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We are two people who do stuff. One likes ponies and can write, the other is indifferent and knows stuff. Join us for the shenanigans!
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Good idea of a story, but you really need a editor to fix up the glaring issues in both spelling and grammar. Two sentences in and I had to leave in fear of my body being stuck in a permanent cringe.
6364572 Yes, I'm not sure why, I'm usually pretty good at writing; but this story just seems to drain my skills. Sorry.
6364654 Would you like me to look over a few of your chapters for you?
6364934 I would appreciate that. although, being a first-time writer (on FimFiction) I'm not sure how editing works.
6364988 Alright, I'll just send you a link to an edited version once I get a bit of free time. Currently entertaining guests.
6365735 So, are you going to send me the link or not? Its been over a week, If there is something you need me to do, say it.