Take care of yourself, okay?
When Pinkie Pie's stallion friend broke up with her and moved away, she was devastated. She asks Twilight for a book about witchcraft hoping that it can make him fall in love with her again.
A one-shot I thought of when I saw a book about witches in the school library and remembered this song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=682pneYoP0c
Happy nightmare night!
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It's a neat concept, but the execution wasn't that good and it felt way too rushed. There's also the occasional grammar mistake, but those can be easily fixed.
6584993 Thank you for your feedback. I will admit I did rush it, I got the idea too late and wanted to get it out before or on Halloween. I'll take my time and get an editor next time.
6585188
Glad to know I helped!
"The Winter pegasi created a blizzard" paragraph was so long it kind of threw me off with reading it, maybe a space somewhere around there might help.
Just a bit of pacing seemed off in this story, as said felt just a bit rushed.
I thought the execution was good! It flowed as a plot fairly well, The Friendshipping at the end was very sweet too. I'd thumb up but the button isn't working for some reason.
I'll fav though.
The bad ending was nice and dark, though seemed OOC. other than that really good!
7.5/10
6590987 thank you for your feedback. I'll keep it in mind for my next stories.
weow pinkie
you didn't even come close to dumping cake over one of rarity's dresses :D