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ChimeraPunk


Grew up watching the original MLP and playing with a number of the original toys. Discovered MLP:FiM some time in early July 2011.

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Quarterback is a blue stallion with a hoofball for a cutie mark. He works as a delivery pony - traveling much of Equestia to deliver goods to towns where the Friendship Express doesn’t quite reach. He mostly hauls goods that are either too heavy for a single pegasus to carry or hauls goods to locations pegasi might have trouble reaching from the air.

These short stories center around his daily life (and to an extent his daily adventures) as he travels about Equestria. Every short story can stand alone on its own (so none of the potential chapters have to be read in any order).

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6738272 - Thank-you. Some tips or feedback would be lovely if you have some. I'd openly admit that the way I laid out the story could have been better among other things. However even after months of playing with the idea, I couldn't help to find a smoother angle. I do hope to better might storytelling techniques as time goes on.

Aside from minor grammatical errors, pretty good stuff. It annoys me that underrated stories like this don't get many views but all of that nasty fetish stuff gets thousands of views.

Does the Quarterback in your story have a hoofball background?

Interesting rewrite of Applejack 's Big Adventure.

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