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TheDeku


I like video games and crossovers. Happy to do what I can to amuse.

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Team Trailblazers is hard to beat. They are quick, strong, and work together to accomplish more than even Guild Master Wigglytuff could have thought. Since a new mystery dungeon appearing is a big deal, they go off with several teams to go explore it. But when they get sucked through a portal to a brand new world, they find that they need to stick together or fall apart. As more Pokemon get crossed over, they discover that them being brought over wasn't as accidental as they thought.

Now has an ask blog!

Chapters (25)
Comments ( 50 )

Hopefully, Keldeo will get involved in this.

5718092 Thanks, will fix
5718612 He may arrive - but I cannot promise anything soon :P

ZEKROM! This is gonna be good! keep on writing!

Next time, please link to the video. It makes it a whole lot better that way.

. . . . . . . . . . my worst nightmares has come true. . . Team Skull are actually good guys for once!!??!!?!

5778659 The sad thing is, I read that as "DARKR" not "DARKRAI" for a second before realizing you forgot the A. I hope you weren't asking for a darker story... cause I doubt I could do a whole story dark.

I have a feeling that the other bed is occupied by another legendary

Blitzle looked at her as if she just breathed ice instead of fire.

Hmm...

effectively having cutie marks of their own

I would recommend the word "invisible" right after having.

magic that equestria contains

i would also consider

Capitalization on the underlined letters, if you please.

5865875 Good eye. Why the Hmm...?

5865887 I just checked. Technically, it should be physically impossible for a legitimate Ponyta or Rapidash to learn any ice-type moves. (Randomizer mods and other hacking stuff is why all the prerequisites.) As such, the reaction description is not only warranted, but accurate.
The last paragraph of this chapter...I had to look over it multiple times, constantly missing the last two words-and then it made so much sense; except for the fact that some of the grammar trips me up. I suppose we'll figure out all of it eventually.

I did not see that coming. 5th gen mythical reunion, do you realize this?
Also, I would recommend splitting the Wild Charge paragraph for more dramatic effect.

"Beneath this mask there is more than flesh. Beneath this mask there is an idea, Mr. Creedy, and ideas are bulletproof."
"...but 400 years later, an idea can still change the world. I've witnessed first hand the power of ideas, I've seen people kill in the name of them, and die defending them... but you cannot kiss an idea, cannot touch it, or hold it... ideas do not bleed, they do not feel pain, they do not love..."
Quotes from V, in V for Vendetta

Do you accept OCs? If so, I have a request for my Pokemon OCs.

Team Cascade:
Leader- Silver the Skitty. Main Brawns of the team. Good with emotional support, but likes to do things her own way. Very independent. Her few friends are very close to her, as her parents died from an outlaw several years back. (That's what made her make an exploration team)

Second in command: Shadow the Shinx. Highly intelligent. First real friend Silver ever made. Secretly has a crush on her. He always thinks before acting, and never does anything without a plan.

Other members:

Ally the Giraffirig. Similar to Shadow, she likes to think. She is the main supporter of the team, mainly doing things like healing and restoring downed teammates.

Velvet the Vulpix. Shy and secluded. She only opens up well to Silver, as Silver was the first Pokemon that actually showed any kindness to her. Velvet has an extreamly powerful flame due to her being abandoned in a cave full of Water-Types. She doesn't remember how she got there, but she had to defend herself somehow.

Also, love your story. Great work!

6112796 I am more than willing to accept OCs, however I cannot promise that they will be a 'big' part in the story, but I am happy to work them in. Heck, I already know how Team Cascade will fit in.

ER MER GERSH YES! Team Cascade it's finally showed up! You wrote their part really well I'd say, but just one thing. When I said Velvet only opens up to Silver, I ment it as she will not talk to anyone except Silver unless absolutely necessary. But that was my fault for not specifying. You did them great.

The story is amazing, and I love that foreshadowing in this chapter. Can't wait to see how my team ends up tied in to all this mess that is Equestria. =P

6186634 Should I edit it to be more to your characterization, or should I leave it?

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You can leave it the way it is. Just for future reference, make Velvet at quiet as possible.

6187869 I'm glad I only had her talk to Silver, then. Let's just say that in her sleepy head she couldn't keep herself as introverted as usual. After all, sleep makes you more relaxed.

I saw Team Cascade finally made an appearance and I was literally flipping out. Like "YES! TEAM CASCADE IS PIT OF "SPECIAL-EPISODE-ZONE" AND IN THE REAL STORY! LEMMIE HEAR A HORRA!"

But then nobody was there to "HORRA" for me. I am disappoint.

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Yes! When is the next chapter?! I must have it!

6457104 Next chapter will, unfortunately, not be soon if nothing changes. I am going to be very busy for a while and may only be able to write a paragraph or two a day. Do not worry, I :pinkiehappy: promise it will be up before Halloween.

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Okay :fluttercry:
You know i could help you write. I mean, if you want to... It's fine...:fluttershysad:

If they need help Team Frozen Thunder can help. Hunter the Luxio and Mellody the Glaceon.

Two things.
1. You portrayed my characters PERFECTLY. I couldent have done it any better myself, in all truth.

2.

Yoom. Ta.

That right there... Wow. Just wow. That was perfect.

Anyways, fantastic chapter. Defiantly worth the wait it took. Can't wait for more!

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"Up before Halloween"

It is litterally the day before Halloween, and the next chapter just came out. Good timing my friend, good timing.

Great new chapter! I just realized something though... You don't have a proper cover art. Would you like me to solve that problem for you?

6723803 That would be absolutely excellent! I'm not a good drawer and I just can't use the pictures online to make anything good.

6725556
Great! Can I get a list of the characters? I'll put the main ones up front and the rest in the background.

6725556
I got the rough draft done at this link
http://silverwolfftw.deviantart.com/art/Rough-Draft-Equestrial-Plains-Cover-Art-578331759?ga_submit_new=10%253A1450275707

It's gonna have more characters and stuff in the final. This is the rough draft, so it's not the best looking. But it's something, right? Give me any suggestions for changes you'd like.

6738169 Add Sableye and Velvet. Maybe Keldeo and Victini as well.
If it isn't too difficult, I had what could be a nice look: On one edge, have part of Deoxys's arm, as if it was standing just outside the picture. On the other side, in the same way, have one of Discord's appendages. This may give it a strange duality nature that could be interesting. But it might not. Again, thanks for doing this. It means a lot to me.

I looked over some of your other art. Some pieces look a little rougher than other pieces (as all art does), but they look really good.

Happy New Years. And that story was awesome.:twilightsmile:

Happy New Years, Deku. Its been a great run! I enjoyed helping you out and being able to work with you. I can't wait for the next year of working with you.

As for the title of the book, take out the 2. The rest of the name itself sound great.

Anyways, like I said before, I've had a lot of fun helping you out and getting to see my characters in the way you used them. Their characterization was spot-on. Thanks for making such an awesome story for the fandom to enjoy!

OH GOD DONT INTRODUCE MEW TO DICORD

I can imagine what would happen if victini shared its energy with pinkie
Pinkie will be able tear through reality's GOD HELP US

5778670 thay were a pain in the butt I've beat them numerous times now best team mudkip and cydnaquil were best for my story run worst team pick fighting and grass for story runs but more challenge

7379219 7379341 And this is how you quote properly. Seriously catfire, do better!

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