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Spirit

Entry for the 2015 Hearth's Warming Eve 2.0.

As simple as the story may be, this can be a representation of what some have to go through, whether or not it seems simple to you or others. But this story is a perspective of one who dreads it, not the views of others...
Take the view of Vetrov, who works as an outpost manager in the snowy northern borders of Equestria, and has many secrets to tell.

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Batbrony

Batbrony #1 · Jan 4th, 2016 · 1 · ·

First of all, thank you very kindly for taking the time to write this for Poniverse's second Hearth's Warming Eve fanfiction contest. It's very kind of you and very much appreciated! Now, that said, you certainly don't have a bad fic here, but it doesn't tie too much into the contest prompt that fics should cover the theme of charity in some way. It's a very unusual fic for this holiday, no doubt about that (which I think you're aware of), but a good one, don't get me wrong. I do like the minimalism here, but if anything does prevent it from placing in the top tier of the contest, it's not gonna be its themes so much as the fact that I think it could've stood to be developed just a smidge more. Overall, though, full credit to you for being willing to write something revolving around these holidays far bleaker than your typical Hearth's Warming Eve fic. Not my cup of tea in every sense of the word, but you handled the ideas here well for the most part. Good job.