Chrysalis finds out about discord and devises a plan to get him out of his prison and help her take revenge on the mane 6
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Just a simple equine who is extremely sensitive to sun light, and prefer the beauty of the night.
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The changelings "Bob" and "Jeff"? Really?
you try coming up with better names for the changelings.......anyways might work on part two soon
MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The idea to cause a rift between the mane6 might work.
Separate them, send in five changelings to each of the element bearers to replace the others. Let the mindf~yay~kery commence and have them meet in front of discords statue. That should get the sparks flying.
But that would require at least a SAD-tag, maybe even DARK. I don't know if you want to do that and I don't know if you want the bad guys to win this game. 'Cause I have serious doubts that even the EoH could reign in a Chrysalis/Discord-teamup.
LOL I loved the part where the one changeling had the psychotic smile on his face and was thinking of eating the other changeling! XD
Ok, Hey man :p
I REALLY LIKE the concept of this story, I REALLY feel like if you had edited it before post it could have been more popular by now, I thumbed you but you should really think about getting an editor, it is a shame that this story flies under the radar due to simple grammar, IMO stories should not be judged on grammar but rather on Plot and suspense, But sadly that is not how it always works.
IF you had some sort of Spell check you could fix a lot yourself, <firefox> <chrome> Both have them.
1600472 if you can be my editor i would greatly appreciate it!!! are you on steam? also, on a computer but i haven't written anything for awhile so I forgot a lot of grammer I plan on taking a creative writing class next semester to get back on my feet.
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what's yours again?
oops forgot.......