This story is a sequel to Mystery Dungeon: Equestrial Plains
Welcome to the Pokeparks, a place where Pokemon can live in harmony, spending their days playing games and doing attractions. Each Zone is welcoming, and nobody feels left out.
At least, that's how it used to be...
Missingno has shattered the Sky Prism and used its corruptive power to drive the Pokemon apart from each other. Without the Sky Prism charged and together it can't reverse the effects, and Missingno's grasp on the Parks gets tighter and tighter. Any Pokemon who is near a portal to Wish Park becomes violent, and actually entering Wish Park completely controls the Pokemon is a variety of ways. The only way to save them is with the Wish Bells, deep inside Wish Park. Arceus has sent the Legendary Pokemon to protect the Park, but knows that almost none of them can make friendship strong enough to recharge the Sky Prism in time.
So it decided to branch out.
Looking into the Universe, it finds six beings who are the definition of friendship and harmony: Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie. It needs them and Spike to go to the Pokeparks to fix everything and prevent Missingno from destroying the Universe again. To help them, it recruited the Trailblazers, a rescue and exploration team from the Wigglytuff Guild consisting of a Blitzle and a Ponyta. With their new member Sableye, they plan on preventing Missingno from succeeding. Along with Keldeo and Victini, the Trailblazers plan on helping their pony friends through the Pokeparks. Their quest isn't going to go easily. Missingno will be interfering every step of the way, and its corrupted Legendaries will be hunting them down. The Trailblazers need to buckle down and get ready, because even being powered by Reshiram and Zekrom themselves may not be enough to even the odds.
A wild Ask Blog appeared!
I know how it feels.I like to write a chapeter or so in advance to. And I am glade I can help in this endeavor.
So, Twitch is going to help the Pokemon and ponies in the Pokepark. Seems about right.
Great chapter. I noticed a few mistakes though. During the dialogue portions of the story, it was kind of hard to keep track of who was talking. I managed to understand it, but only by going back and reading parts multiple times.
6912889 If you are referring to the portion in which Twitch is the main character, that was the point, because chat on live-streams generally are hard to follow. If you are talking about Victini's flashback, arguably part of it as well as Victini is more focused on the memory than on who might be talking. If you meant the other parts, though, then there isn't a reason.
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That explains it. Which means this chapter was pretty much perfect, aside from one or two grammar errors.