Obviously Twilight will be Fucking books or a certain sibling

Discord, you glorious bastard!

Eh, Discord and his weird chaotic ideas... at least it seems to be working so far

I wonder what Rarity is going to do to make a living, now that all the clothing she creates literally vanishes into thin air Perhaps there's a loophole to Discord's spell which allows ponies to wear clothing that actually accentuates their sexy bodies instead of hiding them?

Also, I hope we will get to see some pregnant action later on

"Who else then Discord? "

He's Discord, Discord.

You will never know what he is going to do next.

He's Discord, Discord.

"Giggle, Giggle. Lets have sex."

But mares have autonomy, yes? Nudist Equestria is fun if it isn't some 13-year-old loser's "girls are stupid" fantasy. Though i also vote for sexy clothes being a thing. Bikinis and corsets

6385158 Um, as much as I would love to see bikinis, that is clothes, and this story is about going without clothes.

I for one am kinda hoping for some good ol' paizuri.

Just out of curiosity, how big are Rainbow's breasts? The way you wrote it, it sounds like she has a good size, even more so than usual depiction of Rainbow's anthro/human body type.

You have my interest! Shall read soon

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She can support twice as many foals as any other mare! Raricow!

6385218 I meant to desribe them as "stereotype shattering" but never really got around to it.

6385365 Well, that's good. There are too many flat-chested Rainbow fics out there, in my opinion.

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Flat is justice m8

Was going to question why sex toys hadn't vanish but as I kept reading I saw you addressed their purpose, good stuff!

I'm interested to see where this new competitive approach will lead. The first effects are rather promising so far. More of that please!

Go Rainbow!!!!

Offer the better product, and get more demand lol

You know, I always find it disappointing when the description outlines a promising idea, but then I have to nope the hell out because the story just throws random fetishes at the wall to see what sticks.

Ahh Discord, what a simple lesson to be taught in such a way that will remind every stupid pony about their baser selves.

I came to see eroticism based around nudity rather than sex. I got another fucking clop story.

I am not pleased.

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Alright, so far, I like what I read. Keep it up!
There's a lot more fun to be had I see

6387497 It can vary really. Just like some anthro art even choose to give ponies hooves instead of hands. But generally I try to keep specific descriptions to a minimum and let the reader decide how to picture the many forms anthro ponies take.

Aside from grammar mistakes, I approve of this story. You may want to seek out an editor, though. There are fair number of mistakes throughout these two chapters.

That was just a suggestion that sort of unveils a weakness of the premise. It's a clever idea but sartorial sexiness is a thing. Swimsuit issues and Victoria's Secret.

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Personally, I would like to see some interspecies action, since everypony is nude and probably in heat with all that is going on.

And yeah, you know damn well what I'm referring to, especially since the summary shows that everyone is 18+. Plus Rarity's taken. Thunder's pounded that pussy good enough--all that remains for them is the relationship and the foal (or foals) on the way.

Need I say more?? or maybe or even better: and (I don't have a Luna emoticon)

.....come on, I can't be the only one on here that even looked at this as a possibility??? Plus, considering everyone is 18+, guess what? These three are legal too...Oh what fun...

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You're not. is always nice. Though the "spoken for" part is not absolute; the spell seems designed to corrode inhibitions as it is, so single-partner relationships are probably much less common now. So, perhaps something like Thunderlane is entirely possible.

Thunderlane and Spike sharing a harem could be interesting, no? Certainly never saw these characters together like that.

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Whoa; didn't ever think about that possibility, Derpsy! And it would certainly be unique, wouldn't it? Usually they are seen as rivals, so to see Spike and Thunder as a tag-team would certainly be unexpected.

I'm gonna track this story, because I want to see where this goes. I love exhibitionism.

6389481 Wait... that's not how people have kids? My parents tricked me....

Either way, I always appreciate corrections.

6387207 Nudity is a state of being. Eroticism is a state of mind. The two are not mutually exclusive. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/mlp_rolleyes.png

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It would. But judging from the downvotes, some folks aren't in favour of the idea. I wonder what exactly they dislike about it. Is it the addition of Thunderlane? Or calling it a 'harem'?

6390078 Umm... great sage advice, but I fail to see how that's relevant to my complaint. I was expecting a nudity-based story and got a sex-based one, and I find that disappointing.

when do we get new chapters

6390425 What I'm trying to say is that eroticism based solely on nudity is a fragile concept at best. Nudism is a lifestyle, not a form of pornography or exhibitionism. I guess I'm just having a difficult time understanding why it would be the main premise for a clop fic.

6390458 Umm... Well, I suppose this is based on opinion, but I greatly nudity for pornographic purposes but don't find myself aroused by the act of sex much at all.

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Who cares what they think? That's their problem, not mine.

But I have a hunch that it's because I mentioned that I wanted Spike in it, considering in the summary page, the author said that everybody is 18+. The last time I checked, everybody meant EVERY SINGLE BODY. More than likely, it's probably the ones that don't want Spike show up in future chapters that are behind the downvotes. Yeah, some of it is also because it appears that Sparity ain't happening (since Thunder already have cleaned Rarity's clocks and probably more than once, based on the ending lines of chapter 1), and that's all me--I'm a Sparity fanatic--but it just didn't seem right if there is gonna be a story that has pretty much all sexual prowess that you probably can think and Spike's not in there. Just doesn't seem right.

Long story short, seems like the red is by Spike haters, I get targeted because I like Spike in erotica, and then saw you commented to my initial comment.

If this becomes a male dominated society like "Fall of Equestrian".....
Words will fail me. Mostly because of the obvious 'much more women than men' (clearly stated by Discord of all things), and gender equality..... (And permanent marker all over their bodies for some fucked up reason might happen)

And watch how the princesses 'let go and live a little' later.... (And if I spoiled it somehow, sorry)

6391345 I never intended for this story to reach the whole FoE level, never really got a kick from writing stories where people are forced to have sex against their will. But things will happen with the story that's been established so far with so many more women than men. Kinda in the same spirit as chapter two. I'm not writing for males in Equestria to start seeing themselves as superior or anything (that would be silly, there are just fewer of them) more so everyone just doing what they love in some ways that would not be considered plain.

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We're on the same boat.
Good luck with the story.

6391419 Discord needs to get laid.

I wanna see how Tia and Luna were affected

6392614 Well other writers as well as myself have written our fair share of normal 1 on 1 clopfics. I wanted to try something not as commonly done where sex becomes less of a taboo practice and a more common thing in public, which can be difficult to do without a ridiculous premise. But ridiculous goes well with Discord and the comedy I've wanted to try writing for a while seeing as I've slipped some jokes in my last stories. Not to mention this story is extremely fun for me to write.

And it's not like the characters in the story are blind to how silly of a concept this seems. It is promptly addressed and made even worse in a way I figure Discord would do if for some reason, actually doing this on the show. Part of the reason why I wanted to upload 2 chapters of this story at the get go.

...I came...

6392844 The least offensive of the clopfics that has ever ended up on featured. XD. So good job on that at least. Hopefully you don't turn it into something terrible.

Too many or certain fetishes ruin a story as it ruins believably.

6389311 and the tank was clean

This keeps referring to the ponies in human/humanized terms with passages like:

Luna gave a sigh, with a single wave of the lunar goddess’s hand,

Rarity sprinted over to the window, grasping the curtain with both hands before tearing it from its perch. With a loud rip, the entirety of the cloth successfully tore free, pooling into the fashion pony’s hands.

If this story is supposed to be anthro, it is important for it to be tagged as such so the reader understands that up front.
I got about 1/4th of the way through before I realized they weren't ponies (despite the characters referring to each other as ponies) but instead were "Rainbow Rocks!" style "humans".
I was a bit confused until I got to the part where Rarity had a bra on.

6393468 Well I did tag the story as Anthro and also put it in the description when I first uploaded the story so I'm not sure what else you would want.

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That's odd, I could have sworn it wasn't showing up in the tags a while back.
Sorry about that!

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It would be interesting to see that Celestia and Luna confront Discord to convince him to change everything back. But he tell them he can't because the spell he use can't be reverse for a thousands of centuries and by then pony society would have long adapted to living without clothes or they grown so used to it that they prefer not to reverse the spell.
I imagine that the anthro ponies looks something like this (except they have human-like feet instead of having horse hoofs) and Spike looking like this.
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And I too would to see some interspecies action. It is possible that there are griffons, minotaurs, zebras, Dragons, etc. living in Equestria like Zecora.
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I can see Rarity making some clothing that is more convenient for a nudist like something that doesn't cover the body but it have something like straps that can be use as pockets for holding things or somthing. That looks like somthing like this.

They’ve actually managed to make sex boring!

thats porn in a nutshell....it never changes

Discords next thought, "The stallions need to produce more cum!"