A young alicorn mare discovers that there's more to this universe than meets the eye, and has a heck of a hard time understanding who she really is. Well, let's just say that this will be very OC oriented, as well as some OOC current characters... slightly OOC that is! A young alicorn discovers theres more to this universe than meets the eye.
Not bad some parts were a little confusing, but overall pretty good
Good Job!
Cuz I wrote this, like, 2 AM and touched it up... like, 10 days later 6842765