Amiin, the god of death, has been banished from the world he knows with the sole command of beginning the first Equestrian cycle. Can the god of death learn the true meaning and the magic of friendship, or will this truly be, the end of all things?
Good idea of a story, but you really need a editor to fix up the glaring issues in both spelling and grammar. Two sentences in and I had to leave in fear of my body being stuck in a permanent cringe.
Good idea of a story, but you really need a editor to fix up the glaring issues in both spelling and grammar. Two sentences in and I had to leave in fear of my body being stuck in a permanent cringe.
6364572 Yes, I'm not sure why, I'm usually pretty good at writing; but this story just seems to drain my skills. Sorry.
6364654 Would you like me to look over a few of your chapters for you?
6364934 I would appreciate that. although, being a first-time writer (on FimFiction) I'm not sure how editing works.
6364988 Alright, I'll just send you a link to an edited version once I get a bit of free time. Currently entertaining guests.