During a visit to the Friendship Castle, Celestia finds herself looking for something.
Is not long before she finally finds it, but the memories it saves within it are still fresh in the memory of the Princess, and the present has lost part of its warmth for it.
Maybe now she can find a little hope looking herself in an old mirror.
Maybe now she can feel her again.
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Very good work!
High quality text. For the first work - brilliant!
I like the story you are trying to tell and its very good for a first attempt at writing fanfiction.
But, there are a lot of grammar mistakes present in your writing; you might want to ask someone who has a better grasp of the English language to proofread for you in the future or improve your grammar skills by seeing how different words are used in different situations in other stories (whether those stories are other fanfictions or professionally written novels).
6584217 Thanks, i'm glad you like it.
6584248 Thank you, high quality or not i'll try to improve even more for the next one.
6584406 Grammar errors was something i was expecting no being a native english speaker and all, stil thanks for the advices because i'm gonna take them.
Finally, I'm happy you like the story.
A strange tale but one that I think really does a good job of working its way into the strange recesses of an immortal who, by the nature of her existence, knows loneliness only too well and has come to treasure each touch of the lives that have intertwined with hers.
In truth, I suspect that it isn't just Sunset who isn't ready. Celestia isn't ready either and she is afraid that she would not be able to be the welcoming, reassuring pony that she needs to be when Sunset comes home if she pushes the issue to early.