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Dead pussycats?
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Dead Dickhuizotl?
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Stranded with Grandma, yay-GRAK *Strangled from behind*
I've got you now Dark Empress!
7181139 Soon. He will die. And it shall be glorious!
7179880 That or they will get to the temple and get the old "We're sorry, the
princessprisoner is in another temple.Hey pal, I think you ought to have learned by now that a clip is one singular shot, and that the magazine is the thing that holds all of the bullets, seriously just do some research
The biggest reason I dislike crossovers is that the pace of both fics is hampered by whichever is the slower of the two authors.
7201603 A clip is something that hold the bullets together till they are loaded into a magazine. They are mostly used for rifles with fixed magazine. Magazine contain bullets and is something the bolt of the gun take the bullet from and put it into the barrel so that the primer can be struck and send the bullet away. They are used everywhere from rifles to machineguns...
"Spetznaz" the middle z is an s
Seriously, this chapter just sucked. A lot of descriptions that read like a history book, no real subjective point of view to keep things invested, barely any substance or effort put into anything; that's leaving aside how bullshit overpowered the A-team is. Stealth-slicing assholes with windblades like through butter, headshotting like it's out of style, and I didn't even get to see the mute cat or the Yamato-wielder do anything yet. Useless side characters, deplorable progression of events, brainless enemies, where the fuck is the crew of Rose's ship? What the fuck was that dialogue with Daring? Why didn't the hundreds of blazing guns hit anything? Why did the cannon fodder just stand there and laugh like fucking assholes when their dangerous enemy did not surrender immediately and took offensive action in the form of throwing a grenade at them?!