"Child...whose voice do you follow? Has your heart dawned to the rain?"
--So here we go. This is my first attempt at writing my own MLP fan fiction. I would really appreciate reviews and constructive (civil) criticisms if you feel there are some aspects I could and should improve on. This might be a pretty long one if I have the work ethic to write it all! Thanks a million!
NOTE: Sorry about the wait for this story. I have been making some serious revisions to the story as of late: for one, this story was originally written in third-person limited, but after experimenting with my writing skills, I have decided to turn this into a first-person story from Spike's view. I know it seems kinda hinky, but that's really the best way for me to write personally. Once again, I'm sorry for keeping you waiting.
~SpiritArsenal
Cover pic by Katlyon
Wow! That was good!
Just a tiny little bit of grammar issues hither and yon, and your word useage is just a hair off in places. If you want an in-depth review, you can PM me if you're interested.
Otherwise, wow, this is an awesome read so far! Good job on your first try, my friend! I expect more from you!
I can testify. Thought of giving you meek support for being new, but hey, you actually impressed me.
Me gusta. I look forward to seeing where you take this!
Nice, Can't wait to see where this goes.