Twilight sparkle is thrown into the world of Undertale, meeting many friends, enemies, and certain evil flowers along her journey back to the surface.
Hello everybody err...pony! Um...well I love both Naruto and My little pony and um...um...that's it...
Twilight sparkle is thrown into the world of Undertale, meeting many friends, enemies, and certain evil flowers along her journey back to the surface.
It's great writing so far, and you chose a great character to be featured.
Also you forgot a tag to the story.
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I'll add one
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Wait, how do you add a tag??
6746018 click edit on the story, and scroll down to the other tag
6746182 Do you need a proff-reader.
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Thnx, and a proof reader would be helpful
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Let's see here... love, friendship, HONESTY! KINDNESS! LAUGHTER! GENEROSITY! LOYALTY! lastly -- DETERMINATION!
One of these things is not like the other. :D
Make, up, your, mind, what, pro, nouns, re, fer, to, her.
7045852 hmmm....
Friendship?
How long will this story be? Will you be exploring all of the endings?
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It'll be quite long, but I'll probably only be exploring the pacifist, unless otherwise
out of times... why meow?
"Naruto heard a familiar voice echoing through his ears, another couple of steps and the echoing turned into understandable words."
what?
Umm...... NARUTO???
Celestial? Typo...
And once again... Naruto?
Ninja? Jutsu? Really with the Naruto stuff? Three chapters in a row? Also, it's seven, not eight. Just saying.
Im Curious.....Twilight is a Cinnamon or a butterscotch pony?
"and i come back to you now...at the turn of the tide" -
GandalfTorielTwilight, and , herself o-o
pony/mare, she
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In the end Sans just almost called Twilight a filly? How old is she is this story? i know is Pre-princess status...
she
Ho my god....It is really Sans ><"