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Twyla In Wonderland


Love's always in season and love is love. The world is changing and everyone has a view.

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After being home schooled for being to glitchy and dangerous to be around anyone. Her dad thinks he has fixed her... but he was wrong. First day of High School caused the mess.

Rule 63 Of Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie and Twilight Sparkle.

This was written by my friend sooooooooooooooooo i don't know anymore.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

Her dad thinks he has fixed her... but he were wrong.

:rainbowlaugh:

"I have a right to brake your arm.."

Actually, you kinda don't. A normal punch in the face, if that's even possible for you, maybe, but breaking her arm would fall directly under excessive force.

"I didn't mean to."

Umm...

"I have a right to brake your arm.."

Fuck you, you're either a compulsive liar or a safer version of flippy from happy tree friends. Either way you're clearly too dangerous to allow around normal students.

FOR THE LAST FUCKING TIME I DON'T REMEMBER FUCKING BITING HER!

For the safety of the students Celestia should give you the superhero name Dr Fluttershy and Ms Expelled.

One you can't leave and two she has to finish the day or we'll be sacked.

By whose authority?! Is her father head of the school board or something? She's clearly too dangerous to keep around other students! This is just arbitrary bullshit to keep her around the school.

Fluttershy got up and walked out only for everyone in the office to here a wall brake. "Sorry!"

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It's only fair.

"You've beaten Rainbow Blitz, how?" Spitfire asked.

Cheating via super powers.

" Who cares a new runner for track."

Cheating via super powers.

"Cause you seem like a cool gal. Anyways the question is Why do I find you more attractive then anyone else." They stopped at a red light.

Because so far she's a super duper powered teenage girl who broke a students arm, for which there will be no consequences, is automatically good at everything she's done so far which isn't much, and one of the most popular boys in school fell in love with her pretty much instantly. I wonder what kind of character that sounds like.

His hand moved to Fluttershy's crotch as she moaned a little. "Cute." He said.

Uhh Blitz? You do know Rarity's in the back seat right? She didn't magically teleport while you weren't looking.

"Whatever."

I can see where she gets her disregard for all things human safety, dignity and well being. Also, super pervy bordering on rapey rainbow blitz for no reason besides provoking a new super duper chocolate coated super power.

"So you just got taller and threw him... By the way that was amazing,"

Ah, I missed the part where she tossed him. Way to go Flutterfuckup, if he'd hit his head on something he could have died.

"I've been told your boyfriend is sleeping around with someone who goes to crystal prep."

Random information out of no where that you should have divulged to her a lot sooner.

"How?"

Cheating via super powers.

"No Soarin. Your cheating on me with some nobody called Fleetfoot and when Fluttershy asked you to help her sex need, you went off to do it. Without calling me!" Rarity said almost in tears

Yeah he's a dick for cheating, Rarity, but you set him up with this one. And with a dangerous monster who now has her super duper strong hand around a super fragile normal persons throat. Fuck you bitch, he's a dick, but you're an outright cunt, you don't get to be the victim here.

"What she attacked me!"
"Still no reason to shoot her with a acid bolt!"

Actually it's an EXTREMELY valid reason.

Seriously, everything we've seen so far is her being a bland as fuck character who occasionally shows she's a danger to those around her. I feel absolutely NO sympathy for her.

"You monster!"

YOU sicced her, a literal monster, on him, Rarity! If anyone's to blame for him shooting her it's YOU! Her as well for going along with your petty teenaged bullshit revenge instead of, oh I don't know, dumping him like a rational person!

"Applejack!" She ran and gave her a hug. "It's terrible."

"It's almost the end of the story and you haven't had a scene yet!"

"Soarin shot Fluttershy in the face with a crossbow and the bolt. It was covered in acid!"

If only she had super healing powers that were established in the first chapter. SIIIIIIGH if only!

"What did Fluttershy do to him? Nothing."

She played a part in a petty vengeance trap against him, grabbed him by the throat while transforming into a monster and carried him around presumably still by the throat. Was this fic written by a thirteen year old without the concept of object permanence?

The doctor was covered in blood and some sort of green substance. "I'm sorry we couldn't save her."

I love a happy ending. :)

"I FUCKING HATE THIS WORLD!"

The world span, Applejack ran over to her only to see Rarity fall straight to the ground her skin peeling and burning.

Rarity confirmed for emo vampire.

"So you didn't die?"
"No. It's a story."

I'm torn between bits of bullshit... either:

or

Either way, we still lose.

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