• Member Since 22nd May, 2012
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WritDash


Comments ( 26 )

NICE!!!!!!!! :rainbowkiss:

Nice one, I commend you. Now I'd like to know about those Rarishy nights...

“But yes. I do… you’ve always been the apple of my eye.”

*That awkward feeling when you read pony porn and think of obscure heavy metal. :twilightsheepish:

664396

I often debate on writing about what Rarity was referring to, as well as what Pinkie and Twilight were doing. But then I remember the dozen other story ideas I need to write out first ><

GET R DONE!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::heart:

We must get this sport into the Olympics!

Of all the Clopfics I read, this is by far... the best written, imaginative, seductive... heck, blew my previous expectation to the last fic I read... and pasted it in here... You sir, Have my utmost respect!....

Apple X Dash... best...

And to finish my thoughts on this... here's a music for the two of them Enjoy... Theme for my comment and imaginative mind while reading this.

:ajsmug::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::yay::pinkiesmile::raritywink:

I listened to this for most of the fic, but anyways this was very good. Well done! :ajsmug::rainbowkiss:

668651

Wow. High praise, thank you! I guess I must be considerably more critical on my own work, because in my eyes the writing is kinda... young. Like I think I could re-write it and make it better by half again because this was written some 8 months ago and I've gained more skill and knowledge since. But really, thank you very much for that.

This is pure joy.

I tend to agree, this was very well done. Paced well and very good balance between being descriptive yet tasteful. I think the biggest problem most clopfics have is that they either become vulgar or vague but you wrote yours perfectly.

Why doesn't shit like this happen in real life?

669487 no problem... in fact... this coming from a girl, you just made an achievement. well written and made my mind go... well berserk with imagination... truly. :raritywink:

672000

*Cheers* Super high praise. Being a guy, most of the f/f action comes from my imagination and ridiculous reserves of knowledge of anatomy. I always wondered if something was lost in writing f/f smut as a guy.

672741 take this from a girl... literally, :twilightsmile:

Sparity plz :moustache::heart::raritywink:

681346

Totally a sir, at least I was last time I check... as of three seconds ago. I'm just a fan of Twilight shipping in general, so I'm in luck there... there's tons of it.

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Clearly, you are a man of many words.

Very well written. AppleDash may not be my favorite pairing of all the possible intra-mane 6 ships, but I still like it nonetheless.

rematch
and what happened to the others :applejackconfused:
:fluttershysad:
Other n that .. awesome

Very cute. Applejack can definitely get seductive when she wants to be. Things might be a bit awkward in the morning, though.

Cocky grin? Cocky response? Their both girls, right?

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