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Still gotta pay those airship fees in the jet stream? Damn those companies and their monopoly on all long distance travel.
7126557 *without.
Fixed it.
Richel = Rachel
Lunaris = Luna
Was I right on either of these two or am I way off course.
Repeat of the same paragraph, i think.
Also, that bitch got what she deserved, i would have made it worse, but good enough.
7126612 WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAXXY OFF.
Lunaris. Mentioned once as the Goddess of PEACE
And Richel
iswas her name. Rachel just...no. just no.7126623 I don't think so. The structure is too different to be a repeat.
7126623 Also. Shame on you for making me stare at the same thing for ten minutes
7126647 So instead of being on target I am pretty much in orbit around the sun, well it was worth a shot. Please keep making more excellent chapters, and nice touch on the death of that evil bitch of a mother.
7126695 Yeah.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
7126702 Oh don't be like that, its not like I punted you down south so take those dot dot dots and put em somewhere else.
7126713 Ooooh. Sassy.
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7126668 [Insert maniacal laughter here]
I wonder if Rose will suffer any permanent physical damage from this experience.
7126777 You are looking for the movie called: Taken.
7126623 You win, pretty sure.
Is the mistake that its suppose to be like this:
Sorry if I'm wrong.
7126860 YOU WIN! SEND A PM FOR YOUR CHARACTER TO ENTER THE STORY! WITH FLASH DRIVE AND WOLHANA!
If. I knew that there's this contest thingy, then I would've gotten my glasses and read this chapter as soon as it gets out. Will the next chapter still have this thingy?
7126948 What "Thingy?"
7126954
Hey b0ss, the "Thingy" he's talkin bout is where you find the mistake and get rewarded with you OC gittin put in a story.
P.S. I habe de canser b0ss!
(I you get the reference, then I love you if not, then ok.)
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Can only assume what is going to happen next chapter, probably something that will peek my interest.
7126954 the oc thingy.
So one thing that's been bothering me
The whole premise of needing to kill Winter and the other girls, is because they each bear the right marks and aptitude to become the prophesied Alicorn of War/Peace, similar to Celestia and Luna's parents. Besides the promised seven years of war/peace should any ascend, is this to incur an effect on either parent as the true reason to kill children over the millenia or was it merely to just stop a wild card from holding control over a powerful aspect?
As I recall, the father is in an eternal crusade against demons and the mother covers the rear lines (afterlife). Were any to ascend, would it mean that control over an aspect is halved due to another similarly attuned is tapping into it? Or worse, strip them of their power, leaving them weak and defenseless in their fight?
Meaning if any one or all ascends... demon incursions?
7127207
She may be killing them in fear that they may be more powerful then her and her own pride is clouding her judgement
Oh man. Never mess with Spitfire XD
Love the story. Keep up the great work.
( dammit, i was thinking i got it ;-))
Shuld that not be mane?
7126866 Yeah you got several of those in prince of darkness as well.
7127471 Yes. And now you get an Oc of your making into da story!
7127207 You would be right, but there are hundreds of different God's of war/peace. So...Their power wouldn't be touched, but when and if one of the 7 were to die as an Alicorn. They would most likely fight along side big daddy himself.
And demons? Really. Maybe in B2
7128073 So now it's a matter of killing them before they ascend, and telling her dad how much of a bitch she became, gotcha.
Nah, jk
7128066 whooow, thanks. I PM you tomorrow. GN you all ^^
7128694 Glad you enjoy
And please....Fist me daddy
[Few minutes later in hell winter Roses Family appears in front of the devil] lookie what we have here such naughty little humans I'm going to have so much fun with you said the devil[ picture starts fading out with winter Roses Family screaming]
There has been a recurring error that has been happening for many chapters, and now I'm bothering to mention it. And I do this with no wish for my OC to be added.
Every time you make mention of the Council, you spell it as the counsel
Council- an elected legislative body to manage a state, city or town
Counsel- advice given, lawyers
7129951 I just noticed that as well and I will be going back later on to fix those mistakes. Damn spell checker. You had one job!
7130430 Meh, can't please everyone.
7132773 ...There is only 4...What's your point?
I think this is a very BIG mistake;
You wrote the same thing twice!
Why are there so many dang commas ;/
I'll be meeting Roses family in hell and I can't wait until they show up and I have a Surprise just. For. Them *dark and very crazy chuckle*
*speaks to the pretenders who thought themselves as Rose's family*
WE'RE GOING TO HAVE SO MUCH FUN TOGETHER!
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So. Why did Winter have to see her family in the first place?
Equestria shouldn't have any jurisdiction at all over Arcadia.
It wasn’t.
W-w-well, I g-g-g-guess I̦͓̹ ̴g͈̰̠͓͈̳ę̫̹̘̮͙ͅt͇͔̰̰͚ ̙͓̗t̞̮̲͟o̬͍̞̭ ̘̝̼̝p̧̻̹̜̬͎̜͈l̰̺̫͙a͙͉͎y̭͕ ͡w̙̪͈͓̳̮͠į̫̺ṭ̭̤͔͜h̴̦͇̞ ̠̙̠̖̠̟s̛̳̘̜o͚̟͙m̟̜̙͇̻̣e ̺͙̱͓̬̬͝n̪͎̭̲̹͎̭ew̵͇͈̘̪͙ t-t-t-t̥̪o̫̮̭̤̭y̵̦̟̱̯̩͚̩s̫̰̹͉.̹͈̰͜
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Edit Feb 2020: my god how could I ever have been so cringeworthy
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I know this is two years to late to say, but it feels good to say it.
Have fun.
10084168
I feel like I've already replied to this comment. Oh well.
Please ignore this train wreck. My previous attempts to be edgy will haunt me forever.
10085777
Nah wasn’t edgy at all
They did kinda deserve it
Luna. Why did you allow this? WTF?