsters we ever ran into, save for ourselves and Death. What better way to respect death than to give it the form of the only monster we could never kill?" - WhatMustIDo
As of right now, Im about halfway through this story and I can tell you right now that this is very well done. Not only was this story well written (with the exception of the occasional Typo/AutoCorrect Replacement, which I don't care about), but You created a character that is very rare here.
I hate to say this, but intelligent characters are rare. Very rare. I often find myself beating my head on my desk as the characters in the stories make the most asinine decisions possible. Or the character wines like an over mothered shut in about the loss of their family pointlessly for chapter after chapter. And finally its nice to see a character that isn't sex-phobic. I can't even count the hundreds of characters here that hyperventilate and wring their hands at the though of a basic kiss, let alone, god for bid someone offer sex. It gets old, it trued does.
So when I come across a great story like yours and writers like Dan_s Comments (Story: Cultural Artifacts) It really is a breath of fresh air. A main character that is intelligent, with a mature mindset that an adult reader can actually empathize with, and a healthy outlook to sex.
Very well done. Sadly you seem to have left us.. Good writers are rare, don't loose the skill.
The Monk
“On her doorstep was Twilight Sparkle. While Derpy deeply respected the mare, like most in Ponyville, they wished she'd either switch to decaf, or start hitting the harder stuff.” -Dan_s Comments
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Honestly I miss winters works,
It’s hard to fined good story’s like this these days.
MC should “allow” some “correspondence” to be intercepted by the Crystal Empire:
“Dear Princess Celestia, you’re right. The Crystal Empire is ready to fall and that they’ll never expect our combined forces to launch from Canterlot while I hold their gaze on Arcadia. Just give me the word, and we’ll rid the world of ‘the pink r-tard’ as you so aptly call her. -Empress Rose.”
Subterfuge, chaos, paranoia. Bam.
I'll just say I'll be disappointed if the fillies are able to overcome the power of the elements of harmony, unless there's a good justification