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Like i said in the last chapter, kill Rose's biological parents before they get to Arcadia.
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7117292 I also altered the author note
7117306 I choose number 3 because, no mater what happens the war will go on.
With hove the story has progressed so far i would say option 1 would bee the most logical. And the parents, well, accidents happen all the time. Its a dangerous world outside of Equestria .
Womp womp wooomp.
Well shoo. 50 chapters in. Looks like I'm still in for the ride.
Choice 3 But kill her parents.
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7117608 THEY MUST BE EXTREMINAT- AT- ATED
Bit confused about your choices, does that mean Celestia is about to realise that she's being evil by hunting down and killing children?
If not she may as well go option 1 and double down on the human killing, she's still got the loyal ones working in the gulags anyway.
EDIT: Given the amount of humans in ponyville are the main 6 going to notice that somethings going on? I kind of want to see frienship cannon versus Tia now. Oh and Soarin needs a painfull death at some point too, even if he survives the war.
7118063 Finally a question that I can answer! She Mary sue, so human killing is a yes. Op1, I have two ways it could go. 1. She does a spell to turn all humuns back to normals. 2. she marks them by; A Give them horns. B a mark on their face. What do you think about this?
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Oh god an army of humans in equestria could be interesting, assuming enough survive the initial witch hunt.
Marking the face would also be a good option for it's parallels with nazi germany and the jewish people.
I say number one, but make is so either Celestia gets death by A thousand cuts or she gets her wings and horn cut off and then she gets her limbs cut off one inch at a time till she's just a body and head, then suck her intestines out through her ass, killing her in the process... Or both (Enter in laughter that sends chills down your back here).
Edit: Kill her Biological mom in the most gruesome way possible, worst than Celestia's death i stated above.
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7118111 Thats basically what i want to do to my teachers when they give a shit ton of homework that takes of most of my night, like tonight.
Just a bit of constructive criticism. I have noticed an on going issue with dialog breaks, as in, they're frequently not used. Any time you have diaglog, even when its broken up in a paragraph, and it changes character, you need to break the line. Having someone say something, then in the same paragraph someone else has a line, it gets real confusing. Especially when it sometimes alternates a few times. Just watch it and everytime you change who is talking, start a new paragraph. Even if its just one line.
Haven't started reading yet but i have a feeling i'm going to love this story.
7118073 I like option 3, but please for all that is good and holy, kill Winter Rose's birth mother.
7118704 Thanks. I'll keep that in mind.
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I would go with option one, but turn the humans back to their original forms and have at least half of them go to Arcadia. also, have fun with all the gruesome comments about killing rose's birth-mother
7120346 I know, but I will not give them satisfaction!
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jeez, immediate response, was not expecting that. And good, Do not give in to their... um, goriness?
7120365 No, she going to die to mama bear. There are more gruesome ways to kill someone with Air. Liek reversing someone's blood flow.
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... all you did is remind me of bloodbending from avatar
7120385 Sorry. I was going for aTauro kagaku no railgun vibe with that. Ya know. When that guy reverses the flow and the person explodes from the inside out.
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no railgun... I think I've heard of that anime but I never got to watch it as my free time has been takin over by this site and fanfiction.net.
I'll try to watch it when I have more free time. But no promises, gotta keep up my rep.
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http://cdn.myanimelist.net/images/anime/8/53581.jpg this right?
7120422 Yes.
The first is the only option, as two and three clashes with the current plot and crimes that have already transpired. And remembering the EqG portal exists here too, Celestia wouldn't be above abducting people on the other side, seeing as her improved military strength is testament to the benefits of integrating human imagination and ingenuity. Merely lie to Sunset to "Come on over, and bring your friends", the only one of value is human Twilight, she goes missing during the visit, blame rose for the abduction, and you got a super genius toiling away in a nondescript military facility under pain of death.
So when are you going to kill off Soarin?
I don't get the whole if the real mother comes in she'll take everything plot, if anything wouldn't the zealots just murder her for abusing their empress? They're fanatical about her and the laws that she made, not some council. Besides I never read anything about it being familial, the title was given directly to winter Rose.
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Weeeeell, We suppose it might sorta make sense? If thou divide the vertiginal umpalumpa by the size of her social structure and add 10, then technically her mother could invoke the rite of desitin and take over........
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Yeah, this Soarin needs to be deleted.