• Member Since 25th Nov, 2015
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TheOcelotKid


Well... Im a brony (Well no shit!) And a whovean.

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This is all a game... Missions over and over... saving the world... with a team of... Six...
(Meet Mason T. Turner, Hood Gunblade, Lock, spartan 3456,Zippy Gunstead,The Doctor, and Sterling Bluebolt. The Elite C.U.B.E team.
(Sorry if its not that good I'm an amateur writer with no experience writing MLP fanfic and I am just starting but enjoy!)
(The only characters in the C.U.B.E team I only made Hood, Mason, and Sterling the rest are themes of someone else with a new look and personalty) <--------(only here so I'm not claiming Halo, MLP, Doctor Who and any other references I have as my own and so you know I DID NOT MAKE THEM I AM JUST A FAN WRITING A STORY WITH A NEW PLOT!!! please don't kill me!)
(also if i forgot to say anyone was in it on the tags I have the limit as is so sorry)

Chapters (3)
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Comment posted by TheOcelotKid deleted Dec 2nd, 2015
Comment posted by TheOcelotKid deleted Dec 2nd, 2015
Comment posted by TheOcelotKid deleted Dec 2nd, 2015
Comment posted by TheOcelotKid deleted Dec 2nd, 2015

everyone seems to hate this project
is there any way I can improve....

6702848 duly noted. so a completely different story to give more in sight to the C.U.B.E thing and all?

OK first i have finally received info why my story 'sucks' and so I can give more information on each character in a separate story each, or write one really long comment. I really don't know so its up to the readers to give opinions.

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thanks its just im new to the whole Fimfiction writing thing so... yeah

6719873 thanks and im just working on a way to integrate that...

I'm sorry but I don't find it good for my mental health to write on this site anymore so if you wish to see this continued it most likely won't be... sorry.
(also my channel on Fimfiction might not be active at all, no i'm not committing suicide im just bored and disappointed with this project thanks for the short time you guys had read this. ~OcelotKid)

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reread and i believe I will do a story for each, Mason, Hood, Lock, Zippy, The Doctor, and C.U.B.E. ill also include how they met... or ill just drop the project all together. idk :ajbemused:

(currently working on Mason's story most likely the only character with there own story unless it's better like that)

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