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omgomgomg XD if only rainbow dash was there!
This chapter felt a lot more polished! Very few mistakes this round, I only picked up on your use of "soup" instead of "soap" which is what I believe you were going for. Once again, I enjoyed your comedy!
Admittedly, little dirty at one point...
...but it definitely worked!
I'm enjoying where this is taking me, however, 'Winter Rose' is a little Mary Sue-ish with her ability to levitate cupcakes nailed in about five seconds. I understand it's meant to be a guy, but I just thought that fine controls of the wings would take longer to learn!
Keep going, see you on the flipside.
Ah the trolling Princesses.
A genius pegasi troll.
Trollestia approves
PrncesTrolestia (my Xbox 1 gamertag) approved.
Please, for the love of all that is good, find an editor and/or proofreader. T_T There are numerous grammatical mistakes throughout and some sentences that are redundant. That said, I'm not sure how I feel about how things are going so far. The protagonist feels a bit Mary Sue-y, what with outflying three of the Wonderbolts and performing a Sonic Rainboom when she barely knows how to fly in chapter 1 and performing a feat of highly controlled magic using a pegasi's weather magic, which she also has no experience with nor is there even any evidence in the show (or judging by the reactions of the ponies gathered) that such a thing is even possible.
This was awesome, but what i want to know is, when will the "...for assaulting a princess" part come in?
The room has a ! Floating over it. Your quest is to troll the hell out of Spitfire.
Is Spitfire telling her to pee? One squirt? Doesn't she know once you start peeing it's hard to stop.
FEAR ME!!! FOR I AM EVIL NIT PICKY TROLL!!! or amateur editor.which is the same thing.
7344827 I will find you, I will stalk you, and I WILL friend you.
Oh my comment was deleted.
Let me rephrase it then.
I decided to stop reading this story for the following reasons:
- The main character is a Mary Sue (knows how to fly out of nowhere, outflies 3 Wonderbolts, performs a Sonic Rainboom while flying for the first time, uses Pegasus "magic" unheard of).
- There are too many grammatical errors, and misspelling/confusion of words.
I forget. Why did I like this? I stoped halfway through a while ago and decided to restart, and I 'm wondering why.
Ah well, I would think that if I restarted Rebirth of the Damned, another favorite with a weak start that abuses the teen rating to the point where it's nearly mature.
Oh Jesus balls... this is the longest story I ever seenEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRR
sorry for swearing
When seeing how many chapters there are: https://youtu.be/XNJ1RHUnX9s] Good and Funny are the words that describe this story
7930163 Clearly you have never seen the austreaoh series or memory pending
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This?
This, a long story?
...
1,200,000+ words
3,600,000+ words
600,000+ words
600,000+ words
Hah, that reaction from Spitfire!
I really hope Spitfire eases down more than a little. The hyperaggression during the interactions are more than a bit annoying.
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1,780,000+ Words~
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/208056/fallout-equestria-project-horizons
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2,600,000,000 + Words
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/45860/diaries-of-a-madman
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Two billion six hundred million words is alot
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Accidentally added three extra zeros
Oh Sweet Celestia this chapter had me in stitches almost from the start. I'm literally still laughing as I type this! I am so loving this story so far!
What’s this twin incident she keeps mentioning?
Count that as your revenge for the soap.
That works too!