As an ordinary worker in Poland, Dave lives, works, sleeps and does stuff. Until one day, when portal appears in front of him with strange voices comming out of it. His curiosity results major changes in place and his body.
Suprised with their non-advanced technology decides to help ponies
whose he knew from TV series, meets up personally with Twilight and other ponies giving his knowledge to achieve his world's technology. The task is not easy, especially if there are no materials which he knew from his former world and his ponyfied body.
Rated teen for language and violence which may or may not be mentioned in future
Constructive criticism and advices are welcome.
Chapters (4)
generic names like dave are becoming cliche at this point
Very interesting. But holy fudge on a fudging sandwich, you really need to edit this. Please. Mercy.
Honest opinion: this is really more of a concept than a fully realized story. I think you should really go back and really edit this and flesh it out; there's hardly any detail. Still an interesting topic, though.
6566992 As you may notice, it's a fresh story, so it's obvious to mark new chapters with [unedited]. But I'll do my best.
seemes a bit gary-stuish but ill track it...
Seriously? Dave?
What even is dis?