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Good. I am happy.
Sounds good
I like how you addressed the thing about winter not being taken on as a student of Luna's. And do i sense a huge battle between Arcadia and the Crystal Empire soon or sometime in the future? Catfight between Winter and Cadence?
7065231 That sounds like a good Idea. Let me add that to the outline my good sir.
Black lace and rose petals... that sounds nice.
s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/98/bd/3c/98bd3c1ef860b3b2b02af8280fb7360b.jpg I know that this is a fanfic but this makes Cadence worst pony
How about Summer Time Lovin'? The title would be deceptively subtle and nearly unrelated to this fic but would draw the curiosity of new readers, interested in how such characters became attracted to one another. Another suggestion, instead of a one shot, follow the author, Reykans' example. Some of his more lengthy works have a side story to dump vignettes and suddenly fantasied erotica of his characters. It doesn't have to tie in with the main story, hell, you can even notify at the beginning it's non-canon but more of a "What if".
So go ahead, make that side story, show us the extent of your lewdness :}
yeah fuck you too princess mi amore cadenza!
woot!
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Where do I join ?
Cadence, worst pony ;3
Wouldn't it be 'The dead shit?'
This whole story is starting to remind me of the first chapter of the fic "Consequences of Unoriginality." Not saying that this isn't original, as it definitely is, but you have an overpowered OC that used to be human, everyone loves her, she's better at everything than even those who have their talents in the things she's beating them at, etc. All it's missing is a color change to black and red alicorn with a herd including the mane 6 and the princesses.
BTW if thou haven't read Consequences of Unoriginality, I highly recommend it.
The main character is so OP let me tell you. But not going to call her a Mary Sue since she do have controversy and a bit of what most consider flaws
Yah I could really use some medicine to help improve my perception. I'm a tad oblivious.
Okay Cadence, go bring life into the world without a males "seed". This would be the perfect time to give her the middle finger. As in litteraly telling her to go F herself and see were that gets her.
I agree that serving is a kind of love when done willingly, otherwise it's slavery.
Dam Celestia you are a real idiot. Maybe being banished for 1000 was a good thing for Luna. At least Luna is willing to learn. While Celestia considers herself to be perfect and that their is no reason to change. No wonder Equestria is so stagnant, their immortal ruler is stuck in a rut( I say rut because the right word currently eludes me even though I was thinking of it a minute ago).
one thing to say
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I like to delve into the overpowered OC dream myself, but this chapter was the last straw that just made me absolutely hate this character. I'm sorry, but this is where I sign off on this.
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Well it's just not your cup o tea then!
Why would Winter kiss a filly that had just tried to commit suicide? That's literally the worst possible time to pull something like that! I can understand the anger, and maybe the physical abuse to a much lesser extent, but kissing her? I'm glad I'm reading over this again, since it's helping me realize just how much of a jackass Winter Rose actually is.
That being said, wish fulfillment fic, so whatever. It's still worth a thumbs up/upvote/whatever if you've read it this far. This is not hate; this is my current perception of Winter Rose as a character. And what a character she is.
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I was stuck wheezing at this again.
No matter how many times I see it.